Poetry Madness: Game 6!
Read Game 6 poems. Answer each question below. Remember to explain WHY you chose the winner based on poet's craft (rhyme, line breaks, punctuation, simile/metaphor, word choice, repetition) AND your personal connection to the meaning. Don't forget to write with M.I.N.T.S.!
Your post needs to include the following:
1. What is the meaning of the first poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
2. What is the meaning of the second poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
3. Based on the criteria, which poem did you choose and WHY?
***Please tell me everything you think, but use your best writing.
Your post needs to include the following:
1. What is the meaning of the first poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
2. What is the meaning of the second poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
3. Based on the criteria, which poem did you choose and WHY?
***Please tell me everything you think, but use your best writing.
The first poem ,This Is Just to Say, is about someone saving plums for brekfeat.
ReplyDeleteChoosing Shoes is about a shoe clark asking what shoes the costumers want.
The poem I choose is ,Choosing shoes, I like it because it tell lots of differnt shoes.
The thing that I wrote is for game 5 not games six sorry
Deletei thinkdo you carrot about me is about a kid who opens his heart to the world because it said my heart beats for you. I think the castle in the fire is fierc because it is about a castle and a fire. I think the winner is do you carrot all for me it is a love poem he or she is telling about someone else.
ReplyDeleteDo you carrot all for me,Is about a boy making jokes using food words.
ReplyDeleteAnd The Castle in the fire is about a boy pertaining the stuff he sees is warrior people.
I liked, Do you carrot all for me the best because I thought it was funny.
Do you carrot at all for me is about a man and women who are getting married but the man thinks that the women does not care for him at all.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is about a castle that sets on fire and the lady is in the castle. When the smoke clears the knight has rescued the lady.
I choose The Castle in the Fire as the winner because I like how the author tells a story in a short poem.
The first poem, Do You Carrot All For Me, is about someone loving someone else. It also has wordplay.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle In The Fire, is about a knight fighting a dragon.
I think the winner is, The Castle In The Fire, because its rhyme scheme is, aABCBDEFEGHIHJKAKLMAMNOPO
i think do you carrot about me is about a kid who opens his heart to his wife because it said my heart beats for you. I think the castle in the fire is fierce because it is about a castle and a fire. I think the winner is do you carrot all for me it is a love poem he or she is telling about someone else.
ReplyDeleteThe first poem, Do You Carrot All,is about haw he is asking her if she loves him and is changing the words in to veges.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem,The Castle in the Fire, is about haw they are fighting dragons and how the gate is fire.
I think that Do you Carrot me is the winner because it plays with words so it is clever and funny.
The first poem, Do you carrot all for me?, is about a veggie person asking another veggie person to marry him in unusawel way.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the Fire is about a castle being actacked by a night and a lady, but the dragon scares them away.
I like Do carrot all for me?, because it is really fun and interesting. I also like the creative idea.
The first poem Do You Carrot All For Me is about a person talking about getting married but is saying every thing in fruit form.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem The Castle In The Fire is about a castle on fire and a fight going on and a night saves the lady.
I think the winner is Do You Carrot All For Me I like it because I like the way they us a fruit in every line as a story.
The first poem, Do you carrot all for me?, is about a person who wants to marry a girl and is telling the girl that they'll be a perfect pair. '
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about people who are watching dragons guarding the gate and the castle is on fire. It is also about a knight who ran straight through the dragons and got the lady.
I chose Do you carrot at all for me because it is really funny and has lost of rhyme scheme the rhyme scheme is ABCDEFGH
The first poem,Do you Carrot all for me?, was about a person making up things in reality from veggies and fruits. the theme is that a person is trying to make you laugh.
ReplyDeleteThe next poem, The Castle In The Fire, was about a night who was fighting dragons and he saved his princess. The theme was bravery.
M favorite poem was, Do You Carrot all for me,I liked it because it was a funny story about a guy that was making me laugh.
The Castle in the Fire was good the rhyme scheme was very interesting. It was about a brave man who was slaying the dragons the knight won and got the lady. Do you carrot all for me? Is about a person who loves a bunny and that person doesn't know if it likes him or her back I don't think I know the rhyme scheme.
ReplyDeleteThe first poem, Do you carrot all for me?, is about a person who is asking another person if she cares for him but in way s that involve vegetables.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about a dragon fighting a knight and there is a girl that is in the castle which is on fire. In the end the knight has saved the girl.
The poem I choose is Do you carrot all for me because I think it is a funny poem. Some things I noticed is that it has word play and doesn't rhyme.
The first poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about how a castle is in the middle of the war.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Do You Carrot all for me, is about how a fruit is asking another fruit too marry him.
I choose Do you Carrot all for me because I liked how it used it's play on words.
The first poem, Do you carrot all for me?, is about a man who is telling a lady he loves to get married,and that his heart beats for her, and has vegetables instead of the real word.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about a knight who is fighting dragons and there is a princess in the castle that is burning down then, the knight comes to save her and the run off on a horse.
I choose Do you carrot all for me?, because it is a funny poem with sentences like: My heart beets for you, with your turnip nose, and your radish face, you are a peach.That is why I like, Do you carrot all for me?
The Castle in the Fire was good the rhyme scheme was very interesting. It was about a brave man who was slaying the dragons the knight won and got the lady. Do you carrot all for me? Is about a person who loves a bunny and that person doesn't know if it likes him or her back I don't think I know the rhyme scheme. I think Do you carrot all for me won because she really appreciates her bunny.
ReplyDeleteThe first story,"The Castle In The Fire," was about a knight fighting the dragons guarding the gate and the knight came for the lady and they road off.
ReplyDeleteThe second story ,"Do You Carrot All For Me," was really funny and they were talking all about vechtibles.
My favorite story was the Do You Carrot All For Me because I thought is was really funny. And I liked how it was about vechtibles and that they were vechtibles.
The first poem, Do You Carrot All For Me, is about someone who loves someone and they are using vegetables for different words.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle In The Fire, is about dragons who are gaurding a castle and then fighting the knight and the knight won.
My favorite poem is, The Castle Of Fire, because it was very interesting war.
The first poem was, The Castle of The Fire, is about a knight fighting dragons and guarding a gate. Later in the poem he met a lady and took her away with him.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Do You Carrot All For Me, is about a boy who was talking about vegtibles in a funny way.
My choice would be Do You Carrot All For Me, because it is really funny and made me laugh.
The Castle In The Fire is about a knight fighting dragons. Do You Carrot All For Me is about fruit and vegetables. I think that the winner should be Do You Carrot All For Me, because I liked the puns.
ReplyDeleteDo you Carrot at all for me is about a person asking a question and replacing words with names of fruits and vetgtables.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is about a castle that's on fire and the princess is in the castle. So a knight gose to rescue her, and they come out of the fire together.
I choose Do you Carrot at all for me because I think it's a funny and entertain poem that should win.
I think Do You Carrot All For Me is about a carrot you really likes a girl vegetable and wants to marry her.
ReplyDeleteI think The Castle In The Fire is about a castle on fire and a night comes in and saves the day.
I think Do You Carrot All For Me should win because it was funny and nice because the carrot was saying how much he loved the girl vegetable.
I think Do You Carrot All For Me had a lot of word play, which I found enjoyable. I also think it was about a girl who wanted to marry someone because in the end it said "Lettuce Marry." It also said "My heart beets for you."
ReplyDeleteI think The Castle in the Fire is about two brothers who imagen a castle, war, and love story in the fire place. I noticed it was easy to pick up on the rythem when I was reading The Castle in the Fire.
I think Do You Carrot All For Me should win because I found it more enjoyable then The Castle in the Fire. I also enjoyed the word play in Do You Carrot All For Me.
The first story, The castle in the fire, is about a knight who started to slay a dragon. In the end, he won the lady.
ReplyDeleteThe second story, Do you Carrot All for me, is about a fruit telling another fruit how much he cares for her, with funny sentences, like,"Weed make a swell pear," and many more funny quotes.
I chose Do you Carrot all for me, because there were many entertaining sentences, and, well, it was just enjoyable!
Do You Carrot all for me is about a boy asking his mom if she cares for him and he uses vegetable word play.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle In The Fire is about 2 people watching a battle at a castle and describing it.
I choose, Do You Carrot All For Me, because it used a lot of veggie word play and it was funny.
The first poem, Do You Carrot All foe Me, is about someone who likes another person but does not know if they like them too.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is about a lady stuck in a castle that is on fire and a knight try's to save the lady then they ride away together.
I choose ,Do You Carrot All for Me, because I like the veggie word play and it had very good descripiton.
DeleteDo you carrot for me is about is about a carrot and a girl veggie.
ReplyDeleteThe castle in the fire is about a night fight a dragon.
I choose the castle in the fire because it was very interesting.
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DeleteI thought, the Castle In The Fire, is about a knight who kiddnaps the priness and they fall in love.
ReplyDeleteI thought, Do You Carrot For Me, is abou a carrot perposing to another carrot.
I like, do You Carrot For Me, because it is cute and meanig full
The first poem I read was "Do you Carrot all for me." This poem used word play in it a lot in the poem.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem I read was "The Castle in the Fire." The poem used rhymes, rhyme schemes, and rhythm. I also liked it because it told about the things that happened when the castle was in the fire.
I think The Castle in the Fire should win because I liked how it used the rhythm and rhymes. I think this inspired me more than Do you Carrot all for me.
do you carrot for me is about a carrot and a veggie girl
ReplyDeleteThe castle on fire is abou a nite that fights a dragon
i liked do you carrot for me more because it was a cute story
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ReplyDeleteDo you carrot all for me is about a guy who uses word play to ask someone to marry him.
ReplyDeleteThe castle in the fire is about a knight who fought dragons to save a lady.
I chose do you carrot all for me because it was a funny poem and I liked the word play.
Do you Carrot all for Me is an adorable poem about someone ( I imagine a rabbit) asking their lover what their feelings for him is.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is a classic medieval love/fairy tale story telling of a knight who saves a princess.
I think that Do you Carrot all for Me should win because of the adorable puns. I also love it because it reminds me of my rabbit.
Do you Carrot all for Me is an adorable poem about someone ( I imagine a rabbit) asking their lover what their feelings for him is.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is a classic medieval love/fairy tale story telling of a knight who saves a princess.
I think that Do you Carrot all for Me should win because of the adorable puns. I also love it because it reminds me of my rabbit.
Do you Carrot all for Me is an adorable poem about someone ( I imagine a rabbit) asking their lover what their feelings for him is.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is a classic medieval love/fairy tale story telling of a knight who saves a princess.
I think that Do you Carrot all for Me should win because of the adorable puns. I also love it because it reminds me of my rabbit.
Do You Carrot All For Me is a love poem someone wrote to another person. The Castle In The Fire is about a knight in shining armor coming to save his true love from the dragon.
ReplyDeleteI like Do You Carrot All For Me Because it is funny and briefer than the other one.
"Do you carrot all for me?" is about someone expressing his/her feelings of love for someone else using fruit and vegetable names to make it funny.
ReplyDelete"The Castle in the Fire" is about a princess being rescued by a knight from a dragon which was guarding the castle.
I liked the second poem, "The Castle in the Fire," because it told a more interesting story, and it rhymed better.
Some One is about a person describing what it is like to hear a knocking at your door and you don't know who it is.
ReplyDeleteLife Doesn't Frighten Me At All is about a brave man who is bragging about how he is fearless and how he can scare away all the frightening things.
I choose, Some One because I could make a clear mental movie and it personified a beetle. It also repeated the words SOME ONE and ONLY. Lastly, I could really feel what the character was feeling and I was put in the characters shoes.
The first poem ,"The New Suit," was about a girl and she wore a pretty suit and shoes. And then when she go to the party people said don't eat Ice Cream it might drip. So she said next party I go to I am going to wear old cloths so I can eat what ever I want.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem ,"How To Eat A Poem," is about someone saying you don't have to be polite and just dig in. And to lick your drink and to pick up your food with your fingers.
My favorite poem was ,"The New Suit," because I have worn something and I was really scard because I thought I would get something on it. And that same thing happend on one of our field trips because i was wearing my white converse and we were doing things in the garden ware it is all dirty.