Read the poems for Game 6. Answer each question below. Remember to explain WHY you chose the winner based on poet's craft (rhyme, line breaks, punctuation, simile/metaphor, word choice, repetition) AND your personal connection to the meaning. Don't forget to write with M.I.N.T.S.!
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1. What is the meaning of the first poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
2. What is the meaning of the second poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
3. Based on the criteria, which poem did you choose and WHY?
***Please tell me everything you think, but use your best writing.
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Your post needs to include the following:
1. What is the meaning of the first poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
2. What is the meaning of the second poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
3. Based on the criteria, which poem did you choose and WHY?
***Please tell me everything you think, but use your best writing.
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The poem,”This Is Just to Say,” by William Carlos Williams, is an apology by the author about eating someone’s plums. The mood is humorous and the poem is very ridiculous. It is teaching people a lesson to not touch or eat other people’s things without asking.
The poem,”Choosing Shoes,” by Frida Wolfe, is about a person who is trying to choose the perfect show but can’t decide on a pair. The poem doesn’t really have a mood but it is teaching us that nothing is perfect like everything else.
I chose,”Choosing Shoes,” as the winner because I liked how it showed an example that everything is not perfect because the person couldn’t find the perfect shoes. I thought that was very interesting how the author choose shoes as an example. Anyhow, I liked the rhyme scheme (AAAB) because it went perfectly with the poem. It also had a simile when it said,”Stump-along-like-that shoes.” This poem should definitely be the winner.
The first poem "Do you carrot all about me" is about people saying do you care about me.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem "The castle in the fire" is about a castle and the things they have in the castle and outside of it.
I like "The castle in the fire" because it has a ryhme schem of ABCB, and it has onemonopiea of CRASHED, I like this poem a lot
-JACK
"The castle in the fire" is about a fight with the dragon and the knight.
ReplyDelete"Do you carrot all for me is about a man talking about a girl.
I choose "The castle in the fire" because it has alliteration. For example, "Ladies lovely" Also, it has ryme sheme of "ABCB." I think "the castle in the fire" is the winner!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lizzie B.
"Do you carrot all for me" is about a carrot asking someone if they care about them,and then saying that they should get married.
ReplyDelete"The Castle in the Fire" is about a person watching a knight save a pretty lady from a castle that had a dragon as a guard.
I liked "The Castle in the Fire" better because it had alliteration.For example,"guard the gate".Also,it had repetition.For example,"knight".That is why I think "The Castle in the Fire" is a better poem.
-Sarah Fox
The first poem "Do you carrot all for me?" is about a person in love and likes using vetchebles in his words. The second poem "The Castle of Fire," is about a knight riding into battle a dragon. I choose "The castle of fire," as the winner because it had good imagery. I like how I could imagine the knight riding up on his horse. The poem also had good onomatopoeia,like "crashed." I think "The castle of fire," should be the winner!-Tilly
ReplyDelete"Do you all carrot for Me?", is about somebody who likes another person and wrote a poem using vetagele related figures of speech.
ReplyDelete"Castle in the Fire," is about someone standing below a castle and looking up at all the parts and see a lady and a knight riding out. The poem I like the best is "The castle in the Fire," because I think the lesson is much better than the other poem. I like the (ABCB) rhyme scheme in the first poem and the alliteration that says,"Set out to guard the gate". "Castle in the Fire" is the winner.
Mason W.
"The Castle in the Fire" is about a mythical story about how dragons and knights were fighting each other.
ReplyDeleteThe poem," Do you Carrot at all for me?," is about someone who likes someone else and telling them by using names of vegetables.
The poem," The Castle in the Fire," is my favorite. One reason I like it is because it has a rhyme scheme of ABCB and so on. Another reason I like it is because it has alliteration. For example, the text says," While we watched in wonder." I really like the poem," The Castle in the Fire."
-Harper
The first poem," The Castle In The Fire," is about a knight who goes into a castle to save a lovely lady, and the castle is on fire.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem," Do you Carrot All For Me," is about someone who loves someone else, but they don't know if the other person loves them back.
I choose the first poem," The Castle In The Fire," as the winner because I like how the author uses alliteration when he says," Then, while we watched in wonder." Also, I like them rhyme scheme of the first stanza, ABCB. I choose," The Castle In The Fire," as the winner.
- Anna Byrns
The first poem,"Do you carrot all for me" is about love between vegetables.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem,"The Castle in the Fire" is about a fight in the air.
I choose,"The Castle in the fire" as the winner because it is a lot more interesting.It has alliteration when it saids,"A lady's lovely face." It also has a rhyme scheme of A,B,C,B ," The Castle in the Fire" is the clear winner!
- George
"Do You Carrot All For Me?" is about comparing somebody to different types of food and vegetables.
ReplyDelete"The Castle In The Fire" is about a castle that is on fire.
I think the winner is ""The Castle In the Fire" because because it uses alliteration. For example, in the sentence, " While we watched in wonder", there was alliteration. Also, it has a good rhyme scheme. The rhyme scheme pattern was ABCB etc.That is why I chose "The Castle In The Fire" as the winner.
Lucy KAte
DeleteThe first poem, "Do You Carrot all for me?" is about using vegetables to form different words. The second poem,"The Castle in the Fire" is about a town fighting a fire. I chose "The Castle in the Fire" as the winner. I chose that because it has good rhyme scheme. The rhyme scheme is ABCB etc. It also has alliteration. For example, the poem says,"Then, while we watched in wonder."The Castle in the Fire" is the clear winner!
ReplyDeleteCHARLIE
The first poem, "The castle in fire," is about knight who rescues a princess and kills the dragon.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, "Do you carrot all for me," is about some one who likes another person and they are using vegetables in their words.
I chose "Do you carrot all for me," as the winner because it has personification. For example, "Your radish face." Also, it has metaphor. For example, "You are a peach."I think "Do you carrot all for me" should win.
-Walker
The poem,"Do You Carrot all for me",is about somebody saying how much they love them by using vegtables in their sentences. The poem,"the Castle in the Fire", is about a lady who was stuck in the fire with a dragon and a night came and saved her. The poem,"Do You Carrot all for me", is my favorite because I like the Metaphor. For example, "You are a peach". I also like the rhyme scheme. Foe example, ABEFGAG. This is why it should be the winner.
ReplyDelete-Hayes
''Do you Carrot all for me'' is about how the author is talking about vegetables in a love letter way. Also, how he loves the other lady. For example, it says,'' Lettuce Mary.'' ''The Castle on Fire'' is about a Lady in a window frame and the knight is trying to rescue the lady. The knight fights a dragon and the knight wins and rescues the lady. I choose ''Do you Carrot all for me'' as the Winner. It has imagery. For example, all the lines have to do with food. For example,it says,''Lettuce Mary.'' That reminds me of Imagery. Also, for its rhyme scheme. for example, A,B,C...ect. ''Do you Carrot all for me'' is the clear winner!
ReplyDelete-Lucy
"Do you carrot at all for?" me is about a person asking if someone cares for them using the names of foods. "The castle in the fire" is about a castle burning down and a knight rescues a princess from the castle. I prefer "Do you carrot all for me?" because it was funny and because of the metaphor "you are a peach" also because of the personification "radish face" I think this is just a better poem chase
ReplyDeleteThe "castel and the fire" is about someone someone seeing a dragon a castel, and a night that is trying to save a woman.
ReplyDelete"Do You Carrot All for Me?" is about a vegetable writing to another vegetable.
I think "Do you carrot all or me" is the winner because I think it is funny. Also most of it is personification and there is a
metaphor " You Re a peach".that is why I think "do you Carrot all for me" is the winner
kATE
The first poem "The Castle in the Fire" is about a fight and a castle on fire.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem "Do You Carrot All For Me?" is a love poem using veggies.
I chose "Do You Carrot All For Me?" as the winner. I chose that because it uses veggies as normal words (Such AS beets=beats and carrot=care at). I also like the rhyme scheme (A,B,C,D ect.). "Do You Carrot All For Me?" is the clear winner.
-Carter
"The Castle in the Fire" is about 2 kingdoms that are in the despair of war. " Do you carrot all for me" is about someones poem that ended up being a pick up line. I liked " Do you carrot all for me" better because of the metaphors like the author writes "And your radish face." It uses Imagery by "Heart beets for you"
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"Do You carrot all about me?"is a love poem. It talks through veggies.
ReplyDelete"The Castle in the fire is about a night killing a dragon.
"Do You Carrot All About Me?" is the winner because it uses fun wordplay for example,"My heart beets for you."I also like the metaphor it is "You are a peach."It is the clear winner.
-Wynn😄
"Do you carrot all for me" is about a boy wanting to mary someone.
ReplyDelete"The castle in the fire" is about a knight saving a girl from dragons.
I choose "Do you carrot all for me" as the winner because it uses metaphors and personafalacation.Here's the metaphor,"You are a peach." Here is the personafalacation,"And your radish face.""Do you carrot all for me" is the winner to me.
Miles
The first poem, “Do You Carrot All For Me?,” is about a person saying that they would make a perfect couple, and is saying how beautiful she is. While he is using vegetables in each line. The second poem, “The Castle In The Fire,” is about a castle in a fire surrounded by andirons (the dragons). A knight goes in to rescue a lady. When the smoke is lifted they could see that the knight was riding away with a lady. When the smoke had lifted the knight was riding away with the lady. For me, the winner is “Do You Carrot All For Me?” I liked how the poem puts a vegetable in each line. I also like how it has personification. One example is, “And your radish face.” I choose “Do You Carrot All For Me?,” as the winner.
ReplyDelete--Avery
“The Castle in the Fiire” Is talking about a castle on fire from a dragon.
ReplyDelete“Do you Carrot all for me” is about someone talking about someone sweet.
I like “Do you carrot all for me” better because of the rhyme scheme. A,B,A,C,A,A,D,D. And the metaphor. “You are a peach”
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DeleteThe “Castle on Fire”, is about a knight fighting off dragons. The poem, “Do you carrot all for me”, is about someone who is asking do you care about me? I liked “The Castle on Fire '' the best. I liked the ABCB rhyme scheme. I also liked the alliteration in the poem. For example, A ladie’s Lovely face.” “I chose the castle on fire” for the winner. Henry W.
ReplyDeleteThe first poem is called “The Castle in the Fire.” “The Castle In The Fire” is about a person watching from a window at a knight saving a lovely lady from the dragon. The knight saved the lady and they rode away on a horse together. The second poem is called “Do You Carrot All For Me?” “Do you Carrot All For Me?” is about a man talking to a woman and how he loves her, but he was using food words in replace of the real words.
ReplyDeleteAs the winner I chose “Do You Carrot All For Me?” I chose this poem because of its personification. For example, “Weed make a swell pear.” I think it uses this writer's craft because it uses food instead of the words we would usually use. This poem also uses metaphors. For example,”You are a peach.” The author is saying that she Is “a peach”. I think poem is truly the winner.
-Georgia
I think “Do You Carrot All For Me” is about a guy asking a girl if she likes him.
ReplyDeleteI think “The Castle and the Fire '' is about a knight going into a castle to save a person.
I think “The Castle and the Fire” is the winner. It had a rhyme scheme of a, b, c, b. It also had alliteration which was “ We watched in wonder”. I think this poem is the winner.
from the words of liam
The first poem, “The Castle in the fire” is about some people guarding the castle and they see that the turett window was open and a lovely lady’s face was up there. With alot of dragons. And then she was saved!
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, “Do you Carrot all for me,?” is about a man that wants to marry a woman and is talking with word play.
I like “Do you Carrot all for me?” Because I like the repetition. For example, the word ``Your''. I also like the clever word play.with food. I think that this should be the winning poem.
- Livi Cox
The first poem “Castle in the fire” is about a fire in a castle and a knight fighting off a dragon to save the princess. I liked how I could imagine the knight on his horse going to go save the princess.The second poem “Do you carrot all for me” is about foods talking to each other. I liked the personification of all the foods. I chose “ CASTLE IN THE FIRE” as the winner. I chose that because it made more sense. I also liked it because of the pattern of the rhyme scheme (ABCB). I also liked how I could imagine the knight saving the princess from the fire. I choose “Castle in the fire” as the winner.
ReplyDelete-CARSON NEUMANN!!!!!!!!!!!
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Delete"Do you even carrot about me" is about a man using veggies and fruit to replace his words. "The castle in the fire is about a man describing a fight of a night and a dragon to us. I think the winner is "the castle in the fire" one reason is it had "Onomatopoeia" ex: in the poem it said Ahhhh. Another reason is it also had alliteration of Guard the gate. I chose this as the winner. Ben
ReplyDeleteThe first poem "Some One" is about some one who came to he door.
ReplyDeleteThe Second poem " Life Dosent frieghten me" is about a boy that life dosent scare him.
I like "Some One" because it has repitition of "Only". It has onemenopia of "screech". I think "Some One" is better. JACK JACK JACK
“The Castle in the Fire” is about a castle in a fire. It is also about andirons that are shaped like dragons in front of the castle in the fire.
ReplyDelete“Do you carrot all for me?” is about someone telling someone something but using fruit.
I like “Do you carrot all for me?” better. I like “Do you carrot all for me?” better because I like how they use fruit. I like the rhyme scheme, ABCDEFGH. I also like the personification of using fruit. I like “Do you carrot all for me?” better.
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"Do you carrot all for me" is about someone who is telling someone else they love them using vegetables to tell them.
ReplyDelete"the castle in the fire" is about a castle a beautiful one to and how the andrions guard the castle.
I choose "Do you carrot all for me because I like the personification when they take all the vegetables and make them into human words like lettuce let us and the imagrey when it says my heart beets.
-Jane
“Do You Carrot All For Me” is a poem about someone who is not sure if his crush likes him but he does.
ReplyDelete“The Castle Of Fire” is about a dragon who is guarding a lady. Then, a night saves the day.
I chose “The Castle Of Fire'' for the winner. It has alliteration. For example, one line has garud and gate. One other reason is rhyme scheme. For example, one scheme is ABCB. The clear winner is “The Castle Of Fire” is the clear winner.
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"The Cast|e in the Fire" is about a cast|e on fire.
ReplyDelete"Do You Carrot A|| for Me" is about someone who |oves somebody e|se.
I chose "The Cast|e in the Fire". It has a rhyme scheme. It has a metophor, The andirons were dragons".
I read "Do you carrot all for me". It is about someone having food like qualities. I also read "the castle in the fire". It is about a castle in a fight with a dragon.I chose "Do you carrot all for me". I like the rhyme scheme ABCB. I like the personification your turnip nose. I think it should win.
ReplyDeleteFrench-da boi
Do you carrot all for me somebody asking to marry them using vegtabowls. There is a smile.
ReplyDeleteThe castle in the fire it is talking about is the dragon. There is onomatopoeia in this poem.
Over all I liked castle in the fire better I thought it was more insustring for me. I thought this poem had more detail I liked the onomatopoeia in the poem.
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