You will need to read The Falling Star and Do you carrot all for me?
Your response needs to be a paragraph with at least 3 sentences, but you do not need to summarize the meaning of the poems. Instead, your response should include the following information:
- Which poem's meaning is more important to you?
- What personal connection can you make?
- Which poet's craft do you enjoy more? Poet's craft can include repetition, word choice, rhyme, simile/metaphor, etc.
I choose The Falling Star because it has a deeper meaning. For example the meaning is that you should never have a dream then let go of it.
ReplyDeleteI can make a connection to this by saying I have some dreams and then I forget about them.
I like this poem because the writer's craft. For example I saw alliteration in the part"I saw a star slide down the sky" with the letter s. Also the rhyme scheme is AABBCC and I think that that is cool. I also saw couplets throughout the whole thing. That's why I chose The Falling Star.
The poem that has a deeper meaning to me is Do you Carrot all for me. I liked it because it is a silly poem about a boy who is using vegetables to describe how he feels.
ReplyDeleteI also liked this poem because I can make a connection. Sometimes I ask my parents the same thing, "Do you carrot all for me?"
I also liked this poem because It uses a lot of poet's craft. For example, it uses a metapher,"With your turnip nose." This is why I liked Do you Carrot all for me?
I liked the metaphor too!
DeleteI pick the falling star because it had a lot of meaning to the poem. I also like it because it had so many good rhyme to the poem.
ReplyDeleteMy connection is that I should just follow my star
The other reason I pick the falling star is because It had a good rhyme scheme (AABCCA). I also liked it because it says, "I saw a star slide down the sky". The other reason I pick The falling Star is because it tells me to follow my dreams. that is why I picked The Falling star.
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ReplyDeleteI chose DO YOU CARROT ALL FOR ME over THE FALLING STAR because it had more meaning to me and I liked the poet's craft a lot.
ReplyDeleteOne connection that I can make with this poem is that I love fruits and vegetables.
Some poet's craft I noticed was word play. For example when the author said," WEED make a swell PEAR." he meant it to be like "WE'D make a swell PAIR". He also changed," My heart BEATS for you" to " My heart BEETS for you." That is all of the poet's craft that I noticed.
That is why I chose DO YOU CARROT ALL FOR ME as the winner for this final four round.
I loved both of these poems, but if I had to choose one I would say The Falling Star. I liked it because it had a deeper meaning to me. I also liked how the author used couplets. For example "I saw a star slide down the sky, blinding the north as it went by." I can make a connection to this poem because I love looking for falling stars. I also noticed that the author used alliteration, and personification all in one sentence. For example "I saw a star slide down the sky." This is why I chose The Falling Star.
ReplyDeleteThe winning poem is The falling Star because it tells about how some things are to beautiful to be bought and if you don't take it in then it will be gone.
ReplyDeleteI have a connection with the poem. I have seen a falling star.
I also like the rhyme scheme which is AABBCC. I also like how it has Repetition with the word too. It also has Alliteration with "star slide."
This is why I think Falling star is the winning poem.
The poem I liked better was Do you carrot all for me? because it uses writers craft. The poem uses metaphors. For example, in the poem it says, "You are a peach."
ReplyDeleteI also liked the poem better because it has a deeper meaning.For example,getting married has a deep meaning.
Lastly, I chose this poem because I can make a connection to it. For example, I watch a show that is about getting married.
That is why I chose Do you carrot all for me?
I chose The Falling Star because it has very good meaning how a star can make someone very happy. I also like it because it talks about shooting stars that people wish from.
ReplyDeleteI like the personification in The Falling Star because I like how it says "I saw a star slide down the sky." That is why I chose The Falling Star.
What is your connection?
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DeleteI am going to choose Do you carrot all for me ? for my winner . It is because has great personification . For example, We'll make a swell pair. I have a connection to this poem. I like to call people weird things too. Another reason I like this poem is because it has good wordplay . For example , Lettuce marry. That is great wordplay. This is why I like the poem Do you carrot all for me ?
ReplyDeleteIt was a tough decision, but I chose THE FALLING STAR. I chose it because it had meaning. I liked DO YOU CARROT ALL FOR ME because it was a funny, entertaining poem.
ReplyDeleteI can also make a connection with THE FALLING STAR, and it is that I like to watch falling star fall in the sky, there for one second, gone the next. It is only good for wishing on.
I noticed writer's craft too. For example, alliteration. There is some in the first line. "I saw the star slide down the sky. Also, there is personification in that same line. Stars don't actually slide down the sky. One more thing is there is three couplets, and a rhyme scheme. This is why I chose THE FALLING STAR as the winner.
The poem which had more meaning was The Falling Star because I want to see a falling
ReplyDeleteThe poem I can make a connection to is The Falling Star because I like to learn about space.
The poet's craft I enjoyed was The Falling Star because it uses alliteration. For example, " I saw a star slide down the sky."
I chose The Falling Star.
I choose The Falling Star as the winner because it has deeper meaning to me. I enjoyed it because it is about a person who sees this star as the most beautiful thing.
ReplyDeleteI can also make a connection with The Falling Star. I have seen something too beautiful to sell or put a price on.
The final reason I enjoyed The Falling Star is because of the writers craft. An example of a couplet in this poem is, "Good only to make wishes on
And then forever gone. There is also rhyme scheme. It is AABBCC.
I like Do you carrot all for me? the best because it is unique in a way that it does not have a rhyme scheme, but is not a haiku, and the poem is also really funny because someone is expressing their feelings in different types of fruits and vegetables.
ReplyDeleteI don't have connection with this poem, but I like the writer's/poet's craft. There is obviously a lot of wordplay with the vegetables, and there are metaphors (with your turnip nose, and your radish face, you are a peach.
I chose The Falling Star because it had a deeper meaning, for example, it is saying if you have a dream, never let go, it also is saying how beautiful and rare falling stars are.
ReplyDeleteI can make a connection to this when I saw a meteor shower, I thought it was really beautiful, and this poem reminds me of that moment.
Some poets craft I saw in this poem was rhyme scheme (AABBCC) There was also three couplets in the poem. One more reason why I chose The Falling Star because it had alliteration :I saw a star slide down the sky. This is why I chose the Falling Star.
My connection with The Falling Star is that I like to watch shooting stars at night.
ReplyDeleteI think Do You Carrot All For Me has a deeper meaning to me because I like the way that they used vegtables to say things to one another for example "my heart beets for you" there is metaphors in this poem for example "you are a peach" cause you can't realy be a peach.
ReplyDeletethat is why i think Do You Carrot All For Me should win.
I choose The Falling Star as the winner. I thought it had a deeper meaning then Do you Carrot all for me. The Falling Star was very good and very compatinot.
ReplyDeleteThe connection I made with The Falling Star was when the writer said "Good to make wishes on" because when I see a falling star I think what a good thing to see because your wishes have a chance of happening and it also reminds me of when don't take things for granted, and don't let go.
I enjoyed that the poem had couplets, I also liked the rhyme scheme AABBCC. I also liked personification. It had repetition for the word and. It had alliteration when it said "Star Slide." That is why I choose The Falling Star.
Between The Falling Star and Do You Carrot All For Me I choose The Falling Star because it has more meaning to me.
ReplyDeleteA connection is that I always wish on stars too just like the person in the poem.
A poet's craft I enjoy more is rhyme scheme and couplets. For example, the rhyme scheme is AABBCC, and some couplets are sky bye, hold sold, and on gone.
I choose The Falling Star as the winner.
I choose The Falling Star because it has a deeper meaning. The meaning is that some things are pretty but nothing can last forever.
ReplyDeleteI can make a connection because I have seen a shooting star and they are very quick but pretty. They don't last forever.
In The falling Star I see three couplets and the ryhme scheme is AABBCC.
I choose DYCAFM or Do you Carrot all for me because even though It had less deep, I still like how punny it is.
ReplyDeleteThe connection I made was when I was 3 to 5 years old I couldn't say words so they always sounded like bad puns. For example, David why are you lion.
The poet's craft I enjoyed most was the wordplay. I enjoyed this the most because 1, it was the only poet's craft. And 2, I really like puns. The example of wordplay is, "If we cantaloupe lettuce marry." Tis' why I chose Do you Carrot all for me.
I choose falling star because it had a lot meaning to it.
ReplyDeleteI also make a connection because I like to watch stars.
I also enjoyed the couplets such as " I saw a star slide down the sky blinding the north as it went by.
I choose The Falling Star. Because it has more of a meaning for an example it is telling you to hold on to thing before the gone.
ReplyDeleteThe connection that I can make with this story is that I sometimes don't want thing, but when I change my mind the chance is already gone.
There is some writer's craft in The Falling Star for an example there are lots of couplets here is one example: To burning and to quick and to hold, Too lovely to be bought or sold. There is also lots of alliteration, but again I am only going to tell one example: I saw a star slide down the sky. Keep on reading because there is still more writer's craft in this poem. There is personification for an example: Too burning and to quick to hold is personification. Lastly there is Imagery such as: Too burning and to quick to hold, you might feel like you are holding something.
That is why I choose The Falling Star.
I choose Do You Carrot all for Me as the winner because I like funny and sweet poems.
ReplyDeleteI can make a connection to the poem because I like using word play. I also like writing funny poems.
I noticed poet's craft Do You Carrot all for Me, such as the metaphor "You are a peach." That is why I choose Do You Carrot all for Me as the winner.
I choose Do you carrot all for me because it is funny and because it is using vegetables to show how some me feels
ReplyDeleteMy connection is that is that I Have friends that can make me laugh when I am sad.
Another reason I like Do at carrot all for me is that it has a lot of poet's craft . For example "we would be a great pear.".
I think Do You Carrot All For Me is the winner because It was very funny. It is about a boy who cares about someone.
ReplyDeleteMy connection is that I like Carrots.
I liked this poem because it had great poet craft. For example, it had metaphors like"you are a peach" that is why I like this poem better.
I choose The Falling Star because it means you only have one chance to do something.
ReplyDeleteI can make a connection by most times I wish I had another chance to do something, because sometimes I don't choose wisely.
I like how it has writers craft. It has good alliteration I saw a star slide down the sky. That is why I choose The Falling Star.
I choose the Falling Star as my favorite poem because I think it has a deeper meaning. For example, it talks about how you shouldn't waist special moments.
ReplyDeleteI also like this poem because I can make a connection to it. In my life I try not to waste special moments either.
Finally, I liked this poem because it had poet's craft. For example, it had rhyme scheme [AABBCC]. It also had repetition, [Too burning and too quick to hold. Too lovely to be bought or sold.] This is why I chose the Falling Star as my favorite poem.
I choose as the winner to be Do you carrot all for me? Because it means more to me than The falling star.
ReplyDeleteI can make a connection to Do you carrot all for me? For example, When I am lonely I feel like nobody cares at all for me.
I also like this poem because it used a metaphor "You are a peach." That is why I chose Do you carrot all for me?
I think the Falling Star should win because it has a better meaning. I think the meaning is you have to take thing for granted. You can Not let it go.
ReplyDeleteA connection I made with Falling Star is I have seen a shooting star and one second it is there and the other second it is gone.
The poet's craft in Falling Star. There is rhyme scheme (AABBCC). There is also alliteration for example, I saw a star slide down the sky. This is why I think Falling star should win .
I pick, Do you carrot all for me? as the winner, the meaning is, someone asking if someone cares at all for them and if they can marry. I can connect to Do you carrot all for me? because I enjoy poems with wordplay. Some poet's craft is the metaphor, "You are a peach." That is why I choose Do you carrot all for me?
ReplyDeleteThe Falling Star means more to me than Do you carrot all for me? because it is about someone seeing a falling star, and realizing how priceless it truly is.
ReplyDeleteI can make a connection to The Falling Star because I think that you should always take time to realize how priceless something is.
In The Falling Star, there is couplets, alliteration, and rhyme scheme. For example, "Good to only make wishes on, And then forever to be gone." and " I saw a star slide down the sky." The rhyme scheme is AABBCC.
I choose The Falling Star as the winner.
I think the winner should be Do you Carrot All For Me ? Because it is saying that instead of saying your expressions in words it is saying them in vegetables ,and fruits.
ReplyDeleteMy connection for Do You Carrot or Me ? is that I love vestibules ,and I love fruits so that is another reason why picked Do You Carrot All For Me.
In Do You Carrot All For ME ? I loved the poet's craft in the poem but my favorite is the couplets and that is all the reason why I picked this poem.
I like Do you carrot all for me.
ReplyDeleteI has a deeper meaning to me because the author is expressing their feelings, for example, it says, "My heart beets for you".
I also like it because the author uses fruits and vegetables to substitute regular words, like it says in the poem, "Weed make a swell pear".
The author uses metaphors. For example, in the text, it says, "You are a peach."
I like Do you carrot all for me.
I choose Do you Carrot All for me because it had more meaning. For example, it is telling about two people who have a love but the tell it in veggie.
ReplyDeleteThe connection I made with Do You Carrot All for Me is I really like fruits and veggies.
The writer's craft in this poem is metaphors. For example, "You are a peach.
This is why I like Do you Carrot all for me.