Read Game 6 poems. Answer each question below. Remember to explain WHY you chose the winner based on poet's craft (rhyme, line breaks, punctuation, simile/metaphor, word choice, repetition) AND your personal connection to the meaning. Don't forget to write with M.I.N.T.S.!
Your post needs to include the following:
1. What is the meaning of the first poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
2. What is the meaning of the second poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
3. Based on the criteria, which poem did you choose and WHY?
***Please tell me everything you think, but use your best writing.
The 1st poem Do you Carrot all for me is a love poem using veggies as the words for it.
ReplyDeleteThe 2nd poem The Castle in the Fire is about a knight who has to has to fight a dragon to save his kingdom.
I chose The Castle in the Fire because I like midevil dragon fights, and it reminds me of The Hobbit.
and the rhyme scheme was ABCB!
Deleteand I like The Hobbit!
DeleteThe first poem, Castle in the Fire, is about dragons who guard a castle and when a knight comes they have a fight and the dragons set fire to a castle with a lady in the top of the tower and the castle falls down but somehow, the knight saves her.
ReplyDeleteDo you Carrot all for me is about a person who is saying to someone if they care at all for them and things like that but they are saying it with fruits and vegetables instead of saying," Do you care at all for me" or,"Let us marry"
I chose DO YOU CARROT ALL FOR ME? as the winner because it had great imagery and it made think hard about what the vegetables and fruits actually stood for like pear stood for pair and radish stood for reddish.
Even though I hate vegetables, I think the same way!
DeleteThe first poem I read was called Do You Carrot All For Me? It is about a man describing his love for someone with fruit, and saying we belong together.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem I read was called The Castle in the Fire. It is telling a story about a prince saving a princess that is locked in a castle with a dragon guarding.
I liked Do You Carrot All For Me? The best. I thought it was so creative how they changed actual words to fruit
The Castle in the Fire,is about a war that put a castle in fire and a knight that came and said it was a good fight. And when it was over a man and a woman rode off.
ReplyDeleteDo you carrot all for me,is about a man telling a woman that he loves her but he uses a lot of play on words.
I think the winning poem is Do you carrot all for me because it has a lot of play on words and the rhyme scheme is A,B,C,D,E,C,F,G. I don't really like love poems but this one I like because it has a lot of play on words.
The first poem, Do you Carrot all for me, is about two people and they are asking if they love each other while using fruits and vegtables.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about a knight saving a lady and how he killed dragons and saved the lady.
I choose Do You Carrot All for Me? Because i think it is funny how the use vegtables and fruits to say things like "My heart BEETS for you".
The first poem, Do you Carrot all for me?, is about someone using wordplay in a poem about them loving someone else.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about A woman stuck in a castle being attacked by dragons that's on fire, when a knight comes and saves her.
I chose Do you Carrot all for me because it was very punny and well written. I liked the word play in it too.
I meant ,but a knight comes and saves her
DeleteThe first poem, Do you Carrot all For me?, is about a person who is using vegetables and fruits in phrases to show his affection for a girl.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about someone in medieval times seeing a knight who is rescuing a lady from a castle, and there is a huge fight, but the knight eventually wins.
I liked Do you carrot all for me? because it used a lot of personification, because people aren't made vegetables and fruits. I also liked how it used a little bit of repetition, "With your turnip nose, and your radish face,". But since it used the vegetables in the phrases is the biggest reason that I think this poem should be the winner
The first poem,Do you carrot all for me?, is about asking if someone will marry you using food for words.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem,The Castle in the Fire, is about getting away from their home but face tough challenges along the way.
I chose Do you carrot all for me? because it is funny. Do you carrot all for me? has alliteration and a metaphor. The alliteration for this poem is you ARE A peach. The metaphor is You ARE A PEACH. That is why I chose, Do you carrot all for me?
The first poem, Do you carrot all for me is about someone who wants to marry someone, and expresses his emotions with food.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The castle in the fire, is about a woman in a burning castle, and a knight came to save her.
I chose Do you carrot all for me because it is funny and entertaining. Also, I like how he said food for feelings like, "Lettuce marry."
The first poem, Do you Carrot all for me?, is about person asking someone if they love them using vegetables and fruits as play on words. For example, the poem said, "You are a peach" and "My heart beets for you".
ReplyDeleteThe second poem,Castle of Fire, is about a person who saw a castle getting wrecked by dragons and a knight comes riding in the castle and fights the dragons, and comes out of the castle with the princess with him riding on a horse.
I liked Castle of Fire more because I liked the rhyme scheme it used.(AABBCCDDEEDD) I also liked Castle of fire because it is like a story or a fairy tail. That is why I chose Castle of Fire for the winner.
The first poem, Do You Carrot all for me?, was about someone that has feelings for another thing.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire was about a lady who was trapped in a castle, guarded by dragons until a brave knight comes to rescue the lady and succeeds.
I chose Do You Carrot all for me? because it had funny and well chosen fruit and veggies to say do you care at all for me. The rhyme scheme was ABCDEFAG
The first story, Do you Carrot all for me, is about a carrot that is telling the other vegetables how much she loves him.
ReplyDeleteThe second book, Castle in the Fire is about a fight that is going on at the castle.
My favorite is, do you Carrot all for me, because it is funny ad sweet. Also the is repetition, for an example the word you repeats a lot, ( Do YOU carrot all for me, My heart beats for you, and you are a peach.) There is lots of personification, for an example, (My heart beets for you, with your turnup nose, and your radish face.) That is why my favorite poem is do you carrot all for me.
The first poem I read , Do you carrot all for me ? is about a person describing their love as a vegetable garden of joy. So he uses vegetables as a noun to uses one part of the persons love . Yum.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem I read , The Castle in the Fire , is about dragons about to burn a castle that was about to be burn by the dragons. So she started running but , the flames got bigger. So the knight saved her.
I chose Do you carrot all for me ? It is because it some great alliterations like you are a peach . It also uses imagery like it uses feel . It is also a really funny poem and, it is also really kind. That is why I like Do you carrot all for me .
Do you carrot all for me is about a person of some sort that likes someone. The thing is using vegetables for word. For example the writer wrote, "Lettuce marry;"
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is about a small fire coming then becoming something massive. How the smoke had lifted.
I choose Do you carrot all for me. I chose that poem because it was funny and detailed. I loved how Anonymous added veggies in the poem. There is one stanza.
Do You Carrot all for me is about someone who cares about someone but there asking if they love them back.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is about a night who has a fight with dragons.
I like Do You Carrot all for Me better because there are metaphors. For example, you are a peach.
Do you carrot all for me? is about a weird partnership that loves puns.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is about a night who is fighting a dragon and saving a lady.
I liked Do you carrot all for me? because it has metaphors like, "You are a peach," and it makes you want to ask questions, like are they food? Are They people? Who is telling the story?
The 1st poem was ,Do you carrot all for me, it is about someone asking if someone likes them the person is using play on words.
ReplyDeleteThe 2nd poem ,The castle in the fire, it is about a lady that is in a castle and a dragon is there. A knight comes fighters the dragon and saves the lady the person watching sees them go away and he is glad.
I think that the winner is Do you carrot all for me. I like it because it is funny. There are a lot of metaphors like "you are a peach."
The first poem, Do you Carrot all for me, is about someone expressing their feelings in vegetables.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about a knight who saves a princess.
I picked, The Castle in the Fire, because it had more detail, it is a story, and it also has alliteration. For Example,the author says " Then, while we watch in wonder." That's why I chose The Castle in the Fire.
The first poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about a knight fighting a dragon in the fire and rescuing the trapped lady.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Do You Carrot All for Me? Is about a man expressing his feelings by using vegetables for words about love and other gushy stuff.
I chose Do you carrot all for me? because it has a funny metaphor "You are a peach," it also has one stanza.
The Castle in the Fire is about a castle where dragons live.
ReplyDeleteDo you carrot all for me? is about a carrot that is asking do you care for me.
I choose The Castle in the Fire to win because I like how they have so much detail and because I like dragons. The writers scheme is there are 6 stansazes.
Do you carrot all for me is about a boy who is talking to a girl he has a crush on and asking if she cares for him but hes using fruits on some words.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is about a princess locked in a castle with dragon guards and a knight comes to save her and he fights the dragon and wins. Then the castle has smoke and when it disappears the knight and princess ride off on a horse.
I chose Do you carrot at all for me because I like how he used fruits for words that were the same.
Do you carrot all for me? Is about a baby who thinks his mom does not care about him. He loves his mom but does not feel like his mom feels the same way.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is about a dragon who was on guard the castle. When many nights came to hurt him. At the end he scared them off.
I choose The Castle in the Fire as the winner because it was longer and easier to understand. It had 6 stanzas. The first stanzas rhyme scheme was ABCA. This Is why I choose The Castle in the Fire as the winner.
Do you carrot all for me is about someone who tells how they feel through vegetables.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is about dragons who are attacking a castle until a knight rides in and defeats all of the dragons and saves the kingdom.
I chose The Castle in the Fire because it is funny and it had the rhyme scheme in the first two stanzas ABCBDEFE and I thought that was cool. I also liked it because it used the metaphor "Dressed in a coat of mail." That's why I chose The Castle in the fire.
Do you carrot all for me is about someone who uses veggies and fruits to express feelings.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is about a castle that is on fire because there are two dragons. A knight comes out and fights them, and he wins.
I chose Do you carrot all for me, because I think it was funny, and the author used metaphors like "You are a peach."
Do you carrot all for me is about a vegetable that likes another vegetable. The vegetable seys lettuce me.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is about a knight who fights the dragon guarding the castle.
I chooses Do you carrot me because the vegetables can talk and it is funny and entertaining.
The first poem is called, Do you carrot all for me?, it is about a boy/girl who is asking them if they carrot about them.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem is called, The Castle in the Fire, it is about two dragons who have a task to guard the gate.
My favorite poem was The Castle in the Fire. I liked this poem because it was very different [ good different]. Also it had a rhyme scheme [ABAB]. I also liked it because it had alliteration. For example, "Then while we watched in wonder." And finally I liked how it was very powerful. This is why I chose The Castle in the Fire as my favorite poem.
The first poem is called Do you carrot all for me? It is about a person who is wondering if they care about him because he cares about everyone else.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem is called The Castle in the Fire. It's about a lady who is in the castle and a dragon is there. A night comes and fighters the dragon. then the lady went on the horse with the night.
I pick for the winner is Do you Carrot all for Me. The reason i picked it as the winner is because It is really funny. And the rhyme scheme is (ABCDEFAG).
The first poem, Do You Carrot All For Me is a love poem using fruits and veggies instead of adjectives. It also has more than one metaphor for example you are a peach that says you are sweet.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle In The Fire is a story about a knight fighting off dragons and he saves the princess. This story also has a great rhyme scheme it is ABCB.
I choose The Castle In The Fire, because it is a great story and it has a amazing rhyme scheme and plot.
Do you Carrot all for Me is about fruit that he is putting it into words.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is about a knight who saves a princess.
I choose Do you Carrot all for Me because it is very funny and sweet. I liked that is used fruit instead of the real word like "lettuce marry". The Metaphor is "You are a peach" I bet WEED all like this one.
The first poem, Do you carrot all for me?, is a love letter written using fruits and vegetables.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about a knight saving a lovely lady from a castle on fire.
I choose Do you carrot all for me? because I like the use of fruits and vegetables describing someone. I also enjoy the metaphor: You are a peach.
In the first poem, do you carrot all for me, It is about a person who is using vegetables to describe another person.
ReplyDeleteIN the second poem, The Castle in the Fire, about a fight between a dragon and the nights because the dragons set the nights castle on fire.
I choose The Castle in the Fire, because it had really good detail and it had rhyme scheme. It was a long but time worthy poem. That is why I choose The Castle in the Fire.
the first poem I read was, Do you carrot at all for me? It was about vegetables and fruits wanting to be together.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem I read was The, Castle in the Fire. It was about a castle made up of dragons and knights.
I choose as the winner to be Castle in the Fire. Because It had a rhyme scheme in the first stanza ABCB. Also it had a alliteration for example A lady's lovely face. That is why I choose The Castle in the Fire.
The first poem Do you carrot all for me is about someone asking if someone cares about them but he uses foods for some of the words.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem The Castle in the Fire, is about a dragon guarding a castle and a knight came to get in and they fought the knight passed the dragon and got to the castle.
I chose The Castle in the Fire, because it has good rhyme scheme it is always ABCB. It also has imagery "Then, while we watched in wonder."
The first poem I read was called, Do you Carrot all for me, it is about sharing feelings but instead of saying the feelings he puts them into fruits and vegetables.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem I read was called , The Castle in the Fire ,it is about a dragons that have a job to watch the gate ,and a princess got stuck up in the castle ,and the castle is on fire ,and there is a big fire ,and the prince sees her ,and saves her.
The winner should be , Do you Carrot all for me , because it is so cute because he changes almost all of the words into fruits or vegetables and he uses (ABCA).
The first poem, Do you carrot all for me, is about someone asking if someone cares at all for them.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, The Castle in the Fire, is about a knight who rescues someone from a dragon.
I choose Do you carrot all for me because I like the word play. and the metaphor, you are a peach. That is why I picked Do you carrot all for me.
The first poem, The Castle in the Fire is about a knight that saves a princess from a dragon in a Castle.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Do you Carrot all for me? Is about a person expressing their love to someone in food instead of words.
I choose Do you Carrot all for me? As the winner because it had repetition and rhyme scheme. I also really liked how the person described the poem.
Do you carrot all for me? is about someone describing the person that they loved, using fruits, vegetables, and plants to describe them.
ReplyDeleteThe Castle in the Fire is about someone watching a castle burn down, and a lady inside, with them anxiously watching.
I choose The Castle in the Fire as my favorite poem, because it keeps you on your toes. I also like it because, with every stanza, the rhyme scheme is ABCB. I choose The Castle in the Fire as my favorite poem.