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1. What is the meaning of the first poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
2. What is the meaning of the second poem? (Summarize in one sentence)
3. Based on the criteria, which poem did you choose and WHY?
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The first poem, Who has Seen the Wind, is about how no one can see the wind, but you can feel it. Especially when the trees bow down, and that is when you know that the wind is there.
If~ is about a dad giving his boy advice. For example, if he does all things like "don't look too good or talk too wise," then he will be a man no matter what.
I chose If~ as the winner because it had a deeper meaning, and it has a good rhythm. The rhyme scheme was AAAABCBC, and it gave the poem a good beat. The author used repetition to emphasize the meaning of the poem. For example, he began each line with the word “if.” The writer’s craft and message of the poem make it the true winner.
This Is Just to Say, was about someone who ate a plum and though it was delicious.
ReplyDeleteChoosing Shoes, is about someone who is choosing a pair of shoes and does not know what to get.
I choose Choosing Shoes as the winner, because it is funny. It also rhymes and has a beat.
This Is Just to Say is about a person that ate someone's plums that were being saved for breakfast so the person tells the other person that they ate it.
ReplyDeleteChoosing Shoes is about some kids who are choosing shoes and can't decide so there asking a bunch of questions.
I picked Choosing Shoes to win because it was pretty good and the other poem was just weird.
The other poem was weird.
DeleteI also thought that it was weird too
DeleteThis is Just to Say is about a kid that confessed that he ate the plums in the icebox and asked for forgiveness.
ReplyDeleteChoosing Shoes is about someone thinking about what shoes to buy and talking about all kinds of different shoes.
This Is Just to Say is my favorite because it is funny and that the author used imagery to show me what was happening in the poem.
The first poem is called Choosing Shoes. It's about people who are trying new shoes that are cool.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem is called This Is Just to Say. It's about plums that where in iceboxes and you can eat them
I pick The Choosing shoe as the winner because It had a rythem beat to the poem.
Choosing Shoes is about choosing shoes.
ReplyDeleteThis Is Just to Say is about admitting that you did something.
I choose Choosing Shoes for the winner because I like the riming in it.
The first poem,This Is Just to Say, was about a man trying to make another person forgive him.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem,Choosing shoes, is about people choosing shoes and different types of shoes to choose.
I choose Choosing Shoes as the winner because of the alliteration on most of the stanzas. For example, "Buckle shoes, bow shoes, pretty pointy-toe shoes.
Choosing Shoes is a poem about how parents will never buy good shoes or colorful shoes.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Just Is to Say, is about someone who is reluctantly admiting that they ate the plumbs.
I chose Choosing Shoes as the winner because I think that it is true that we never get cool shoes, mostly because of dress code. Also, the author used imagery to make you see the shoes in your head. That is why I choose Choosing Shoes as the winner.
In the first poem, This Is Just To Say, is about someone who ate a plum out of an icebox.
ReplyDeleteIn the second poem, Choosing Shoes is about someone who is listing all the shoes they can buy.
I choose choosing shoes because it rhyme scheme AAABAAABAAAC and I like the repetition of shoes.
This is Just to Say is about a person who ate a plum out of an ice box.
ReplyDeleteChoosing Shoes is about all different shoes but witch on will you buy?
I choose Choosing Shoes for the winner because it rhymed and it was about all different shoes. Also its rhyme scheme is AAABCCC...
The first poem I read was, This Is Just to Say. It was about food a girl or a boy ate and he just wanted to say.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem I read was, Choosing Shoes. It was about picking different types of shoes.
I choose the winner to be Choosing Shoes to be the winner because it used good alliteration like Pretty pointy toe shoes. Also it had five stanzas. That is why I choose Choosing Shoes.
The first poem, This is Just to Say, is about someone apologizing for eating sweet and cold plums that were supposed to be saved for breakfast.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Choosing Shoes, is about all of the many different types of shoes to choose from, and which shoes the reader would like to buy.
I choose Choosing Shoes because I enjoy rhyme scheme of AAAB for each stanza, because I like the alliteration, and because I enjoy how fun the poem is to read.
The first poem is called, Choosing Shoes, it is about different kinds of shoes that you can get.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem is called, This Is Just to Stay. It is about is about a yummy plum.
My favorite poem was Choosing Shoes. I liked it because it had personification, and a rhyme scheme, [AAAB]. And last but not least I like how it was HAPPY!!!!
This Is just to say, is about this girl or boy eating plums from an icebox and is sorry for eating them.
ReplyDeleteChoosing Shoes, is about someone trying on all different types of shoes that are one of a kind and tell about what the shoes are about.
I think that the winner is Choosing Shoes, because I really like the rhyme scheme and the rhythm of the poem. I also like the types of shoes that the person was naming. That is why I like Choosing Shoes.
The first poem, This Is Just To Say is about always being honest and telling the truth.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Choosing Shoes is about choosing your personality and who you are. The ryhme scheme is also very good it is AAAB.
I choose Choosing Shoes because, it had a good rhythm and rhyme scheme. I also like because the shoes reflect people's personalities.
The first poem, This Is Just to Say was about someone saying they ate the plums that were for breakfast and they were delicious.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Choosing Shoes, was about someone choosing new shoes and naming different kinds.
I choose, Choosing Shoes as the winner because I liked how it named different kinds of shoes. I also liked the rhyme scheme, AAAB. I could picture the shoes because it said what they look like.
The first poem, This Is Just to Say, is about Someone ate all of the plums.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Choosing Shoes, is about someone talking about choosing shoes.
I pick This Is Just to Say. Because I like how it is about plums. It also has alliteration "so sweet." That is why I choose This Is Just to Say.
This is Just to say is about a person who ate a plum out of the ice box.
ReplyDeleteChoosing Shoes is about all different shoes that you can buy. And which kind of shoes you can buy.
I Choose Choosing Shoes as the winner because it has a good rhythm and is has a rhyme scheme of AAABCCC and it has 4 stanzas this is why I think Choosing Shoes should win.
The first poem i read was called , Choosing shoes , it is about a guy that is trying to pick out a pair of shoes ,and he does not know what kind to pick out.
ReplyDeletethe second poem I read was called , This Is Just To Say , is about a boy that eats a plum in a ice box and asks forgiveness.
i think the winner should be Choosing shoes because it rhymes with AAABCCC and it has a good rhythm and it has 4 stanzas.
Just To Say was about someone eating plums someone was saving for breakfast in the freezer.
ReplyDeleteChoosing Shoes is about someone who can't decide which shoes to get so someone tells him all the kinds of shoes that they have.
I choose Choosing Shoes because I liked the rhyme scheme and the poet spent a lot of time and effort on it.
The first poem, THIS IS JUST TO SAY, is about a person who takes a plum and eats and feels sorry but thought it was delicious.
ReplyDeleteCHOOSING SHOES is about a girl who can't choose what shoes to buy so, in the end, she chooses flat, fat, stomp along like that, Wipe them on the mat shoes.
I chose CHOOSING SHOES because it was a little bit more detailed and, just like IF, it said which ones she would buy at the ned and I really like that because it keeps the reader on the edge of their seat and it makes them want to keep reading until the end. I also liked the pattern AAABAAABAAAB because it had a nice beat and rhythm to it. That is why I chose CHOOSING SHOES.
The first poem,This is just to say,is about someone who is telling someone that he ate all the plums from the icebox,that were for breakfast.
ReplyDeleteChoosing shoes,is about a person who is trying to find the perfect shoe and she can't decide.
The winning poem is choosing shoes because it has a good point because know one can find the perfect shoe.It also makes alot more sense then the other poem.
The 1st poem This is Just to Say is about someone eating frozen plums.
ReplyDeleteThe 2nd poem Choosing Shoes is about someone choosing just the right shoes to pick out.
I chose Choosing Shoes because eating frozen plums is boring.
and I like the rhythm of Choosing Shoes.
DeleteThe first poem I read was called This is Just To Say. It is about a girl/guy who was saying sorry for eating someone's plums.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem I read was called Choosing Shoes. It was about a child who wanted to choose his/her own shoes, instead of his/her parents choosing.
I liked Choosing Shoes the best. I loved how it named all those types of shoes, and I also loved the fun rhyme scheme. (AAAB)
The first poem, Just to say, is about a guy who ate a plum and said it was delicious and cold.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Choosing shoes is about someone telling you about the different types of shoes, and which one you like.
I choose Choosing Shoes as the winner because I like the rhyme scheme, AAA B AAA B AAA B AAA B. I also like the rhythm of the poem.
The first poem,This is Just to Say is about a boy that ate all the plums without permission, so he is asking for forgiveness.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Choosing Shoes, is about someone that went to a shoe store, and could not decide what shoes to get.
I think that Choosing Shoes is the best poem because the words rhyme more and the word shoes comes up a lot.
This is Just to Say is about a person who decided that he/she couldn't wait to eat the family's plums any longer, so he/she ate all of the plums that the family had.
ReplyDeleteChoosing shoes is about a person who is wanting to by new shoes, and having a hard time choosing them, but finally decides on a pair of shoes they like a lot.
I chose Choosing Shoes as the winner because it has a good rhythm and a good rhyme scheme: AAABAAABAAABAAA. It also repeated the word shoe a lot. That is why chose Choosing Shoes as the winner
The first poem, Choosing Shoes, it about how shoes sizes,color, and how they fit.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, This is Just to Say, is about someone who ate someone else's plums, and how they were so delicious.
I chose Choosing Shoes because it had a beat that I liked. Also it had alliteration. For example it says, "So sweet."
This is just to say is about a person getting plums from the ice box and though you might eat them for breakfast I'll still eat them.
ReplyDeleteChoosing Shoes is about choosing the perfect pair of shoes and what they like about a shoe a shoe.
I choose Choosing Shoes because it was very good and detailed. It has four stanzas.
The first poem I read , This Is Just to Say , is about a person that ate the plums in the icebox. He knew that they probably were for breakfast , but he couldn't help it.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem I read , Choosing Shoes , is about a person trying to figure out what kind of shoes he should by . The problem is there are so many answers .
I chose the poem Choosing Shoes because it had a good rhyme scheme of AAABAAABAAABAAAb. Another reason I like it is that it has good similies like stump along like that shoes . I also like it because it is funny . That is why I like Choosing Shoes
The first poem, This is Just to Say, was about a boy telling someone that they ate their plum and it was delicious.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, New Shoes, is about someone talking about all the different shoes you can choose and at the end, he/she said the best shoes are flat, fat and some other shoes.
I likes Choosing Shoes because it reminded me of Dr.Seuss poems and it was "catchy" and Lets Just Say did't make sense to me.
This Is Just to Stay is about a guy who stole some one's plums and is sorry.
ReplyDeleteChoosing Shoes is about how there are lots of different shoes.
I liked Choosing Shoes because I liked the use of alliteration. Another thing I liked was I could make a movie in my mind.
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This is Just to Say is about a person telling someone else or the reader that he/she ate some plums and then told us that she ate the plums.
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The first poem, This is Just to Say, is about a person who ate the plums in the icebox and he is confecing to another person who was gonna eat them tommorow morning an the person that ate them said, "Forgive me they were delicious so sweet and so cold"
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Choosing Shoes, is about which shoes to choose and how there are so many shoes to pick but you cant buy any.
I pick Choosing Shoes beacause i love the rythem so much i coukd sing it all day long
The first poem, This Is Just to Say, is about a guy who eat the plums in the fridge.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, Choosing shoes, is about what would happen if parents let kids choose shoes.
I chose, Choosing shoes, because it has detail.
The first poem,This Is Just to Say, is about a person who ate somebody else's plums and loved it.
ReplyDeleteThe second poem, choosing shoes, is about kids who could not choose shoes.
I liked Choosing Shoes better because the rhyme scheme is AAABCCC plus it is fun to read.
This Is Just To Say is a poem about someone confessing that they ate some plums that someone else was saving for breakfast.
ReplyDeleteChoosing Shoes is about someone describing the kind of shoes that they would like, but stating that they would have to get the plain shoes.
I choose Choosing Shoes as my favorite poem. It has a good beat. It repeats the word shoes at least 3 times per stanza. For these reasons, I choose Choosing Shoes as my favorite poem.