Wednesday, April 30, 2014

Would You Rather Part 2...

Dear students,


For your final blog posts, you will write a persuasive paragraph in a series called "Would You Rather." In each post, I will give you a scenario, and you will have to defend your answer using the following criteria:

  • topic sentence stating your opinion
  • At least 3 supporting sentences defending your opinion
  • One counter argument
  • A concluding sentence summarizing your writing

Here is your "Would You Rather" for today:

Would you rather win five million dollars or become a famous superstar?

Please remember to check for mistakes by reading aloud your post to yourself before you publish it. I cannot wait to see what you write!

Your teacher,
Ms. B :)

P.S.-Here is my example:

        If I had the choice to have a 3-day weekend every week or have an extra month of summer vacation, I would rather have a 3-day weekend every week. If I had a 3-day weekend instead of 2 days, I would get a lot more done! In addition, I would not have to work as much, and I could spend more time working out, shopping, reading, relaxing, and hanging out with my friends. Plus, I would not feel so rushed on my weekends. I could even go out of town for long weekends and visit family and friends! However, some may prefer an extra month of summer vacation because they could take longer trips. I think the benefits of longer weekends out weigh the benefits of an extra month of summer. I prefer having a 3-day weekend  rather than having another month of summer vacation.

34 comments:

  1. I would rather be a superstar. Because at some point I would earn more than 500 million dollars. Also I would get a lot of cool stuff like cars and penthouses. I would also like to be famous because then everybody would know your name. Others may argue that getting 500 million from the start would be better because you didn't do any work to get the money but I think being famous would be better. I would rather be a superstar than have 500 million dollars.

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  2. If I had the choice of a superstar or get 5 million dollars. I would rather be a super star. I would want to be a super star because you could earn more money. Also you could be known by a lot of people because your famous. And my last reason is that you could have nice fans. Although I would rather be a superstar some may argue that having 5 million dollars is better. For example, you could be rich right off the back. I would not want that because you would probably be really greedy. I think being a super star is a lot better.

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  3. If I had the choice of either being a super star or having five million dollars than I would be a super star because you could get more money than five million dollars.Also you would be famous and every one would want to have your autograph.My last reason is that you could get to go to V.I.P parties. However some may argue that five million dollars is better because you could buy a very nice house.That is why I would ratherb be a superstar than have five million dollars.

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  4. I would rather win 5 million dollars then be a super star. I would rather win 5 million dollars because I could have a mansion and be rich and have what ever I want. And plus I could pay someone to make me a super star. And when I get older really rude but cute boys would like me because I am rich. Some might say being a super star is better because most of the time you will be known. That is why I want to own 5 million dollars.

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  5. If I had a choice to have 5 million dollars or to be a famous superstar, I would be a famous superstar. I would rather be a superstar because I would get paid a lot more money. Another reason is because everybody would know about me. Lastly, I could have a giant pool and house. However, some may disagree by saying that you could have a big pool and a house without being a famous superstar. I think that being a superstar would more fun than having 5 million dollars.

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  6. I would rather become a superstar than win 5 million dollars,because if you were a superstar you would probably earn more than 5 million dollars.In addition,you would be very popular to the media.Plus you could earn millions of dollars by movies, concerts, magizines, and TV shows.However, some people do like 5 million dollars but they probably won't get as much money as Jason Duerlo does in a month.I would rather be a popstar.

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  7. If I had to choose to be a super star or a million dollars. I would choose be a super star because,I would famous and on tv. Also sooner or later I would get the million dollars.Another thing is I would not just get a million dollar I would get over a million dollars. Some people though may choose getting a million dollar because, they would get it then. But they are not thinking a head of time soon it will run out.

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  8. If I had a choice between 5 million dollars or be a famous superstar I would wan't to have the 5 million dollars. My reasons why are if you had 5 million dollars you could buy whatever you wanted even a house. Also, if you had 5 million dollars you would be famous because you would have a really good looking house. Some people may argue that being famous is better because you would be known around the world but I would have the 5 million dollars to take care of my family instead. I hoped you like my reasons why I think 5 million dollars is better than being a famous superstar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  9. If I had a choice to win 5 million dollars of be a famous super star, I would choose to win 5 million dollars. I would choose 5 million dollars because I could buy horses, tack, a farm and lots more. I would also choose to win 5 million dollars because I could donate money to The Humain Society. Another reason I picked to win 5 million dollars is because with that kind of money I could buy Spotty ( a horse I have been wanting for a while.) and start my buisness. Some may argue that being a famous super star is better because you would be known. I think that 5 million dollars would outweigh being a famous super star.

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  10. If I had a choice of either winning 5 million dollars or become a famous super star, I would rather become a super star. If I became a super star instead of getting 5 million dollars, I would earn that much and more! In addition, It would be a lot more fun and the money doesn't wear out that quickly. Plus, I would get to expirence some amazing things! I could even go out of state to see some different things on tours. Also, the camper would be really cool. However, some people may prefer to get 5 million dollars because you wouldn't lose your voice, and you can have more free time. I think that it would be better to be a super star. I would prefer to be a super star than get 5 million dollars.

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  11. If I had the choice of having a million dollars or being a famous superstar I would choose a superstar. I would choose to be a superstar because I could get paid about a million dollars for every record or movie I make. I would also like to be a superstar over having a million dollars because I would be able to invest the money I make in to great causes in less fortunate countries. Although some people may want to have a million dollars because they could have it all at once. I would rather be a superstar instead of a million dollars.

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  12. If I had the choice to have 5 million dollars or become a famous superstar.I would choose to be a famous superstar.For example I could attend award shows.Also if I became a famous superstar I might be able to act in something.But society now might hate on somebody.If I was a superstar I could be know as the girl who was in that movie or on that show. I would prefer becoming a famous superstar than having 5 million.

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  13. I rather become a famous super star.I rather become a famous super star because it would be fun to have fans and be famous! Being famous gets you a lot fans and money etc.If I was famous I would want to be a famous basketball player because I LOVE basketball.However,some may argue that having five million dollars is better because you could do a lot of things super stars can do and buy a lot of things.But super stars can buy a lot of things too and could gain more than five million during your
    career.

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  14. If I had the choice to have 5 million dollars or be a famous superstar,I would rather become a famous superstar.If I was a famous superstar I would probably make more than 5 million dollars.Also if I was famous I would have a lot of fans.If I was famous I would make a lot of friends where as if you have a lot of money people are not just going to come up to you and ask you if you can be their friend because your wealthy.However,some people would rather have 5 million dollars because they can buy many things and get a nice house.I prefer to be famous instead of having 5 million dollars.

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  15. I would rather be a superstar then getting 5,000,000 dollars. My reasons why is because you can make more money. Also you can meet celebritys. And last you can sing at concert.That is why I would be a new superstar.

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  16. I would rather be a famous superstar then have 5 million dollars.One reason why is because you could earn more than 5 million dollars.My second reason is well you'll be famous.My third and final reason is i would travel a lot of places.

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  17. If I had the choose of winning five million dollars or become a famous superstar, I would want to become a famous basketball superstar. I would choose that because I can earn more money then five million dollars. Also, I can be doing something I love and I could be on T.V. Another reason is that I can go to fun events, play in big games that a lot of people watch, and I can meet other famous people. Other people might say that they would rather win five million dollars because they can might get in the newspaper. That is why I picked that.

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  18. FERRETS RULE!!!!!!! libbyMay 2, 2014 at 10:00 AM

    If I had to choose between being famous or getting 5 million, I would pick being famous. I would pick being famous ,because you can be on TV! Also, You would get more then 5 million dollars! My last reason I would pick being famous is you have lots of fans! Those are my reasons why I would want to be famous!

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  19. I would rather be a famous superstar than win 5 million dollars because if I was a famous superstar I could make more money.Also,I would like to play a sport in front of a crowd and hear them cheer my name.Lastly,I would have more fun playing basketball and have more money than be happy by doing nothing and getting five million dollars.

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  20. If I had the choice of being a superstar or owning 5 million I would be a superstar. I would be a super star because I could get more than 5 million and more people would know me. For example, I would be a superstar in the NBA I would probably average 5.5 million then after that I could buy Bugatti Veron and much more stuff. That's why I would like to be a superstar.

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  21. If I had the choice of either becoming a superstar or having five million dollars, I would be a superstar. For example, You could become famous enough you could get five million dollars. You could be on T.V. and everybody would like you. The pro is that you are famous and rich. The con is that it would take longer to get rich. I would much rather be a famous superstar than have five million dollars.

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  22. If I had the choise of being a superster or a millionare I would choose a millionare. For example, if I was a superstar everyone would follow me everywhare, even wanted to be alone. But if I had 5 million dollars, I would be all by myself.
    That's why I would rather have 5 million dollars!

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  23. If I had a choice between being a famous superstar or winning 5 million dollars, I would be a famous superstar. I would be a famous superstar because I could earn more than 5 million dollars. I would also be famous. Lastly, because it would be fun to have fancy things and go on tour and thing like that. I could also get a private jet, a mansion, and 10 fancy cars. Some people might rather win 5 million dollars because your career might not get you any money, but I think that a could be famous and earn the money. That is why I would rather be a famous superstar then win 5 million dollars!

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  24. If I had a choice I would be a famous movie star with my hit catchphrase why you gotta be so sensitive or why you gotta be so uptight. Also I am really funny. I would like to have my own TV show called Keeping Up With Will. And also I will get a lot off money if I have my own TV show and star in movies. Also on the radio my catchphrase "why you gotta be so sensitive" will be so popular. Also in the new generation everyone will be saying in texting WYGBSS that stands for why you gotta be so sensitive. That is why I would rather be a famous super star than a snotty millionaire.

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  25. If I had a choice of winning 5 million dollars or become a superstar, I would rather take the 5 million dollar cash and dash because you could buy a house, maserati, and anything. A superstar would just make you famous. You could be broke and still be a superstar. But 5 million dollars!!!!! It would take a long time to spend that.

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  26. If I had the choose of superstar or 5 million dollars I would chose a superstar. I would choose a superstar because I love to sing and you would get paid anyway if you where a superstar. And that it would be fun to have a lot of fans and everything! Also I would be a superstar because you can travel around the world preforming! Other people might say that they would want to win 5 million dollars to buy everything they want, but I think a superstar would be better because you can go around the world! That is why I picked to be a superstar.

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  27. If I had to choose winning five million dollars of become a superstar I would want to become a famous basketball star. I would choose that because I would be on tv and have a lot of money. Another reason is that I would meet other famous people and everyone would love me! Some people would rather have five milleon dollars because they get to but stuff, but you can buy stuff from being famous.

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  28. If I had a choice to ether be a famous super star or get 5 million dollars I would be a famous super star. I would be a famous super star because you get more than five million dollars, You get to give people autographs. Another reason is I would get to meet other famous people I have wanted to meet. I would also get to be on TV. On the other hand some people may choose 5 million dollars because you wouldn't have to do anything but some people like to think that they have worked hard for the money. That is why I would be a famous super star.

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  29. If i could choose to win five million dollars or be a famous superstar i would be A famous Soccer player. I woud be a famous soccer player because you could go around the world traveling to play big games. You could go to Europe, Ireland and so much more. I would want to play soccer because i love it when i score the goles over the golies head. That is why I would be a famous soccer player.

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  30. If I had a choice between winning 5 million dollars or be a super star I would be a super star. I would be a super star because then I would have a endless supley of money, I would be a professional softball player, and I would be a wealthy person and take care of my kids. I also could be someones idol. Thank you for reading.

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  31. I wold want to be a movie star because I could get more money than if I had 5 million dollars.

    ( I summed mine up )

    ( If you want to hear the long version ask me )

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  32. If I had to choose I would choose famous superstar because you can get more money, almost everybody will love you, and you could maybe get a car for free. Although I want to be a famous superstar, some people may argue that 5,000,000 dollars. For example, 5,000,000 dollars is used for game shows. However, A famous superstar can be anywhere. That is why I want to be a superstar.

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  33. Although I would pick to be a super star instead of winning 5 million dollars, some may argue they would rather win 5 million dollars. For example, you could buy a lot of things. However, if you are a succesfull super star you would get 5 million dollars very easily. That is why I would pick to be a super star.

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  34. THE AWESOME AND AMAZING LCMay 2, 2014 at 10:22 AM

    If I was to choose between 5 million dollars and becoming a super star. I would pick becoming a super star. For example, you will get more money than 5 million dollars. Also you can have more people know you. The last advice I have is that you can a super star in any way you want. So that is all the I have.BY!!!!!!

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