Monday, May 5, 2014

Would You Rather Part 3

Dear students,


For your final blog posts, you will write a persuasive paragraph in a series called "Would You Rather." In each post, I will give you a scenario, and you will have to defend your answer using the following criteria:

  • topic sentence stating your opinion
  • At least 3 supporting sentences defending your opinion
  • One counter argument
  • A concluding sentence summarizing your writing

Here is your "Would You Rather" for today:

Would you rather have the ability to see 10 years into your own future or one year into the future of the world?

Please remember to check for mistakes by reading aloud your post to yourself before you publish it. I cannot wait to see what you write!

Your teacher,
Ms. B :)

P.S.-Here is my example:

        If I had the choice to have a 3-day weekend every week or have an extra month of summer vacation, I would rather have a 3-day weekend every week. If I had a 3-day weekend instead of 2 days, I would get a lot more done! In addition, I would not have to work as much, and I could spend more time working out, shopping, reading, relaxing, and hanging out with my friends. Plus, I would not feel so rushed on my weekends. I could even go out of town for long weekends and visit family and friends! However, some may prefer an extra month of summer vacation because they could take longer trips. I think the benefits of longer weekends out weigh the benefits of an extra month of summer. I prefer having a 3-day weekend  rather than having another month of summer vacation.

37 comments:

  1. Carter is... AWESOME!!!!!!! : ) : )May 6, 2014 at 12:10 PM

    If I had to choose I would want to see ten years into the my future. If I chose that I would be able to see ten years into the world's future also. That is why I choose that. Also I want to see my future.

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  2. I would like to see 10 years into my future more than see 1 year into the future wourld because I could see if I would do anything bad and make sure not to do it. Also you could see many more years into time.

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  3. I would rather see 1 year into the future because I want to know if another Kedesha commercial coming out. Also I would love to see all the new apple stuff, and I would like to see which class I am going to be in next year, and I would love to see Finding Dory in theaters I am so exited to see it. And the reason why I only chose one year is because I want my future to surprise me.

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  4. If I had the choise of going to the world future 1 year or my future 10 years, I would go to my future. I would do that so that I would be prepared for my future. For example if I was gonna move to Texas, I would need to go ahead and be a cowboys fan. And I could still see the world around me. That is why I would want to see my future!

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  5. I would rather see ten years into the future because I would see how well i was doing in everything. I would see my softball career maybe see my husband. I could maybe change the future. That was my choice at least.

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  6. FERRETS RULE (Libby)May 6, 2014 at 12:16 PM

    If I had to choose between 10 years in my future ,or seeing 1 year into the world's future I would choose seeing 10 years into my future. I pick this, because I want to see when I die. Also I would like to see when my family dies, or how many times I get sick.

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    1. However, Some people may want to see the worlds future, because they could see wars, new technology, and new sicknesses. In the end, I would still choose seeing my future, because it seems more convenient.

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  7. If I had a choice to ether see 10 years into my own future, or see 1 year into the future of the world I would choice 10 years into my future. I would choice 10 years into my future because I would get to see what collage I would go to. What my life would be like. Also it's 9 years more than one year into the future of the world. Although some may argue that 1 year into the future of the world would be better because it's the world but, 1 year in the world doesn't charge much at all. That is why I would choice 10 years into my own future.

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  8. I would rather see 10 years in the future then have a year in the future because You could see how you look or if you stay lonely for your life. I would also like too see how much time I have left in my life. That is why I would choose to see the future.

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    1. All though some people might want to take a year in the future because you get to see the future life, I would choose seeing ten years in the future because that's farther ahead in your life. That is why I would want to see 10 years in the future.

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  9. If I had to choose between seeing 10 years into my future or seeing 1 year into the worlds future I would choose seeing 10 years into my future. I would choose that because I would want to see if I will go to a really good collage. Another reason is that I would want to see if I will have a lot of money or be rich. Also I would want to see if I will have a really happy family. Some people may want to see 1 year into the future because they an see if they have moved or if there is something good or bad happening to the world. That is why I choose seeing 10 years into the future.

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  10. I would want to see 10 years in my life rather than 1 year in the world future.
    Although I would want to see 10 years into the future of my life, some may argue that looking 1 year into the world's future. For example, they could see what they have and what was invented and what is going on. However, I would want to see in 10 years what was going on in my life like what college I go to and things that are going on in my life. That's why I would like to have that ability.

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  11. If I had a choice between being able to see 10 years into my future or 1 year into the worlds future, I would choose seeing 1 year into the worlds future. I would choose it so I could see everything that's going on in the world, not just my life. Also I could tell if there was going to be an earthquake or a flood, and I could be safe. I could also see whats going to happen to me, because I am part of the world. Some people might argue that 10 years is longer than 1 year, but I could see 1 year, and then the next year, and there is no point in seeing 10 years in the future. That is why I would choose seeing 1 year into the worlds future.

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  12. If I had a choice of being able to see in my own future for 10 years and the future of the world for 1 year, I would rather be able to see the future of the world because I would get to see the whole world! Instead of my plain boring life. I mean I could see the future of my life for only one month and my future would get really boring. But the whole world is a whole different ball game. You would get to see the future of China, Russia, India, France, and all of the countries. It's like exploring the whole world!!! That is why I would like to see the future of the whole world for 1 year.

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  13. I would rather be able to see 10 years into the future for myself than one year into the future for the world. For example, you could see what you look like in the future. You could also see what your job would be. you could also find out what you have been doing. However, if you could see the future for other people you could see what other people look like. I think it would be better to se 10 years into the future for yourself than one year for everybody.

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  14. I would rather see ten years in my future than one year into future. I would rather do that because I could be able what I look like when i'm twenty one, if I would be playing sports, and what college i'd be going to. Also you might be able to see your background, and see if the world has changed. Some people may argue that seeing one year into the future is better because the could see people at their school to see if they have braces or if people have gone to different schools. But, I think seeing me ten years in future is better because you get to see what you look like. That is why I chose to see me ten years into the future!!!!!!!!!!!

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  15. I would choose to see ten years into my future. I choose that because I could see what college I go to and if I pass my drivers test. However, some may want to see one year into the future, but if you look ten years in your future you can see what happens around you instead of one year you could see ten years. Also I could see if they make ten more kadesha commercials.

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  16. I LOVE FERRETS!!!!!!!!!!!LCMay 6, 2014 at 12:23 PM

    I would rather see one years into the worlds future because I want to see what the people need help with in life and what I need to prepare people for. For example,everyone or yourself. I think it would be better to help everyone because you can yourself and others. Also you can see if you need to prepare food for people who will not have food. that is what I think about that.

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  17. Some people might want to see 1 year into the worlds future instead of 10 years into there own future,but I wouldn't. One reason is that I could see all the bad things that are going to happen to me and change them because it might depend on me living or dying.But some people might think that seeing the worlds future is better.Also,I think it would be better because 10 years is more than 1 year,but people might think it doesn't matter because seeing the worlds future.Still I think seeing my future for 10 years is better.

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  18. I would rather go ten years onto my future instead of one year into the future world because I could see bad things that happen and try to stop them. However some people would like to see one year into the future world because you could see new things that people make and then make them yourself first. Another reason I would like see 10 years into my future is because you could see many more years into the future.

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  19. If I had to choose between seeing 10 years in my future or 1 year into the worlds future, I would want to see my future. Some people may want to see the world's future because they could see all the new stuff whareas I would want to see my future to see if I was doing anything cool or if I moved. That's why I would want to go into MY future!

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  20. If I could see 1 year into the future or 10 years i would choose 10 years. I would choose ten years because I could see how I turned out to be like. Maybe I could be a softball pitcher. Maybe a bowler. However, some may argue that one year is better than 10 because you might spoiler things but I think 10 is better because you can change if something is wrong. That is why I chose to see ten years into the future.

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  21. If I had a choice I would want to see 10 years into my own future. The reason why I say this is because wouldn't you want to see what college you go to. And you can see all of the new movies that are coming out into theaters. Also you can see what you will become when you grow up some day. Some may argue that seeing 1 year into the future is better, I disagree because all you will really see is what will happen to the world. You can't see your own future, you will see the worlds future . There is truly no fun in that. That is why I chose seeing 10 years into my future.

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  22. I would rather see ten years into the future because you can see what your jobs will be, you will know if there will be any new commercials coming out in ten years, and you can see if they're any flying cars. Although I would see the future in ten years, some people may argue that seeing one year into the world is better. For example

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  23. Ben is such a bossMay 7, 2014 at 12:34 PM

    If I could choose looking ten years into my futureure or one year into the world';s future.I would pick1 year becuase I don't want to see myself becuase I want to do what I want to do not worry about the future. Others may argue that It would be cool to see the future but I think seeing everybodies future. I would rather look 1 year into the world's future than 10 in my own.

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  24. If I could either see 10 years into my future or 1 year the into the worlds future. I would choose see my own future because the only thing I am scared about the world is when it is going to end.Also I could see what I need to change in my life.One other thing is to see if I am dead or not.Some people still might pick see 1 year into the world because you could see if the flying car is invented or if the new xbox is out. I still though think ten is better than one.

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  25. I would rather see in to my future for ten years rather than seeing the future of the whole world for one year. I would do that because when I grow up I want to be a profesional swimmer and I am 10 so I could see the future until I am 20. Some people may argue that see the worlds future for one year is better because you could go up to your friend and tell him something that will happen to him. But I think he would probly not believe him. Some may argue that seeing the worlds future for one year is better than seeing your future for ten years but I think seeing your future for ten years is the best ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  26. If I had a choice of either seeing 10 years into my future of 1 year into the future of the World, I would pick seeing 10 years into my future. If I could see 10 years into my future, I could see the World's future as well as mine, not just the world's. It would also give me a chance to change what I was going to do. I could also warn people before something happend to them. Also, it would give me a break from the present. However , some people argue it could change the history of the World, and their lives forever, instead of seeing what was going to happen to the World in a year. I think the benefits of seeing 10 years into my future outweigh the benefits of seeing 1 year into the future of the World. I prefer seeing 10 years into my future rather than seeing 1 year into the World's future.

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  27. If I had the choice of choosing seeing 10 years into my own future or 1 year into the worlds future I would choose to see 10 years into my own future.For example, you could see what college you would be going to.Also you could just see what would happen to do something crazy. Last but not least you could see what you would look like. Although I would want to see 10 years through my future some may argue that seeing 1 year into the worlds future because they would want to see who won the national championship. I think seeing 10 years into the future is a lot better. Thank you.

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  28. If I had a choice of seeing 10 years into my future or seeing 1 year into the worlds future, I would choose 10 years into my future. The reason I chose this is because I could see what college I am going to go to, if I go to the WNBA, and what I look like. Another reason is because I could see all the bad stuff that is going to happen to me, and see if I could change it. However, some may argue that seeing 1 year of the worlds future could be more helpful because if something bad was going to happen to the world, they could send out a warning and everybody could be safe. I prefer seeing 10 years of my future rather that seeing 1 year into the worlds future.

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  29. If I could choose between looking ten tyears into my future or looking one year into the worlds future,I would rather look ten years into my future,because I would want to see how much more handsome I am.I would also want to see were I go to college and who I date,and lastly I would want to see who my roomate is.

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  30. If I had the choice to either to see myself ten years in the future or see 1 year ahead of the world. I would choose to see myself ten years in the future because what if the world one year from now.Others may argue that to see the world in one year because if they get more avanced with everything

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  31. If I had a choice of having the ability to see 10 years of my future or seeing 1 year into the future of the world I would choose seeing 1 year into the future of the world. I would rather have the ability to do that because I would be able to know what everybody is doing instead of just me. I would also rather have that ability because I could be paid millions to tell people what will happen to them and how to fix it if it is bad. Another reason I would like this ability is I would be a real fortune teller instead of one of the fake ones that rip you off. On the other hand Some people would rather see into their own future. These are my reasons would rather have why I would like to see into the future of the world.

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  32. If I had the choice of seeing 10 years in the future of your life or 1 year in the worlds future I would want to see 1 year in the future for example you could see when a terrorist would bomb a building.Also you could see when you would get hurt and avoid it.However some may argue t.hat seeing 10 years in the future because you could see what lottery numbers are that day.That is why I would like to see one year in the future

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  33. If I had the the choose to see 10 year into my future or 1 year into the worlds future, I would choose to see 10 years into my future. I choose that because I can see if I get into a good collage. Also, because I can see if I play any sports. Another reason is that I can see if I have a lot of money. Some people my pick 1 year into the worlds future because they can see the technology and cars. That is why I pick 10 years into the future.

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  34. If I had the choice to go ten years into my future or one year into the world future,I would choose one year into the world future.I would want to look one year into the world future because I could see what is happening in the world if there is any new technology or any wars that may happen.It would be fun to look one year into the world because I could still see myself,I am part of the world right?Another reason I would look one year into the future is that I could see what other people do and see if they did something funny.However,some may argue that ten years in their future will be better because they want to see what they do.I think I rather not see my self that far into the future because something bad may happen and I will end up worrying about in the present and I could see my self.

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  35. If I had the choice to see ten years into my own future or to see one year into the future of the world, I would choose to see one year in to the future of the world for many reasons. I chose that because I could see if the girls that were stolen in Nigeria were saved. Also, I could see if we have a new presidents. My final reason is that I could see if Mr. Bone got elected for the mayor. However, some may argue that they would rather see ten years into their own future because they could see what college they got into or if they got the dog they wanted. I would prefer to see one year in to the world rather than ten years into my own future.

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