Monday, May 12, 2014

Would You Rather Part 4

Dear students,


For your final blog posts, you will write a persuasive paragraph in a series called "Would You Rather." In each post, I will give you a scenario, and you will have to defend your answer using the following criteria:

  • topic sentence stating your opinion
  • At least 3 supporting sentences defending your opinion
  • One counter argument
  • A concluding sentence summarizing your writing

Here is your "Would You Rather" for today:

Would you rather be a giant hamster or a tiny rhino?

Please remember to check for mistakes by reading aloud your post to yourself before you publish it. I cannot wait to see what you write!

Your teacher,
Ms. B :)

P.S.-Here is my example:

        If I had the choice to have a 3-day weekend every week or have an extra month of summer vacation, I would rather have a 3-day weekend every week. If I had a 3-day weekend instead of 2 days, I would get a lot more done! In addition, I would not have to work as much, and I could spend more time working out, shopping, reading, relaxing, and hanging out with my friends. Plus, I would not feel so rushed on my weekends. I could even go out of town for long weekends and visit family and friends! However, some may prefer an extra month of summer vacation because they could take longer trips. I think the benefits of longer weekends out weigh the benefits of an extra month of summer. I prefer having a 3-day weekend  rather than having another month of summer vacation.

26 comments:

  1. E_L_L_I_O_T!!110%May 12, 2014 at 9:37 AM

    Would rather be a giant Hamster rather than a tiny Rhino. I would do that because I think hamsters are more cuddly and people treat it much better. My last reason is that Rhinos live in a zoo and do not get treated very well compared to a Hamster living in a house. Some may argue that being a tiny Rhino is better than giant Hamster because if some other animal was trying to eat you, you would get away easirer because your smaller and more dangerous. But since I am a Hamster I would probley live in a giant cage or somebodys house.

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  2. If I had the choice of being a giant hamster or a tiny rhino I would rather be a giant hamster. For example I could scare people with all of my fluff they would think i was a giant fluffy cat. Also when I was going to bed i wouldn't have to put covers on because I would be so warm. Lastly I could see people that looked like ants and step on them. Although I would like to be a giant hamster some may argue that being a tiny rhino because they could escape from spies. I think being a giant rhino would be better than being a tiny rhino. Thank you good people.

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  3. If I had the choice of being a giant hamster or a tiny rhino, I would choose to be a tiny rhino. If I was a tiny rhino, I would be small, and able to defend myself. Also, lots of people like unusual pets. I would also be able to make a cool noise. Plus, everybody has hamsters. However, some may prefer to be a giant hamster because they would get a lot of attention. I think the benefits of being a tiny rhino outweigh the benefits of being a giant hamster. I would prefer being a tiny rhino than a giant hamster.

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  4. If I had a choice to be a giant hamster or a tiny rhino, I would be a tiny rhino. The reason I would be a tiny rhino is because if I was caught by spies, I could squeeze out of there hands to escape. Another reason is because I could go into a candy store and get all the candy I want without anybody seeing me. One last reason is that I could live in a muffin. However, some people may argue that being a giant hamster is better because they could step on people. I think the benefits of being a tiny rhino would be fun.

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  5. If I had a choice to be a giant hamster or a tiny rhino I would be a giant hamster. I would be giant hamster because I could run on a wheel and fail. I could also play in the tubes and fail. And I would be pet. Other people may say that being a tiny rhino would be better because they could be more free. That is why I would rather be a giant hamster

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  6. If I had the choice of being a tiny rhino or a giant hamster I get would be a tiny rhino. I would rather be a tiny rhino because if I were being poked and picked at by a mad genius I would hide in tiny places where he could never catch me and I could run away and be free! I would also like to be a tiny rhino because I would be able to live in the jungle and never be seen because I am so tiny. Another reason I would like to be a tiny rhino is because poachers would not be able to get my horn because I am smarter than they think. On the other hand some people would rather be a giant hamster. These are all of my reasons why I would rather be a tiny rhino.

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  7. John Wright Kesting IIIMay 12, 2014 at 9:45 AM

    If I had the choice to be a giant hamster or a tiny rhino I would pick being a tiny rhino. For example, giant hamsters would be taken to a lab and tested on and if you where a tiny rhino they would not be able to see you.Also if you where a tiny rhino you could sneek your family into anywhere and you could get to fly for free.Finally,You could live in the grass and it would be like a big journey.However, some people may think being a giant hamster is better so you do not get stepped on.That is why I would rather be a tiny rhino than a giant hamster.

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  8. If I had the choice to be a tiny rhino or a giant hamster.I would be a tiny rhino because I think that rhinos are more interesting than hamsters.Also if I was a tiny rhino I could roam free and not be held in giant cages. But most of all I think that being a tiny rhino would be cooler than Giant hamsters.Although I think being a tiny rhino would be cooler some may argue that being a giant hamster.For example you could run all over your neighbor hood. I think being a tiny rhino would be more fun than being a giant hamster

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  9. The Giant hamster named benMay 12, 2014 at 9:49 AM

    I would be a giant hamster. 1. I would be really cute so nobody would judge a cute hamster even if they where destroying things. 2. I would fun to be giant and look at all the little people like little ants going around. Finally I would be in all the record books. Others may say it would be better being a tiny rhino because it would be useful going into cracks but I think being giant would be better. I would rather be a giant hamster than a tiny rhino. GO GIANT HAMSTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  10. Cash the GIANT HAMSTERMay 12, 2014 at 9:50 AM

    I would rather be a giant hamster than a tiny rhino because I would rathe have fuzzy furr and I don't have big feet.I would also like to be a giant hamster because I could be bigger than any other hamster in the world.However some people like being a tiny rhino better but their is more benefits of being a giant hamster.

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  11. If I had the choose of being a giant hamster or a tiny rhino I would be a giant hamster. I would be a giant hamster because I would be a lot taller and then will eat giant oroes. Also, because I can smash things like cars, buses, and a lot of other things. Another reason is that then I can dunk on everyone. Also, I can make people from the oreo factory runaway and give me free oroes. Lastly, I would be a giant hamster because I can be a giant class pet. Some people my argue that they would rather be a tiny rhino because you can do things without people really noticing. That is why I would rather be a giant hamster.

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  12. If I had the choice of being a giant hamster or being a tiny rhino i'd be a tiny rhino. I'd be a tiny rhino because i'd be able to run through people's legs and truck people with my small but sharp horn. Although some people may argue that being a giant hamster is better because you can climb on stuff and swat down airplanes, but being a tiny rhino is better because you can run really fast and truck people. That's why I think being a tiny rhino is better.

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  13. If I could choose to be a tiny Rhino or giant Hamster, I would be a giant hamster because I would be taller than all the people, get to be bigger than cats, and I would be tall enough to ride all the rides at disney world. Although some one may say they would raher be a tiny rhino because you could steal chocolotte easily. Thats why I would rather be a giant hamster.

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  14. larson looney tunes a.k.a tunesMay 12, 2014 at 12:35 PM

    If I had the choise of being a big hamster or small rhino, I would be a big hamster. That way I could scare people with my size and use my fuzzy fur as a blanket. Some people would rather be a rhino because they could charge poeple, wheras I would like to be a hamster, so that I would be fuzzy. That is why I would be a Giant hamster!

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  15. If I had a choice of being a tiny rhino or a giant hamster, I would choose a giant hamster. I choose this because if I was a giant hamster I would be really fluffy. I would be really cute. And if I was a giant hamster I would be named Henry Higgins.Some may argue that being a tiny rhino would be better, I disagree. I disagree because I you are so tiny know one will see you and you would get lost a lot. That is why I would be a large hamster.

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  16. If I had a choice to ether be a giant hamster or a tiny rhino I would be a giant hamster. I would be a giant hamster because I would get to smash things and every thing that is big it would look small. Some may argue that tiny rhinos would be better but they could be really easy smashed and nobody would be able to here them at all. Also nobody would know they were there, But giant hamsters are huge so it would be hard for them to get smashed, and easy for them to be heard. That is why I would be a giant hamster.

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  17. FERRETS!*$!*$!*$ libbyMay 12, 2014 at 12:37 PM

    If I had to choose between a giant hamster or a tiny rhino I would choose a giant hamster. I would choose a giant hamster, because hamsters are furry, and soft. Also, I could be a really big classroom pet. Another reason is I could have a really big pizza or cookie to eat. Also, I think hamsters are cute ,and a fun pet to have. Lastly I could have a big hamster wheel to run on. However, Some people may want to be a tiny rhino ,because they can sneak around without being seen.

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  18. If I could choose to be a giant hamster or a tiny rhino I would choose to be a giant hamster. I would choose that because I would be really really really fluffy! Another reason is that you wouldn't have to live in a cage because you were too big. Also you would get to have a giant hamster ball. I have always wanted to have a giant hamster ball! Some people may think that being a tiny rhino is better because you would fit in tight places, but I think a giant hamster is better.

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  19. If I had the choose of being a tiny rhino or a GIANT hamster I would be a tiny rhino. I would be a rhino because you can live in the wild, you would look kinda weird, and because no one will see you so you can do any thing! Also I've always want to see how it is to be tiny. Some people may argue the a giant hamster is cool because it looks weird, but why would you want to go around smashing things. That is why I choose to be a tiny hamster.

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  20. CarterArnoldrules.comMay 12, 2014 at 12:41 PM

    If I had to choose between a giant hamster or tiny rhino, I would pick a giant hamster. I would pick a giant hamster because I could cuddle up on the couch and sleep. I would also want to be one because I could sit on a tiny rhino. I could also truck people and it would be awesome. However, some may want to be a tiny rhino and they would think it was awesome. But think about it people, a hamster as big as a rhino and a rhino as small as a hamster THINK ABOUT IT!!! who do you think would win?? Seriously people!! This is why I choose to be a giant hamster.

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  21. I would rather be a tiny rhino than have a giant hamster because I would be small and easy to take care of and it would be funny to watch me charge but not be able to take anything down. I could also go into small places and do funny things. Other people might want to be a giant hamster because they can crush things and that can be fun.

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  22. #MILLER IS AWESOMEMay 12, 2014 at 12:45 PM

    I would rather be a giant hamster then a tiny rhino because there more nice then rhinos. Another reason I would have a giant hamster ball. Also, I would have my own bowl of queso. Although some people may think that being a tiny rhino is awesome because you can ram people it's not you can climb on a tower and kill airplanes. That is why I would rather be a giant hamster.

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  23. If I had the choice of being a giant hamster or a tiny rhino, I would be a giant hamster. I would be a giant hamster because I could ride on rides that I'm not tall enough for now. Also because I could ride in a giant hamster ball. Lastly because if I was once a small hamster, and things attacked me when I was little would wish they hadn't. Some may argue that if you are a tiny rhino you can fit in small spaces, but if you are a giant hamster you can just smash tiny spaces. That is why I would rather be a giant hamster than a tiny rhino.

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  24. If I had a choice to pick between being a giant hamster or a tiny rhino I would be a tiny rhino.I would be a tiny rhino because I could sneak around eavesdropping on people and they wouldn't notice because I would be so small.Also,I could hit other little things with my horn.Lastly,I could be someones pet and they would feed me instead of me feeding myself.On the other hand,people might want to be a fat hamster so they can roll around on the ground instead of running or walking.Also,you could not eat for a while,but you wouldn't starve cause you would be so fat.Lastly,you would sleep all day and no one would expect anything else from you.Still I would rather be a tiny rhino than a fat hamster.

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  25. I would rather have a tiny rhino rather than a giant hamster. For example, a tiny rhino could hurt a mean person by suprise. It could also do chores for you. Finally, you could pet the tiny rhino. However, You could hug a giant hamster untill you fall asleep. I would rather have a tiny rhino rather than a giant hamster.

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  26. If I had a choice of being a tiny rhino or a giant hamster, I would rather be a tiny hamster because your so big, you could have a bigger chance to conker the world!!! You could climb up The Impire State Building. But you would probably be taller, and bigger than The Impire State Building. You would get to destroy a city or a state. You would be almost invincible because your so big and strong! It would take a nucular bomb to kill you. If you were a giant hamster, you would defeat The USA army easily.I would be The King of The World!!! I would have a million slaves! And that my friends is why I would be a giant hamster.

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