Friday, November 9, 2018

We are Family!

Dear students,

Our blog is a place to write about different topics and share our ideas. Today you will have the opportunity to write about a special family member.
If you could spend an afternoon with one member of your extended family, who would it be? Please explain why you chose this person and tell what you would do together.

Your paragraph must…
  • be at least 5 sentences long
  • written in complete sentences
  • use M.I.N.T.S.
  • have a topic sentence and supporting details

Here is an example of an advanced/proficient  comment:
If I could spend a whole day with one family member, it would be my grandfather. Even though he is not alive, he is close to my heart. In the morning, we would eat ice cream and cake for breakfast. We would laugh and talk until Disneyland opened for the day. We would rush over and ride all of the rides non stop. I would wear a shirt that said, " Laugh more, Cry less!", and everyone would stop to compliment me. My grandfather, also known as Grandpapa, would be wearing a clown hat with shiny black wingtip shoes and a bright orange shirt. He would go around making people laugh, and he would be laughing himself. Then, we would go to the zoo and pet every single animal we could. When the guards weren't looking, we would feed the animals our cotton candy and chips. Finally, for dinner we would have bacon and bananas with Nutella. We would sit on a hill and watch the sun set. Then, we would rent a hotel room for the night, and spend as much money as possible! That would be my day with Grandpapa if I could spend one last day with him.

Happy blogging,
Mrs. Braddy

30 comments:

  1. The person I would chose would be my Papo.Even though he is not alive him and I would have so much fun at the movies.He also would play at the beach with us.I would be so happy with him we would probably take my brother and cousins to a roller coaster park and water park.This is how I would spend my day with any family member
    -Harrison R.

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  2. If I could spend one whole day with a family member it would be my dog, Morty. All day we would watch TV and play video games all day long and have small naps from time to time. He would curl up in my lap and I would play EIGHT BALL POOL, WORLD OF WARSHIPS BLITZ, And SOUL KNIGHT on my Ipad and I would watch THE FLASH or YOUTUBE. That is what I would do with my dog for one whole day.

    -Buck .B

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  3. I would spend the day with my Mom. I choose her because she always makes me in a better mood and she lets me gets stuff like books, games, and food. Yesterday we went to Cosco, she let me get a sweatshirt, sweatpants, and a Diary of a Wimpy Kid book. This is why I would spend a day with my Mom

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  4. Dear Mrs.Braddy
    I would be with my dad because we would go to Dave and Busters.We would bowl and play games. And we would eat and explore at the aquarium.That is why I would spend the day with my dad.
    Your friend,
    Brooklynn

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  5. If I could spend one day with a family member it would be with my grandmother.WE would watch every single nfl game together.She would also make cinnamon rolls in the morning and bowtie pasta with parmesan for lunch.After the nfl games we would talk about all the teams that won and all the teams that lost.When it was time for diner we would go to J Alexsanders and have some more pasta.When it was time for bed we wouldn't go to sleep we would stay up for the whole night.That is why I would spend one day with only my grandmother.
    From,
    Jackson

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  6. If I had to chose one person it would be my grandmother.I call her mimi.I would chose her because she is the nicest person ever.For example every time she comes down she buys my sister and I presents.Sometimes she gets us our favorite things at the store.That is why I would chose my grandmother.
    Livi

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  7. If I could spend my day with anyone in my family it would be my grandmother also known as "Memaw" First, We would wake up and eat breakfast at Waffle House. Then, We would go get our nails done. After That, We would hurry home and bake a cake but while the cake was baking we would have a dance party. "Alexa" "Shuffle songs" Then we would go outside and I would show her my tricks on the trampoline. Then we would come inside and rent a movie. Normally we would both fall asleep but if not we would get our pajamas on and head to bed. I would never miss a day of getting to hang out with the coolest grandma ever.

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  8. If I could send one who day with a family mender it would be my cousin Isaiah because I only get to see him once a year.We would go play with my robot called mip,and play on my Ipad.Then we would eat pizza,and go swimming. Then when we would get home we would dry of and get clean and get dress and relax.Alia.R

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  9. I would spend a afternoon with Aaron Burr. I know he did bad things but it would be cool to spend a day with Aaron Burr. Even cooler if we were in the 1700 hundreds. I could hear his side of the story when he shot Hamilton. If you heard his side of the story you would think differently about him. And yes, I am related to Aaron Burr. Luke

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    1. cool luke
      P.S if you do I want to hear his side of the story. Jack.K

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  10. Dear Mrs Braddy, November 12, 2018
    I would spend my day with my Dad. It would be so much fun we would make a huge breakfast and we would play football and basketball. If we get tired we would go inside and we would watch football together. It would be the best day of my life. We would also go out to lunch and dinner. George c.

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  11. If I could spend a day with a family member it would be my first Grandpa on my mom's side. We would build legos for a long time then we would go scuba diving we'd find chesher and go home and have a party Elia

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  12. If I could spend a whole day with one person in my family.It would be my cousin Boone. I feel closest to him because me and him are close to the same age. He is only six months older than me,and we talk on X-box alot.I would go to Pizza Hut and buy a pizza with no cheese for him because he is lactose intolerant.I would buy a pepperoni pizza for me.And we would play fortnite together and drink soda and have a cookie for dessert. That is what I would do for the afternoon with my cousin.
    From,
    Ryan

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  13. if i could spend an afternoon with an extended family... well hes dead but thats even better. anyway that person would be Davy Crocket and we would go hunting or talk about the alamo anyway thats who it would be.JACK.k

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  14. If I could spend one day with a family member it would be my dog Norman. We would watch movies together and play fortnite together. We would also go to a creek because Norman LOVES water. Then we would play some more fortnite. Then we would go to the dog park and play. then finaly we would play more fortnite and I could put him on the headset.
    - Bryan

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  15. If I could spend time with family member I would spend time with my dog Pudge. We would sit on the couch and watch a movie our two like Rocky. Then he would fall asleep on my lap and I would play Fortnite With the dream squad Bryan, Seth and Jagger. Then we would take him on a walk to radaner lake. Then I would read with Pudge on my lap. After that I would fall alseep.

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  16. I would love to spend a day with my great grandma Hart, when she was younger. I would go to the bookstore with her and she could recommend books to me, and we could go to the store and buy things galore! I wish we could fly to Australia and ride elephants in Africa, because we could talk for a long time without being disturbed. After we could have a water balloon fight and turn the hose on. Then, we would eat popsicles, and let the air cool. Then, we could go to a lake and tube till we would fall asleep on the boat. But, we would be in the 2000s instead of the 1900s.
    Maggie Kate C #6

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  17. If I could spend an afternoon with someone in my family, it would be Reese, my dog. I chose her because when she licks me, I feel like she is my best friend. If I didn't have her in my life, I would feel like a puzzle missing a piece. Even though we have only been together 2 years, it feels like our hole lives. I would love to be with her even just one afternoon. -Mary

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  18. If i could spend one whole day with someone it would probably be with my dog scout.I would spend a day with my dog because i feel close and protected by scout and i also love to take her on walks and i'm sure she does to.Another reason is i like to play in the back yard with her and also play with her favorite toy witch is a kong last but not least i love to cuddle with her. I love my dog.
    -Ellie

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  19. If I had to spend a day with a family member, I would be with my cousin, Alice. we would go to the park, and we would swing and play all day long! then, when we go home, we will have dinner and play tag, then we watch a movie and stay up late and have a lot of fun!

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  20. If I could spend one day with a family member it would be my grandpa on my dads side. Even know he is disabeld we could still have fun we could go to this state park where handicap people can go and not handicap people can go. We could also go fishing he could take me a ride on the jeep. Through the woods it whould be awsome. We could watch a movie that it is what I whould do with him.charlie.B

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  21. Dear Mrs."Blackmon,"
    I would spend a day with my dad. First, we would go to Ihop. Next, we would go to an amusment park. Then, we would have lunch. After that, we would chillax. Finally, we would have dinner and go to bed.
    -Francie

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  22. If I could spend 1 day with I would choose my sister, Lila Grace
    because she makes me laugh so hard, plus she is my best friend for life. If I were to go somewhere anywhere with, Lila Grace I would
    go to a trampoline park. We both love love love the trampoline park, abd we love to do tumbling we get all of our flips out it is so fun to hang out with my very own sister and she will always be my friend.
    From Millie

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  23. If I could spend a whole day with anyone in my family it would be my grandma, Gigi. I feel very close to her because she really likes moose tracks ice cream just like I do! Anyways, we would start our day by playing some candycrush (her favorite game that I enjoy too). Then after we have play about a million rounds of that we would have honey buns for breakfast! Yummmmmmmm!!!I would make sure she sat next to me to. Then we go look at the hummingbirds.Honey birds as I used to say. After we watched them, we would go to the movies and see whatever good movie was playing. For lunch we would go to ihop to get brunch!I would for sure get the cupcake pancake. YUMMM!!! After that, we would eat a big amount of moose tracks. Then we might have a coloring contest to see who can make the best drawing! Then we will have steak burgers, mashed sweet potatoes, and lemonade for dinner. Lastly, we would watch T.V. together! That's my perfect day with Gigi.
    From,
    Lila

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  24. If I could spend a whole day with one person in my family it would be my Uncle joey my mom`s brother. The reason I would like to spend a whole day with my uncle because he likes to play video games and watch movies. Usually me and my dad and my uncle and my grandpa would go see movies when they come in town for Christmas. I don`t get to talk to him much because he is always working. Next time he come in town for christmas i`m going to show him all the new games I have like Fortnite. And that is what I would do with my Uncle to spend a whole day with him.
    From,
    Jagger

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  25. If I could spend one day with one of my family members. It would be my dads dad hoo is dead but me and him would go somewere out to eat and talk about trains nd have fun. I wish he was still alive.
    Emerson Chappell

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  26. If I could spend one day with one person in my family it would be my cousin Jackson. We are about the same age (I'm six months older that him). We like to go to Titans games. We would pass around the football, and eat hotdogs and brots and drink soda. When we go inside to see the game we get huge Cokes and I get a pizza and he gets popcorn. We go to our seats and enjoy the game (the Titans win most of the time). When the game is over we would toss around the football until the parking lot cleared. That's what I would do with Jackson.
    -Charlie G.

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