Dear students,
Imagine that for one day only you could have a pet monkey! What would you do with your pet? What would you name him/her? What adventures would you two have? Please describe your day with your new friend.
Remember, students, to watch out for run-ons, and to write in complete sentences. I look forward to reading your comments!
Your paragraph must…
- be at least 5 sentences long
- written in complete sentences
- use M.I.N.T.S.
- have a topic sentence and supporting details
- have a closing sentence
Here is an example of an advanced/proficient comment:
If I had a pet monkey, I would name it Bailey. If I could do anything with Bailey, I would go to the park to let her play. Of course, I would have to play too. We would mostly play at the monkey bars. Our hearts would start to pump in excitement. After that, we would go to California Pizza Kitchen. Bailey would get a big pepperoni pizza, and I would get mac and cheese. We would mainly just stay there and talk with each other. After that, we would go to the candy store and get lots of candy. Bailey would get all banana flavored candy. Finally, we would go home and snuggle up on the couch. I would read Curious George to her, and she would fall asleep in my arms. That would be my day with Bailey.
Happy blogging,
Mrs. Braddy
if i had a pet monkey, i would name him Banjo and we would get too swing from vines and fling mud at each other. Also we would eat chocolate and play video games together. Then when he had to go to bed well... WE WOULDN't and we would stay up all night and party. that's what i would do if i had a monkey.
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DeleteIf I had a monkey its name would be JEFFY and we would play fortnite. And go see the grinch in the theaters. And we would go to moes. And buy candy and eat it together. Then we would go play play outside with my dogs.
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DeleteIf I had a monkey I would name it Sam. First, we would watch movies about monkeys and he would yell at the screen. Then, I would read Curious George to him and he would rip up the book. Next, I would go to the store and get him lettuce and get me pasta because I do not like lettuce. Last, we would go to the playground and do anything he wants. Finally, I would fallow him around the and see what he wanted for dinner.
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DeleteYou love lettuce!
DeleteCan you tell him to buy me a pizza while your at it!!?!
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If I had a pet monkey I would name her Iris cause a love the flash . And I would teach her to speak so I could talk to her. Also I would teach Iris to do my homework so I don't have to do it. And i would teach her to read so she could help me perpare for my spelling test. And I would teach her to write so he can do my reading my reading log to bye. Gavin O.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it sir Pawpapa vaughn wiggle pants seth jr a minecraft sword a fortnite lama food man monkey man the 9,876,428th, and I would teach him to do my homework for me, and I would play fortnite all day long, while he does my homework, then when he finishes he and I will go to the park and eat a picnic and swing and slide then go home and tell scary stories and EAT FOOD!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteand i would also teach him to talk to me! and this is from seth!
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DeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would call him George jr, we would have a lot of adventures, but the best is if we ent to the forest together. Together I would also see what he can do.
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name him Mr.Banana Pants, because he would take my bananas, and stuff them in his pants. We would start off the day going to get banana flavored ice cream in our banana pjs. Then, we would stop at Sonic and get lunch, get banana milkshakes, and prank call the monkey catcher. After, we would go to the park and have a competition on the monkey bars. Then, we would stop by Christie Cookies, and get banana flavored cookies. We would head home and film some monkey comedy videos. That would be my best day with Mr.BananaPants.
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DeleteI would name her Sperinkle, Marshmelow, Cookie, Whiptcream paints! I would swim in a sperinkle pool with her. Eat ice cream. Meat her friends. Tacle my brother, and eat more ice cream. Oh-no, that puppy is jeluse of me and Sperinkles Marshmelow Cookie Whiptcream Paints!!!!!!! -Mary
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DeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it Kansas City, and he would talk. Kansas City would take me to Smoothie King. He would buy me 50 soothies, and I would buy him 50 smoothies. Kansas City would pull up my private limo and drive me home. We would pay lazer tag inside Kansas City's underground private suite. Then we would swim in his indoor banana swimming pool. Then we would watch TV in 100 seated movie theater with a 4-K 1000 inch TV until midnight.
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I would name my monkey, mr. banana. The adventures are to gi to a park with it.
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DeleteIf I pet monkey I would name it sabashten. I woud go chifaly andthen go to smoothie king. Then we will go to the mall and him cimb. Then I would take him to a trampolene park and then we woud go to laser tag. Then we would go to biggest candy shop and buy thd shop. And that would be my day with sabashten.
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DeleteIf I had a monkey I would call her Poppy. First, Poppy and I would curl up on the couch with Kringle (he might feel left out if we don't) and watch Standing Ovation. Next, we would go to Sweet Cece's and have jumbo cups of ice cream. Then, we would go to Dollywood. After that, we would take a long nap. Finally, we would have a unicorn party in my bedroom!
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If I had a pet monkey his name would be Joey we would go everywhere. First we would go to the Zoo to see his friends then we would go to the candy store and get so much candy we couldn,t stop running. Then we go to my house and play Fortnite for three hours. And then we would eat bannanas and watch a movie it would be awsome.charlie.B
ReplyDeleteif I had a monkey as a friend his name would be Eubard Thaun. He would live in a cage and I would put him in my basement because he is always taking my bananas and looking like a genie. And the only adventure I would have is putting him in my basement Because he is crazy. But I would go down there and watch football and I would have a TV for him. That is what Is how I would spend time with him.
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If I had a pet monkey, I would name her Bubbles. If I could do anything with Bubbles, I would go get ice cream to what flavor she likes. Of course, I would get ice cream too. We would go to Ben & Jerry's. We would be overjoyed with all of the ice cream! After that, we would go to etc. for a VERY fancy lunch. Bubbles would probably get some kind of banana food, and I would get steak. Then we get to play catch in my backyard with a purple (her favorite color) ball! She would win because she is super fast. Lastly we would soundly in my bed all night. This is my day with Bubbles.
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If I had a monkey I would name it Hotdog man. My faverite thing to do with him would to play video games with him. I would go to bed with him everyday and never let him go. I hope he would do everything with him and always stay with him and never forget him.
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If I had A pet monkey I would name it bananas,and I would go to the moves and see a aninal move. then I would go home and eat bananas,and watch Aladaind.Then I would relax with bananas.
ReplyDeleteI would also go to the pool and swimming with him.Then we would go home and sleep.I forgot sine my name and this part.
DeleteIf I had a monkey I would name him Katriba and if I had one day with him then we would watch scary movies and eat candy and cake all day long, and I mean ALL DAY LONG (24 hours) and then we would do it some more and some more and some more until we couldn't stand it any more and then we would sleep.Sleep.Sleep.Sleep (you get the point?) and then we would wake up, and repeat!
ReplyDeleteKATRIBA FOREVER! (you know if I'm talking to you...) ;)
-Buck B.
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If I had a pet monkey I would name it Jackson the second the monkey would be a boy.Fist we would eat tons of bananas for breakfast.After that we would go to the movies and have banana flavor popcorn and watch goosebumps two.Next we would go to McDonalds for lunch and have banana flavor hamburgers.We would go home and play guess tat banana .We would go to Crows Nest and have banana flavored pasta with banana flavored parmesan.Last but definitely not least we would play video games all night.
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November 13th 2018
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey. I would name him oogly moogly. We would go to scogoa and go to menaly park. After that we would go home and eat all the sugar we wont need! then we would play with my dog>
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey I would name it Bubbles.If I had to go somewhere with Bubbles then I would go to Above All.After that we would go to Same Place.At Sames we would get the cookie with ice-cream on it.
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If I had a pet monkey I would name it Kong. If I could do anything with him I would play with it all day and watch a movie with then eat some lunch at The Grilled Cheesery. After that we would take a privet jet to Florida and go to the different amusment parks like DisneyWorld and Universal. We would spend the whole day there. Then sleep on the jet back to Nashville. then we would get back to my house and have dinner at J.Alexanders. That is the day that I want with a monkey.
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ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet, monkey I would name her Monkey. If I could do anything with Monkey I would go to Mr. Willy Wonka's chocolate factory. I would go to the famous chocolate room and see the Oompa-Loompas. Monkey and I would go play laser tag and go to the candy store and of course Monkey would get banana flavored candy. Then at night we would be told to go to bed like we were supposed to but we wouldn't go to bed we would stay up all night.
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November 13th 2018
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DeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name him Carl. The first thing I would do with Carl is... Obviously eat bananas for breakfast.
ReplyDeleteThen we would go to the zoo and meet all of Carl's monkey friends.
After That we would go out for ice cream at Bobby's Dairy Dip. Then we would watch a movie. That would be my day with Carl.
Haylei Ann
If I had a pet monkey, I would Name it blobby.If I could do anything with blobby I would go to Pinara and we would have a cinnamon scone for breakfast. Then we would go to jumpstreet. And then wen would play fortnite for the rest of the day.
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