Tuesday, November 27, 2018

My Planet

Dear students,

Write at least a 5 sentence paragraph answering the following prompt:

You’re a scientist who has just discovered a new planet. In one year, people will be coming to live on it. What will your planet be like? What will you name your planet? Write a paragraph describing your new planet.

Be sure to include:
  • a topic sentence
  • supporting details
  • complete sentences
  • correct spelling, capitalization (M.I.N.T.S.), and end punctuation.
  • a closing sentence

Here is an example of an advanced/proficient post:
If I discovered a new planet, I would call it Awesomya! It would be made of sand, water, and gushers. You could swim and play all day, and then you could go to Gushers Island and eat. Also, they would serve normal water and healthy food too, so you could survive.There would be animals on the planet, and they would be really fuzzy and cute. There would be no mosquitos or chiggers. People would come to Awesomeya and live there. They would develop the planet just like Earth. I would love to travel to the new planet, Awesomeya.

Happy blogging,
Mrs. Braddy

26 comments:

  1. My planets name would be Maswe and there would be no gravity but still air. So you could float around and still have air so you can breathe. Also, on my planet there would be green grass and blue sky's but it is always a nice tempature. The planet would have new animals floating around and they would look really cool. That is the planet that I would live on.

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  2. If I had my own planet it would be called coster world. It would be like a giant theme park with all the theme parks on earth! The houses would be normal houses but they would be in the middle of a theme park. And everyone would get their own theme park. If I had a planet that is what is would be. JAMES.O

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  3. If I could have a planet to myself it would be named The Gaming Planet.There would be every single videogame ever made at my planet.There would also be a hangout area and it would every single food in the world (except broccoli).There would be an actual fountain with fountain drinks in it.Each video game room would have 10,000 couches and every console it could be played on.You could also meet your favorite gamer whenever you wanted to.You wouldn't drive cars but you would drive quadcrashers around the planet.At night time there would be a huge party that would go on all night.
    -Jackson

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  4. If I found a planet it would be name the dude planet, the dude planet would have all of the good food. It would all be free. Everything would be free, but like buying a house and all the things that are not food. The dude planet would have fuzzy and cute animals and the dude planet would not have any fighting or killing just plane old fun. The dude planet would be all the fun in the world. That is the planet that I would live on. George c

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  5. If I was in space and I found a place to build a restant it would be named get your hairballs. It would have a bunch of cats dogs that would eat cats to make the hair balls. It would have a lot of fun games and a lot of good foods. So if you can come here come here and get your hairball.

    witt.w

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  6. If I discover a plant then it would be called Langan to hunor my family.It would be a planet that you could live on.Only a few people could live on it like all of my friends.And people to sudiey the planet a littel bit more.That would be my planet.
    Livi
    livi

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  7. If I discovered a new planet, I would call it Gummies Landya and gummy hallow! The only reason it had gummies is because people could adopt a gummy as a pet and everything was only $2.00. There would also be any restaurants you want any food! If you want to go a place like Above All you could go! No rules in gummy hallow or gummy land-ya you could even have any car you want and you don't have to be a certain age to drive! The only rule you MUST follow is.... have gummy as a pet because they are lots of fun. There also would be normal stuff like furry animals, people, drinks and food. Everything is colorful, modern, sparkly, spooky, or even if you want it like a puppy house. Everyone would have a pool and a hot tub. puppies would be allowed to roam the street and there would be no dog catchers. Everyone would be allowed to come. My planet would not be like earth but it will form like earth. Come to find out how amazing it will be .That would be my amazing gummy planet.

    -Stella

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  8. If I had a planet its name would be planet gummy. Only kids would be allowed to be on it. And there would be gummy trees, gummy houses, gummy bushes,gummy cars basically everything on earth except it would be a gummy. If you love gummy's than come get on the gummy rocket ship sent from a gummy servant that you can eat. That would be my planet. Bryan

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  9. If I could have a planet I would name it Gummy land. All of my friends would be gummys. I would only want to eat gummys all day. I would eat the planet when ever I wanted to. That is what my gummy planet would be like.

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  10. If I had a planet, it would be named Tramsourus! It would be made of sour candy, so you could always eat sour candy anywhere! Dirt would be flavored chocolate, mud would be chocolate pudding! On this planet you would always smell roses, candy, and daise's! You could live in the mountains, parks, cities, farms, or a regular neighborhood. You would find new animals such as the frisbee. A frisbee is like a throwing frisbee, but in mid-air would turn into a bird with angel wings! If you jumped on certain things you would bounce pretty high. I would love Tramsourus!
    Maggie Kate #6

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  11. if i had a new planet, i would call it Sethlandia, and it would have low gravity, but you could change it to normal gravity, and there would be plants, and it would be like earth, but you won't have to lock the door, because if anyone had a criminal record, they couldn't go, and everything is free, and everyone will have everything that they want. everyone will have a good time at Sethlandia!!!

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  12. if I discoverd a planet it would be called candy planet. There would be all the candy you want. and there would be a 100 foot choclate fountain. and of course you could get real food too. And drinks and no mosquitos or chiggers. And that would be my planet. charlie.B

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  13. If I would to discover a planet it would be called Fortnite Island and there would be a hot air bus called the battle bus and people would jump from the back door of the bus and sky dive and go to all these places like Tilted Towers, Lucky Landing, Risky Reels, Wailing Woods, Lonely Lodge, Paradise Palms, Loot Lake, Lazy Links, Haunted Hills, Greasy Grove, Tomato Town/Tomato Temple which is were my restaurant would be moving on, Viking Village, R.I.P. Moisty Mire and Archany aches, Monster Motel, Junk Junkion, and Dusty Divot and that is what my planet is called

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  14. My planet that I discovered is the candy land It has all the candy's you could imagine. There is a big farestweel that is made of candy everything is made of candy nothing in that world is made of anything but candy. There are no fruits and vegies. But there is drinks that if your thirsty you can have any kind of drink you want. For your home it would be ginger bread houses. I hope you will discover my planet.
    From
    Millie

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  15. I would call my planet Bigrum. It would have 4 sides. The sides would be summer, winter, spring, and fall. Each person would get a bag that wheighs 0.3 pounds and has unlimeted room. Each person would get a deluxe castle, a teleportation button to teleport them to different sides of Bigrum, and an adorable, fluffy, hipoallergentic creature caalled a Littlerum.
    -Francie

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  16. If I discovered a new planet,I would name it Tik Tok unicorn party peeps!My planet will be filled with Phones and ipads to do tik tok and have every tik tok star there!I would also have unicorns that are cold and white and peeps because you need peeps!You could make thousands and thousands of tik toks and you can ride a unicorn and did I mention there's also pegases and you can fly!Everybody would be wearing jean shorts some ripped and some not because its always really warm they would also wear a really cute shirt (women)and a t shirt(guys)It would all look like a rainbow.Thats how my Tik Tok unicorn party peeps planet works!
    -Ellie

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  17. If I could have a planet I would name it Gavintopa. It would have every foodyou could imange besides vegtables eww. It would be like a real life V.R to. It would be like real live but you can't feal the pain in games like Fortnite. And every pro football team and basketball team would live there and practice there. I would have a lambergina convertble. And I would have a manison that is 5 floors tall with a pitching mechane and a basketball court. Anyways if I had a plantet that would be it.

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  18. If I discovered a new planet, I would name it ME. That stands for “My Earth”. On ME (since it’s called “MY” earth) we would live in gingerbread houses, have green sprinkles as grass, and have butterscotch trees. The color of my planet would be, light blue, light pink, light yellow, and lavender. It would also have a marbled look. The sky would be lavender, but it wouldn’t be blue. For fun we swim in chocolate, and we would have caramel hot tubs...yummm! I would make sure everyone that lived on ME had 2 kittens, one gray & white, the other black. People would dress up the gray & white on as a dolphin, and the black one as cookie! This would be the best planet ever!

    -Lila

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  19. if i could have a planet it would be called chewy. It would be called chewy because the planet would be a gummy orange and there would be gummy soda rivers and there would be gummy streets and gummy houses, and cars, and gummy sidewalks, and lamp posts. and there was candy grass and the resturaunts served every gummy food and everything was edible.
    -JACK

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  20. If I discovered a planet then it would be called Candy land! It would be gummy bear ground & lollipop trees. There would be chocolate houses & ice cream pools with peachy O's flotes. The most famous people would be there & we would have a huge party. It would be so fun to have a planet like that. -Mary

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  21. If I discovered a planet, I would call it Funk. It is a planet where people are always excited, happy, and all that good stuff. There are three country on Funk, Charlie, G, and Funk. Everything on Funk is free. The ocean is made of lemonade (and it's not sticky). There are three types of animals on Funk. the partier, the pie, and the abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz. The partier is an animal that looks like a turtle and parties. The pie is an animal that looks like a pie but it can move and goes moo. The abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz is a moose that goes abcdefg... over an over again. That is what my planet would be like.
    -Charlie G.

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  22. If I discovered a planet it would be called The Candy World! And the thing about my planet is that you can eat anything! Like you can eat the even eat the road! That's because every single thing in the entire world is made out of candy! Like if you are on a road trip you don't even need to stop for food or a drink because you can make a leak and then drink the gasolene because the gasolene is candy and o is the car!!!1
    From,
    Emerson

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