Monday, March 4, 2013

If You Could...

Dear students,

If you could do anything you wanted when you grow up, what would do? 

Be sure to include:
  • a topic sentence
  • supporting details
  • complete sentences
  • correct spelling, capitalization, and punctuation
I cannot wait to read your response!

Your teacher,
Ms. B

34 comments:

  1. when I grow up I would want to be a architect because I love to make an awesome house. It would have trampolean floors and a trap door that would lead to a secret room.

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  2. If I could I would learn how to do mixed martial arts. Then I would become a mixed martial arts champion! Once I had tons of money I would by a mansion and keep doing mixed martial arts!!!

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  3. If I could be anything when I get older I would want to be a gymnast. I would want to be a gymnast because ever since I was a little baby I loved to watch gymnastics, and I love to do gymnastics. Another reason I would want to be a gymnast is because gymnastics makes you have really strong muscles. Also gymnastics helps you work on your flexibility.

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  4. If I could do anything in the world when I grow up, I would probably be a gold medalist for swimming in the Olympics. I would beat Michael Phelps record for most decorative Olympian. I would go to five Olympics and be in first every race. That probably will not happen. I hope it will.

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  5. When I grow up I want to be a designer. I want to design houses, hotels, and have my own fashion company like the company Ivanka, or Bob Macky (The shoe company and the guy who designs dresses for the Oscars ). Then I would open my fashion company, it's name would be Eclipse. It would be world wide, and very famous known to all the celebrities. And then I would be happy.

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  6. Maxxxxxssssssss #2March 6, 2013 at 7:08 AM

    When I grow up I want to do mixed martial arts. Then I will be a mixed martial arts champion! Once I had a lot of money I would design my own mansion and it would have a water slide coming from room into my pool. It would also have a private training room for me to practice in.

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  7. If I could do anything that I wanted to do when I grow up, I would be a teacher. I think that I would be a teacher because you get to meet new kids every year, and you can become good friends with the kids. Sometimes when you are a teacher, the kids teach you something new that you didn't know. I think that it would it would be fun to be a teacher also because you get to teach new things,and you get to learn new things.

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  8. When I grow up I want to be a actress. I want to be an actress because I love to act. I also would want to be an actress because it allows me to be myself. Also it helps me feel like I could do any thing I want to do. It also provides a good profit.

    If the actress job dose not work out, I would like to be a detective. I would like to be a detective because I really like solving mysteries. I love solving crime scenes on shows that I watch. Also because when ever there is a mystery anywhere, I'm on the job and ready to solve it!

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  9. If I could do anything when I grow up I would be on lots of movies, TV shows, and go to lots of award shows. I would also become a famous singer and perform at lots of concerts. last of all I would become a vet and help all different kinds of animals except for snakes and reptiles. I would cure them from any sickness they could have, I would care for them, and I would give them surgery whenever they needed it. I would also adopt lots of animals like dogs, cats, and bunnies. I would own my own private jet and be rich and famous. Last of all I would make appearances on many different movies and TV shows. That's what I' d do when I grow up.

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  10. When I grow up, I want to be a translator. I feel like I am fit for the job of being a translator because I know many different languages. For example, I know Chinese, English, and a little Spanish. I have always tried to make up a new language so I could be very known about. I also love the way that you get to meet different people while traveling around the helping others have a better time in their vacation. T HAT'S WHY!

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  11. I would like to be an NBA or NFL player when I grow up. I would like to because I like to play sports. The players in the NBA and NFL inspire me to become one.

    One player that inspires me in the NFL is a player named Rodney Lott. He inspires me because when he hit somebody, and his finger got infected. He walked into the hospital later and told the doctor,"I'm tired of this thing being infected!"And he cut it off just to play. He became a Hall Of Fame player, and was a great safety for the San Francisco 49ers. This inspires me to play the game no matter what, and be a man like he was.

    One player that inspires me in the NBA is a player named Kirie Irving. He plays for the Cleveland Cavilers, and is the starting point guard. His strength is driving and dunking,but he won the NBA three contest. This inspires me to become better at something that is not my strength.

    My strength is shooting, and Kirie Irving inspires me to become better at defense. These two players will inspire me the rest of my life.

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  12. When I grow up I would like to be an architect because I can have a awesome house that I made. It would have trampolean floors and a trap door that would lead to a secret room. I would also want to be an inventor so I could invent cool stuff.

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  13. If I could do something, I would be a football player. I would plat college football for Ohio State or Oregon. When I go pro I would love to play at the Baltimore Ravens, and win a Super Bowl!!! Then I would play for awhile about 14 years. Lastly I would stop playing and coach a team.

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  14. I would like to own a zoo. In my zoo there would be Lions, Bears, and Llamas named Carson. There would also be a really cold place where you cold see the titanic with all these fish around it, also there would be polar beards and penguins. My zoo would be huge. In another room it will be all dark with no lights, and in that room will be fish from the bottom of the ocean with squid and those fish with the lights on their heads! That is what my zoo would be like if I had one.

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  15. When I grow up I want to be a architect for houses and backyards. My dad and I have always loved dreaming up crazy ideas about a circular mountain house with a slide instead of stairs. Or a mini town in our backyard with a mini fire station, a castle, or even a fountain. I love to draw these ideas out, then build a 3D module with a kit I got for Christmas.

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  16. If I would be anything I would want to be when I grow up , I would be an architect because a love to build. Also because I want to make a hobbit house because I like the Lord Of The Rings and the Hobbit. I also want to build the largest building ever, and I want to build my house to make it look like a hobbit house.

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  17. If I could do anything I would go to China. Why? Because I would like to see all of their cultures and the holidays they celebrate. Going to China will be a great experience for me and for anyone who comes with me. There are three top things that I must do, they are.....
    *Learn 10 Chinese words.
    *Buy Chinese candy and see what it tastes like.
    *Meet a Chinese person and interview them on their life.
    These things will help me become a Chinese expert! From one on of my friends Belle, she told me that they don't celebrate Christmas. OMG!! I would like to learn more about that and the great country of China!

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  18. When I grow up, I want to play football my whole life. I would like to play at Georgia or Vanderbilt for college because I want to play for a team that hasn't had a very good chance of going to a Bowl game. If I drafted to the NFL, I would like to be a 1st Round Draft pick to the Baltimore Ravens.

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  19. When I grow up I would totally want to be a designer. Why? because I do l little designing things like bed rooms, dream homes, fancy outfits for parties, or hair styles. It is so fun and I would like to follow in my aunts foot steps because she designs jewelry for Stella and Dot. Some times I help her make new bracelets when I see her at thanksgiving break in Pine Hurst, North Carolina.

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  20. When I grow up I would want to be a basket ball player , because I loved playing that sport ever since I started playing it. And it makes you better with your eye hand coordination. And maybe one day I could become a professional basket ball player. That is what I want to do when I grow up.

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  21. When I grow up I want to be a scientist because I like to study lots of different subjects like animals,and gems.I also like studying natural forces of destruction like tsunamis, earthquakes, volcanoes, sinkholes, etc. I also think it would be fun to see what I can discover because I am curios about a lot of things like ways that tsunamis start, how sinkholes are so deep, and how volcanoes erupt

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  22. When I grow up I want to be a race car driver like Danica Patrics, or the first woman football coach.I want to be a race car driver because when I was little my dad was in charge of getting all of the race car drivers to come to Suntrust Sound & Speed. My brother and I got to meet all of the drivers and even sit in their cars. I love being in the racetrack. I would also like to be the first woman football coach because I love watching and playing football with my brother and his friends. Over the years I have learned a lot about the NFL draft and how the game works. I love going out to lunch on Sundays to watch football. If I could I would love to be on a football team. If I could do one of these things, I wound be the most happy girl in the world!! :)

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  23. I want to be a professional lacrosse player. I also want to play for Virginia. I t is my favorite lacrosse team. I play lacrosse a lot in by backyard. I also play it during recess. Me and Frank pass it and shoot it in to a spot. I want to play lacrosse my whole life.

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  24. I would be an architect and a drummer. I would be a drummer in a band and play at concerts all around the world and play at places no one has played before. When I am a architect I would build modern houses in crazy places like make a house with an up sided own house look! I would make jungle houses, under water houses, Maybe even cave houses.

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  25. I would probably want to be a veteran. Our country needs someone to do the job! Even if i don't like it, i would remind myself that I am doing it for your country. My grandfather was in the air force and my great-grandfather was fighting in world war ||. They both survived and inspired me a lot. My family and friends most likely would try to change my mind. I will always be in debt to my country and will fight for its freedom. That is what I want to do when I grow up!

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  26. Meredith Lane FinucaneMarch 7, 2013 at 9:38 AM

    When I grow up, I would like to be soccer player, for the USA soccer team. I would like to go to the Olympics, and win a gold medal.I would like to travel all over the world, with my team mates.My team mates would be Anna Parker,Anna Claire, Alyson,Claire, and some Ensworth girls.

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  27. When I grow up I want to be a singer/ songwriter. I want to be a singer because I have always loved singing, even when I was little, and it lets me loose myself in the music. I want to be a songwriter because my dad is a songwriter, and I want to follow in his footsteps. For Christmas I got a songwriting journal so that I could write my thoughts and feelings in it. This is my only dream, and hopefully one day it will come true!

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  28. If I could do or be anything I wanted when I grew up, I would first go to Australia and study about extreme animals. Then I would become a vet in Australia for any animal that gets hurt or is close to dying. I would heal kangaroos, koalas, snakes, bats, chameleons, etc. After three years of studying and being a vet, I would go out to sea and be a marine biologist. I swim with sharks and sea turtles, and train dolphins. I would get up close to jellyfish and salt water crocodiles. I'd raise sea turtles in captivity and have a puffer fish for a pet. After six more years in Australia, I would travel to Brazil and sleep in the Amazon Rain forest. After my experience with the crocodiles in Australia, I would train the alligators in the Amazon. I would nurse every hurt creature, and sleep with the sloths. I would play with baby Jaguars, Ocelots, and Maraguys. After my trip to Brazil for two years, I would travel to the South Pole to study Polar Bears and Penguins. I would only stay there for six months because it would be so cold. Then I would go back to Australia and do what I did all over again.

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  29. When I grow up I want to be a Gummy bear! That can snow board, sky dive, and break lots of world records. Then I would learn mixed martial arts and challenge Maxxxxxssssssss to a fight,after that I would win and be rich and famous.Then I would learn how to ride a dirt bike and jump it over the White house, after that I would buy a mansion that would have a diving board on the roof then I could jump 10 level to my indoor pool. Also I would buy a Bugatti (worlds fastest car) and jump it over the Statue of Liberty.

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  30. When I grow up I would like to go to Egypt. When I go to Egypt a list of things i have to do there.
    >Take a tour in a pyramid!
    >Explore outside!
    >Ask a person who lives there what they do one a daily basis
    >Try their food
    When I am older i would be so exited to go to Egypt. I would be most exited about going to a pyramid. I would be most exited to see a pyramid because they are so old and unique. Also i think it would be a great experience for me.

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  31. SSSSEEEBBBAAASSSTTTIIIAAANNNMarch 7, 2013 at 9:45 AM

    If I had to do something when I am older it be a pro football player for sure. I would want to play for Alabama in college and play Swope and Zak .Then Swope Zak and I could be a package and go to the Baltimore Ravens for first round draft pick. We could be the best team in the league and win a bunch of SUPER BOWLS.

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  32. When I grow up I really want to be a desighner. Why? because I do little projects like making barbie dresses for doll dresses, trying wacky hair styles, and making kid dream bed rooms. I think it is really fun because dresses are really pretty and fun to make.

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  33. If I was the Principal at Oak Hill School for a day, I would let everybody come to school at ten o'clock. Then when they got here, they were allowed to do gymnastics in the hallway,and if they didn't want to do that, they could play in the classroom. They could choose what ever they wanted for lunch and could have seconds on dessert. They could have what ever they wanted for snack,and they could have snack when ever they wanted. When they finished a worksheet, they don't have to do independent reading, they can do gymnastics on the carpet. They could have recess as long as they wanted.

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