Wednesday, November 16, 2016

When I Grow Up!

Dear students,

Write at least a 5 sentence paragraph answering the following question:

If you could have any job in the world, what would you do and why?

Be sure to include:
  • a topic sentence
  • supporting details
  • complete sentences
  • correct spelling, capitalization (M.I.N.T.S.), and end punctuation.
  • a closing sentence
Here is an example of an advanced/proficient post:

My dream job is to be a dolphin trainer. I would be able to spend all my time with my favorite animal dolphins, and I would get to spend a lot of time in the water. I would be in shows with the dolphins, and I might also get to train other animals such as, an orca whale or a beluga whale. I could also live near the beach and go there whenever I wanted to. Every morning I would wake up and go to my job. Then I would get to spend the whole day there with the other trainers. Then late at night I would go home. It would be the best job ever!

I cannot wait to read your responses!

Your teacher,
Mrs. Braddy

1 comment:

  1. My dream job is to be a Professional Gymnast. My dream of being an athlete is a recent dream. I would practice constantly. To stay fit I would have to be on a diet. My diet includes... Apples,Salad, and Protein. The reason I want to be a Gymnast is that taking gymnastics is very fun & competitive. If I was absent one day I would have to do 5 hundred pushups. I would never be lazy on the coach like a lot of people. I would always be conditioning or practicing new skills. Everyone say I should be a Tennis player, a Basketball player, or a mammal trainer but NO!!! That would my dream job.

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