Imagine that for one day only you could have a pet monkey! What would you do with your pet? What would you name him/her? What adventures would you two have? Please describe your day with your new friend.
Remember, students, to watch out for run-ons, and to write in complete sentences. I look forward to reading your comments!
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If I had a pet monkey, I would name it Bailey. If I could do anything with Bailey, I would go to the park to let her play. Of course, I would have to play too. We would mostly play at the monkey bars. Our hearts would start to pump in excitement. After that, we would go to California Pizza Kitchen. Bailey would get a big pepperoni pizza, and I would get mac and cheese. We would mainly just stay there and talk with each other. After that, we would go to the candy store and get lots of candy. Bailey would get all banana flavored candy. Finally, we would go home and snuggle up on the couch. I would read Curious George to her, and she would fall asleep in my arms. That would be my day with Bailey.
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Mrs. Braddy
If I had a pet monkey, I would name it Georgie. If I could do anything with Georgie I would go to the zoo so she can see all her monkey friends and family. After the zoo, we would go to Sportsmans Grille because we can watch all the football games we wanted to! Georgie would get chicken tenders with an extra load of french fries and I would get mac and cheese with a side of a salad. We would go to the mall and get a ton of nerd ropes from the candy store inside the mall! we would then watch tv and go to sleep. That would be my day with Georgie.
ReplyDeleteIf iI had a pet monkey, I would name it coco. If I could do anything with Coco, I would go to the zoo to see all the other animals and especially visit the monkey habitat. Then we would go to Sam's to eat lunch. Coco would have mac n' cheese and I would have chicken tenders. Next we would go to the movies and see Monkey Land. Finally we would fall asleep in the movie theater until the janitor found us. Then he would wake us up and start yelling. That would be my day With a pet monkey.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name him Snooty. First we would go to the trampoline and jump for a long time. After we are done and feel sick from all that jumping we will go climb a tree. He would help me get to the top since he can climb really good. When we get to the top we will climb back down and race each other inside. We will eat lunch at Moes. The best place in the world. After we will go to the candy store and feast on candy. We would come home and watch Youtube. Finally we would go to sleep while watch Youtube.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, its name would be fat bananas. First I would put a auburn jersey on him to go to a auburn football game. And when they score a touchdown we would throw banana peels in the air. Then we would fly to Atlanta and see a hawks game. Then we would go see a Capitals game . We would also go to an ice cream shop. I would get cake batter and he would get banana. then we would run around acting bananas.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name it RC Jr. If I could do anything with him I would start out by letting him outside and he would climb up all the trees until 9 o'clock in the morning. Then we would go to the zoo and met all of his monkey friends in St.Louis. Then we would ride the zoo train and have lunch while doing it. Then we go home and I would read him 10 little monkeys jumping on the bed and he would fall fast asleep.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name him Sir. Chubby Knuckles. We would start the day off arguing if bananas are better than pears and come to a conclusion that they're both great. Then we would hug each other on the couch watching tv. After I would some how teach him to talk and ask him if he could teach me parkour. He would probably say yes and it would take hours, but he eventually would teach me to be a parkour boss and I could do cool things like do backflips off vines and other things that I would never be able to do without Sir. Chubby Knuckles the coolest monkey ever. The day would end with us arguing about fruits and then come to a agreement and then talk about stuff till the end of the day. That would be my day with Sir. Chubby Knuckles.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name her Coco. We would start out the day eating breakfast at Waffle House. Then we would go to the movies and see a comedy movie. (don't want to freak her out)
ReplyDeleteAfter the movie we would go to a Titans game and eat a lot of BoJangles chicken tenders. They would also win like they did last weekend! After the game we will go to Otter Creek and Coco will drive the boat at fast as she wants while I water ski. We would then go to Itty Bitty DoNuts and get snow caps, cinnamon sugar, and glazed donuts. After donuts we will go back home and read Flip Side or Percy Jackson. After reading will take my puppy to the park and on a walk. Finally we will eat at Moe's Southwestern Grill, Cinco De Mayo, or Chipotle and then that night watch netflix and go to bed.
If I had a pet monkey, I would name her Emily. If I could anything with Emily we would go to the library and teach her how to read and then we would read books together until noon. For lunch we would go to Subway and I would get a ham, cheese, bacon,and lettuce, and then she would get a ham and cheese sandwich. Then we would go and get ice cream. Finely we would go home and we would watch the Annie and eat popcorn, and she would fall asleep. That would be my day with Emily.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name her GiGi. It would be on a Saturday so I could be free all day. We would go up to my tree house and climb on top of the roof and eat lunch together. GiGi would have a peanut butter banana and I would have mac'n'cheese(my favorite!). For a little treat after wards we would have some chocolate cake and banana pudding. That would be my day with GiGi!
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name it Cheesy Chicken Man. I don't know why I would name it that but I would. We would dress up as potatos and be couch potatos all day and watch Family Feud. Every now and then I would give him rainbow monkey potato chips that say
ReplyDelete"Good God man, you almost got the cheese touch..." Then I would say
"The cheese touch?" Then the Rainbow monkey chip would say.
"No one knows when, or how. But this cheese has been sitting on the blacktop, waiting for it's next victim!" That is what I would tell my monkey.
If I had a monkey for one day, I would Call him Bob. We would go to the zoo. At the zoo we would look at all of the exhibits. Then we would go to the movies together and see all the movies there. After that we would go eat bananas. Finally I would say good bye, and he would live happily ever after.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey, I would name it Robadobflob. First we would have ice cream then we would have more ice cream then we would have more ice cream. Then we would bounce on the trampoline till we barfed. Then we would get a genie, my first wish would be for infinite wishes. Then I would wish for the monkey to stay forever. Then I would wish For all of my friend to never die including the monkey. Then I would wish if the monkey could talk. Then we would watch White House Down, while eating steak and plantains. Then we would go to the Dominican Republic and stay there for a month and ride a flying boat. Then we would go home and do stuff.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey for a day, his name would be Little Larry. Little Larry and I would go to a Texas A & M football game against Baylor. Then we would go to Dave and Busters. We would throw corn at the workers, and they would throw a party for us. After are party we would fly to Australia and sing in a opera. The opera people would sing rock while Little Larry and I play jazz. We would fly to China to eat sushi at a sumo fight. That would be my day with Little Larry.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, It's name would be Helen. In the morning she would eat oatmeal with bananas and I would have mini pancakes. After breakfast, We would go to the park and play on the monkey bars, Then we would buy balloon animals.She would get a monkey and I would get a turtle.Then we would walk to Paridise bakery. I would get cookie dough Ice cream and she would a chocolate chip cookie. We would walk home and we would pack our suit cases and move to Austrailia. In Austrailia, we would ride a kangaroo home. Then we would asleep. That would be my day with Helen.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey, I would name it Ben. Ben and I would everywhere together. The first place I would take him would be Paraguay. We would go to the jungle and play with all the animals. Then we would go to Australia and have Australian food. At the restaurant Ben would have Banana Souffle and for dessert he would have Banana Cream Pie. I would have lobster with melted butter on it and for a side I would have a flounder . My dessert would have a huge omelet with cheese, ham, vanilla , and stake. After that we would fly back home in an awesome private jet. That would be my day with a monkey.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name him Benny. Benny and I would started off every day with bananas for breakfast. After, we would plant a banana trees in our backyard. For lunch we would eat pizza, Benny would try a pineapple pizza and I would eat a cheese pizza. In the afternoon, we would go to a football game and Benny would be the halftime show. At night, Benny and I would stay up late and watch monkey show. Finally, our day would end with Benny eat a midnight snack of bananas, and us going to our rooms to go to sleep.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey,I would name it jerry.Jerry and I would do everything that there ever was.First we would go to universal studios,and ride the simpsons ride.Then after that we would go to champs chicken shack where we would eat fried chicken legs.After that we would go to harry potters wizarding world and ride the ride in hogwarts castle.And then the last thing we would do is go see a movie and ride in a limo to above all.And that would be my day with Jerry.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it Jeff. Me and Jeff would play donkey kong and other cool games at an arcade. Than we would go get ice-cream I would get chocolate and he would get banana. Later we would go and have a video game war contest. That would be my day with Jeff.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name her Maddie. Maddie and I would wake up in the morning and eat a few bananas. Then, we would go to the park and play on the monkey bars, swings, and slides. Then ,we would go to a place with lots of trees and Maddie would teach me how to climb and swing on the branches. Then, we would go to the zoo and Maddie would see all her monkey friends. Then, we would go to a trampoline park and jump until we touch the ceiling. Next, we would go get Moe's for dinner. Finally, we would go home and snuggle up on the couch and watch Trolls. That would be my day with Maddie!
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name it Banana. Banana and I would go to every single fun place you could think of. Then, We would eat as much as we could. After that, we would sleep for five hours until we fell asleep. That is what I would do if I had a pet monkey.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would call him Timmy. The first thing we would do is go outside and climb trees. Then we would go on a walk to the park and walk along the trails and play on the play set. Then we would get lunch. He would get 5 bananas and a smoothie. I would get a steak with Sprite. For desert we would get bananas dipped in chocolate. Then we would go home in a limo. That would be my day with a monkey.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name it CoCo. CoCo and I would go everywhere. For breakfast CoCo and I would have bananas and oatmeal. The first place I would take CoCo is a gymnastics gym. I would teach CoCo how to do a lot of gymnastics tricks. Next, I would take her to the Zoo, so she could see all of her pet friend. After, I would take CoCo to the park. So that we could go on the monkey bars, swings, and the slides. Last, I would take CoCo to The Mall, and we would shop until we drop. While we are at The Mall I would take CoCo to the Rainforest Cafe. CoCo would order a big cheese pizza and I would order Mac and Cheese. When CoCo finished her pizza she would want to order another one because she is so hungry. When we finished our dinner I would take CoCo to Build A Bear. CoCo would a Unicorn named Majestic and I would get a Bunny named Apples. That is what I would do if I had one day to spend with CoCo.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it Banana the monkey. The monkey and I would go to the water park and go on all the rides and after the water park we would go to the movies, and if they didn't let the monkey and me in the I would hide the monkey in my backpack and we would go see the new Tarzan movie. When the movie was over we would go and play on my farm and play in the trees.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey for one day, I would name him Mjmilk. First in the morning we will go to my friend, Charlie Buffkin house. When we go to play video games we let the monkey play and he beat me, well isn't that shocking. Next we would go to my next door neighbor Luke, and throw the football.When I was playing QB,he intercepted it and scored. Another shocking moment. Anyway we would go to Mississippi and spend the night at the camp.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey for a day I would name him George. Me and George would first decide on if we should go to Waffle House or I Hop. George chooses Waffle house because he was not in the mood for I Hop. Once we got to Waffle House we put our face strait into the menu on what to order. We both got the waffle. And then when we were done we went biking on the trails. Then we would go back to the house and have lunch. We both had pizza
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey for one day, I would name it Lasey. Lasey and I would go the Whippoorwill and go tree climbing. After that we would go to mickeyds. She would get a banana split milkshake and I would have a mcflurry. Then we would watch a movie at take a nap. When we wake up we would go to climb Nashville. After we were done climbing we would go home at have a dance party till 12:00am when the person picks her up.
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