Dear students,
Write at least a 5 sentence paragraph answering the following prompt:
You’re a scientist who has just discovered a new planet. In one year, people will be coming to live on it. What will your planet be like? What will you name your planet? Write a paragraph describing your new planet.
Be sure to include:
- a topic sentence
- supporting details
- complete sentences
- correct spelling, capitalization (M.I.N.T.S.), and end punctuation.
- a closing sentence
Here is an example of an advanced/proficient post:
If I discovered a new planet, I would call it Awesomya! It would be made of sand, water, and gushers. You could swim and play all day, and then you could go to Gushers Island and eat. Also, they would serve normal water and healthy food too, so you could survive.There would be animals on the planet, and they would be really fuzzy and cute. There would be no mosquitos or chiggers. People would come to Awesomeya and live there. They would develop the planet just like Earth. I would love to travel to the new planet, Awesomeya.
Happy blogging,
Ms. Blackmon
If I had a planet, I would name it Pug Play Planet. There would be a restaurant called Pug play place where your pugs can play all day. The planet would be infected with pugs and they would be cubby. The outside of the planet would look like a giant pug face. There will be lots of snow and the pugs will have fuzzy jackets. That would be a awesome planet.
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Deletepugs are cool dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteI have my own pug named Maddie
DeleteIf I discovered a planet, it would be called Water World. Water World would be completely covered in water. Everyone would be able to breathe under water. To get to places, you would swim or ride on a boat. The houses would be exactly like normal houses except covered with water. For example, you would sleep on beds that float on the water. If you went to a restaurant, they would seat you on a big table that floats. There would be sections of the planet for animals only. I would love to live in Water World!
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DeleteMy planet would be called Sunshine Central. It would be made of sand and water, and that means a lot of beaches and lakes! Infinite animals would live there such as gummy worms,gummy bears,gummy sharks,gummy unicorns, and gummy fish. It would be prepared for all the humans so it has 8 billion mansions for them to live in. Sunshine Central is almost always sunny, because it only rains at night. Sunshine Central would also have many forest, now your may be thinking my planet is huge, well it is! It is 9,000,000,000,000,000 miles long. I would love to live there, who else?
ReplyDeletesuper gummy my man!!! :) :) :)
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DeleteIf I discovered a new planet, I would call it penguin planet. You would meet cute and cuddly baby penguins. It would be the best new vacation spot. It would be miles away but you would ride in a jet ski that would only take you 10 minutes to get there. Once you get there you could play beach vollyball, and jump in the ocean. The penguins would be doing tricks in the ocean. I would love to travel to the new planet, Penguin planet.
ReplyDeleteWould it be cold there?
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DeletePENGUINS FOR LIFE
DeleteIf I discovered a new planet, I would call it penguins,planet. It would be full of penguins,. There would be a adoption center were you could buy new penguins,. It would have snow every were,so you could make snow angles with the penguins,, There would be water so you could swim with the penguins,and a hot tub so you would not get to cold. If you love penguins,I recomend going to the new planet, pingun planet.
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DeleteIf I could have a planet, it would by called chocolate awesome. The roads would be chocolate and there would not be any cars the cars would be motor boats and anyone over the age of 5 can drive.The restaurants would not just serve chocolate it would also have healthy foods so you can be healthy. That is what my planet would be like.
ReplyDeleteIf I discovered a new planet, I would name it planet bossem. There would be a beast mode water park with 10 water coasters. Then it would have a big amusement park. There will be a 500 ft tall roller coaster that goes upside down 10 times. Then each person would have their very own private beach with a drink bar where you can get any kind of drink you're in the mood for. There will also be a restaurant at everybody's private beach. At your restaurant you can get anything you want. Then there would be a zoo with every animal from every country. There will also be a aquarium with every animal from every country even PENGUINS! If I lived on that planet I would have the life!
ReplyDeleteIf I could find a planet it would be Kylo's planet. On Kylo's planet there would be a rollercoaster for you to ride in to get to places. I would also install Sam's Place and Pancake Pantry. There would be a huge ocean with a huge tube straight through the water so you could go to my favorite place Kylo's island. It would have a huge beach and a hotel called Kylo's hotel!! That would be my favorite planet.
ReplyDeleteIf I discovered a new planet it would be called, Da boss awesome sause. On Da boss awesome sause there would be lots of restaurants called Little Ki's! In all of Little Ki's there would be really really good food. And in pet stores, instead of dogs and cats there would be mythical creatures. Also there would be no poisonous snakes or anything that you can get hurt from. I would love love love going to Da boss awesome sause! Comment down below if you would want to be on my planet
ReplyDeleteI would totaly get a dragon! and I have a quistion. would there be any non-poisonis snakes? reply on my blog, please. :) =);)
DeleteMy planet would be called Real Myth, because all sorts of mythical creatures running around. There would be different invorments, so if you wanted it to be in hot weather, you could go to one side of the planet, and if you wanted cold weather, you could go to the other side of the planet. Houses would be underground or floating. There would be tons of plants, and no deserts. Gravity would not be the same, so you would bounce slightly when you walked. The planet would have sevral moons that would be home to fairy tale creatures, and fable creatures too. That is what my plant would be like.
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DeleteAWWWWWWWWWSOOOOOOOOOOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE MITHIC ANIMALES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteIf I could have my own planet it would be called, Awesomeness World! There would be different kinds of activities. For example, you could go biking, and go on hikes. Also there would be a beautiful ocean, and you could go and ride dolphins and get to have lunch with Killer whales. If you did not really like all of the active activities then you could go to an art class, or a gardening class. Also, there would be healthy yummy food every day and different smoothies and other healthy drinks to try out. I really would love to travel to Awesomeness World.
ReplyDeleteIf I discovered a new planet,I would call it Funa. It would have 38 beaches and 100 candy stores. It would have 1,000 Chick Fil A. It would have what earth has. And there will be no bad guy's. My planet will have your own robots that do your homework for you. It would be Awesome to have a planet.
ReplyDeleteIf I discovered a new planet, it would be named party planet! There at party planet there would be animals, football, soccer, and other sports. Half of the planet is for animals and the other half is for humans. Humans can still also go on the animal side, and animals can go on the humans side. You are not aloud to kill the animals unless of an emergency. Girls are NOT aloud!!! party planet is an only boys planet!:) Everyone should come to Party Planet!:)
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DeleteIf I found a new planet, I would name it Carolineville. There would be creatures that look like colorful fur balls with googly eyes, they would be called, fur balls. There would also be whales,puppys,and every sea creature. The grass would be lime green, and the trees would be perfect for climbing. There would be 1 contenet and 5 oceans. I wish Carolineville was a planet.
ReplyDeleteIf I discovered a planet, I would name it would be named Savy Land. It would have all you can imagine like there would be five six story restaurants that mostly serve dessert. There would be twenty beaches at my planet and ten islands for picnics. Also there will be one thousand houses and they all have swimming pools and grills. Then there are fifteen stores and candy cane valley. I would love to travel to Savy Land.
ReplyDeleteIf I discovered a planet, it would be called Swag Central. It would be a infinit party with fun games and prizes. Every thing on Swag Central is infinite. It only rains at night. All video games are virtual reality games so you can really be part of the action. Everybody has a mobile home which sucks you in to a backpack. The backpack is your home. I would love to discover Swag Central.
ReplyDeleteIf I was on that planet I would never leave.
DeleteJC where is Swag Central.
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DeleteSO MUCH SWEG!!!!!!!
DeleteIf I discovered a planet, I would name it Lackett.I would name it Lackett because that name would be my two dogs name combine.My two dogs names are Hackett and Leia.It would Have puppies and dogs all over.and once you hot to Lackett you would be transformed to a puppy if you were a kid, and you would be transformed into a dog if you were an adult.Lackett would have a system that you clap your hands twice then you say what you want,so a puppy butler comes and brings it to you or does what you said.I would love to have my own planet
ReplyDeleteI wish I lived there!!!!
DeletePUPPY FIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteThat would Be AWESOME!!!!!! I would not want to leave that planet EVER![unless I wanted to go back to my planet]
DeleteI would have a Teddy Bear dog. Yes, it is a real thing(:-)}
DeleteIf I found a new planet it would be called Happyville. There would be cute fuzzy animals, that looked like fluff balls. There would be regular food and water. The trees would be perfect for climbing and there would be fifty different beaches. There would also be chocolate waterfalls, and a cloud village where everything was made out of clouds. There would also be pickle town, and cotton candy forest. If Happyville was a planet everything would be perfect!
ReplyDeleteIf I traveled to that land I would be sooo fat from eating all of that delicious food.
DeleteI want to live there
DeleteFUZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZY!!!!!!!!!!!!
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If I discovered a new planet, it would be called Opossumless Awesomeness. There wouldn't be any opossums! Opossums are gross. It would have monkeys, whales, dolphins, giraffes, and any other sweet cute animal. Everyone would get free ice cream! You could do really fun activities for free! Everyone would include you in everything. You could go to a trampoline park and there would be no line because it would be really big. My planet would be ten times bigger than earth so everything could be ten times bigger! This would be my planet if I discovered a new planet.
ReplyDeleteThat would be awesome! Would your planet have any hippos???
DeleteIf I had a planet, it would be called........ DA PIG PLANET! The planet would look like a BIG, FAT, PIGOO. Everyone that would go there would instantly turn into........A PIG!!
ReplyDeleteThere would be PIG sports, PIG football, PIG baseball, and PIG basketball. Jr. pigs would go to DA JR. PIG ACADEMY!!! Once they would make it through PIG high school, They would go to......PINK PIG UNIVERSITY!!!!
When is the next Rocket flight there?
DeletePIGS!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteIf I discovered a planet, it would be called Awesomeness Land. It would have 50 beaches and 10 islands. All the restaurants would have extra deserts and extra food, but some healthy food so that people would stay healthy. Also, there would be lots and lots of parks and water parks with water slides. Also ,there would be lots of animals, and lots of puppies and kittens so you can have pets. I would love to go live at Awesomeness Land.
ReplyDeleteWhere is the nearest store with space suits?
DeleteWhere is Awesomeness land located?
DeleteIf I discovered a new planet I would call it......BUDDERMANIA!!!!! To travel you would need BudderSlicer budder slays. The ruler would be BUDDERSLAP!!! (Thats my minecraft username). Although he would be king, he would have the same amount of power as anybody else. The streets would be ALL budder. Instead of school when you were a baby you would eat a special piece of budder to be smart. It would look like this
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DeleteIf I discovered a planet, it would be named wildlife planet. It would have an ocean with all sea creatures and a beautiful beach. It would also have a desert with camels and armadillos and all the other desert animals. Then, it would have a rainforest for all the rainforest animals like iguanas and jaguars and all the other animals except birds. Next, there would be a bird habitat. It would have peacocks and parrots and even more. Also, there would be a mythical creature habitat. It would have unicorns and dragons and every mythical creature you could ever imagine. Then, there would be a pet habitat, it would have all the dogs and cats. Then, it would have a big cat territory. It would have all the tigers and lions and so on. There would also be an african animal habitat. It would have giraffes and zebras and many more. There would also be a farm animal territory for pigs and horses and things like that. Next, there would be an arctic habitat for penguins and polar bears and many more. Another habitat would be the woods habitat. It would have foxes and deer and so on. Finally, there would be an endangered species habitat for animals like elephants and rhinos whose population is going down. There would be a restaurant in every habitat so you would be able to have food in every habitat if you wanted to. There would also be places where you could sled or swim or do different activities in the habitat. Boys, you guys could even play with the penguins. That would be my idea as the perfect planet if I ever discovered one.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE WILDLIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteIf I found a planet I would name it COOL. I would have every body there own privet island and they would float over the island and hang on by chains. Every one would have there own pet of there choice (mithicle animales to). THere would be a wolf pack that only loved people on the planet and if you took them away from the planet you'd be in troubel!=) :);)
ReplyDeleteIf I discovered a planet, it would be called Calintopia. It would be only summer and winter all the time. It would the same food as earth. On Calintopia pokemon would exist. On Calintopia there is a house for everyone, so there would be no homeless people. On every street there would be an Above All, and people can jump there. Instead of sports there would pokemon and beyblade battles. There would be a store for getting beyblades, and there would be a starter pokemon store. Calintopia would be 10 times the size of Jupiter. It would have rings diagnal, horizontal, and verticly. I think everyone would love Calintopia.
ReplyDeleteIf discovered a planet, I would name it Sugion. I would discover alions and have them as maids and butlers but they would work in shifts so they would have breaks and half on the day. It would only have mansions and if you claped your hands twice, a saswer would come and give you what ever you needed. You would have to still have disapline so there would be a littke robot beside you to remind you to do things. Every house would have a huge backyard with room for a pool, trampoline, etc.but always have a invisible fence surounding a place made of all sugar but, you desined it, so if you were alergic or hated some of the ingretients in a type of candy, you would not have that inside the fence. All the people would be super nice and all the houses would be SUPER modern. There would be a veiw from every house where it looked like space would be right next to you. I would love to live on my new discovered planet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWhy would it be called SUGION??????????????????????
DeleteI would love to live on that
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Because there would be a lot of sugar (sug) and all the houses would be mansions (ion). that makes sugion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:-)
DeleteThat sounds exactly like my dream house so hat is why I want to be on that planet.
DeleteIf I discovered a planet, I would name it Animal Planet. It would have animals that you can play with. It would have hotels, but it would have no other houses and homes to have forests for the animals. The hotels would use solar energy for electricity. The planet would have all the food you want, but you could not kill the animals for food. The planet would have beaches and pools but no mosquitoes. The animals won't bite you or sting you, and you could play with the animals and eat dessert all day. Animal Planet is a place I would to go!
ReplyDeleteIf I discovered a new planet , I would name it Samsanorma. It would be made out of rainforest , beach and mountain. You can't land a spaceship there because you might scare all the people and animals living there because they do not understand the tech , but want's you get there you can take a glider. The animals living there are Tigers , Whale sharks , Axews, and Oshowats . The Tiger lives in the mountains , the lives in the ocean by the beach, the Oshowats live on the beach, and the Axews live in the rain forest. Sometimes if you are lucky you may be able to find different animals in different areas of Samsanorma . Samsanorma is also has cities that have people that look different , but they are good at tricks . Also , there are police , but there is a superhero in every part of the town . the flag of Samsanorma is an UtahRaptor , and you may find blue teddybears come to live. I think Samsanorma is great and that you would really like it
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DeleteIf I discovered a planet, it would be named Happy Fun Place. When you first get there, you would get a pet penguin. On one half of the planet, it would be very cold and always snow. On the other half of the planet, it would always be sunny and hot. On the sunny and hot side, there would be a huge pool you could go in. There would be the biggest water slide ever built. In the middle of the planet, there would be a huge hotel. In the hotel, the rooms would be like houses. There would be a zoo in the hotel. Also, there would be a giant hot tub and a medium sized pool. And there would be a place in the hotel there so that you could get any food in the world. And that is what my planet would be like.
ReplyDeleteIf I discovered a new planet, I would call it The Bouncey Ball. It would be made out of trampolines, so you could jump to places. There would never be any storms, but it would still snow and rain. All the houses would have pools with diving boards, and they would all have hot tubs. There would be really sweet animals that wander around and come up to people. For an example there would be kittens that would always be kittens, there would be puppys that would always be puppys, and there would be flemish giants.If you wished for something it would come down from the sky and land right in front of you. There would be any food you could imagine. Nobody would be homeless. All the houses would have playgrounds and swings in the backyard. no one would litter, so all the grass and trees would be neon green, and all the plants would be a neon colors.Everybody would go to church at least once a week. There would be beautiful beaches with friendly sharks, barracudas, fish, sting rays, crabs, and blue marlin. There would be dolphin and sea turtles that would let you ride on there backs. You would also be able to breathe under water. there would be beautiful birds flying in the sky. every body would be able to fly, so that you would not pollute the air. That's my awsome planet.
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DeleteWhy would it be named Samsanorma???????????????????????????
ReplyDeleteIf I discovered I planet, I would name it Planet Super Happy Fun Time. It would be a bigger than any other planet EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This planet would have roller coasters water slides 20 stared restaurants, and 30 stared hotels everywhere. This planet would get SO many awards for being super happy it would have a wall bigger than the sun to holed all of the medals and trophies. This planet would have a zoo called Today a zoo Tomorrow The World!!!! Every one would love to see it. When some one did something nice it would rain $10000000 doler bills, but if some one did something bad it would rain $9999999. ON this planet there would be lots of rooms call Be Thinkful My Friend all over the planet. In those rooms you can do what ever you want. Just tell the room what you want, and the room will create a simulator of what you want. In my planet there would be a pet store with any pet you want. for example a land dalfen with fist, a tiger with wings, a dog, and stuff like that. Last but not lest, anything else super, happy, and fun. That is Planet Super Happy Fun Time!!!
ReplyDeleteIf I discovered I planet, I would name it Planet Super Happy Fun Time. It would be a bigger than any other planet EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This planet would have roller coasters water slides 20 stared restaurants, and 30 stared hotels everywhere. This planet would get SO many awards for being super happy it would have a wall bigger than the sun to holed all of the medals and trophies. This planet would have a zoo called Today a zoo Tomorrow The World!!!! Every one would love to see it. When some one did something nice it would rain $10000000 doler bills, but if some one did something bad it would rain $9999999. ON this planet there would be lots of rooms call Be Thinkful My Friend all over the planet. In those rooms you can do what ever you want. Just tell the room what you want, and the room will create a simulator of what you want. In my planet there would be a pet store with any pet you want. for example a land dalfen with fist, a tiger with wings, a dog, and stuff like that. Last but not lest, anything else super, happy, and fun. That is Planet Super Happy Fun Time!!!
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