Imagine that for one day only you could have a pet monkey! What would you do with your pet? What would you name him/her? What adventures would you two have? Please describe your day with your new friend.
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If I had a pet monkey, I would name it Bailey. If I could do anything with Bailey, I would go to the park to let her play. Of course, I would have to play too. We would mostly play at the monkey bars. Our hearts would start to pump in excitement. After that, we would go to California Pizza Kitchen. Bailey would get a big pepperoni pizza, and I would get mac and cheese. We would mainly just stay there and talk with each other. After that, we would go to the candy store and get lots of candy. Bailey would get all banana flavored candy. Finally, we would go home and snuggle up on the couch. I would read Curious George to her, and she would fall asleep in my arms. That would be my day with Bailey.
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Ms. Blackmon
If I could have a pet monkey, I would name her Lizzy. First we would go to the park and play on the jungle jim. Then we would go to Moe's for lunch. Next we would go to Sugar Dive we would get candy and popcorn. We would bring all of that stuff home and snuggle up on the couch and watch chopped then we would read books. Lizzy would then fall asleep in my lap. that would be a perfect day with Lizzy.
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DeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name It Barles. The first thing we would do is go to donut den and get 5 donuts. Then we would go to Monkey Joe's, and play for 2 hours. then we would go to Pizza Perfect. barles would get a big meat lovers pizza. I would get meat lovers too. then we would go to Holiday World and ride all the rides. At least 5 times. then we would go to Sportsman's Grill I would get a bacon cheeseburger and root beer. Barles would get a cheeseburger and dr. pepper. .After that we would top it off by watching movies all night.
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DeleteIf I could have a monkey for a day, I would call him Mike. Mike and I would go to Brugger's Bagels for breakfast. Then, we would go to Holiday world and ride the rides (if he's allowed in). Then, we go to Disneyland. I would ride the yeti ride. Then, we would go to a NBA Cleveland Caviliers game. We would get a box up high with free food. Then, we would ride home in a limosiune. We would watch Indiana Jones and eat a gallon of Blue Bell ice cream.
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DeleteCool monkey.
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DeleteDude that is boss.
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name him Bob. We would go to Palmer Park. He would wear a tie dye rainbow t-shirt with jeans and big clown shoes. I would wear a big shirt that said, "I have a pet monkey." Everybody would laugh as we walked by. We would ride our bikes around the park and have so much fun. Bob would want to climb on the monkey bars. We would then go to Donut Den and get donut holes. That would be my day with Bob the monkey.
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DeleteThat sounds fun!
DeleteMy monkey is also named bob Hahaha.
DeleteOoo... donuts!
DeleteTHANK YOU VERY MUCH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey, it's name would be Mankey. Mankey, and I would first make banana cannon. We would fire the bananas into our mouths. Then we would go to J Alexander's, and eat all the chips we could. After that, we would go to my house, and play video games. Next, we would go to the movies, and eat buttered popcorn. We probably would watch Minions. After that, we would go back to my house, and play more video games. Then, Mankey, and I would eat bananas. Then we would become movie stars, and have a butler named Jenkins. Jenkins would give us foot rubs, and maple bacon. That is a day I would have with a monkey.
ReplyDeleteWould you peel the bananas first?
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DeleteSuper duper cool man :)
DeleteBananas are cool
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey for a day, I would name him Zipper,and we would play board games for a long long time. Then, we would play in my backyard. In my backyard we would go on the swings and play tag. Next, we would go play lazer tag and eat lots of candy. After, we would go to Dave and Busters and play games on till night time. Finally, we would watch T.V on till we had to go to bed. That would be a perfect day with my pet monkey.
ReplyDeleteZipper is a cool name.
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name her Sammy. Sammy and I would have tons of fun. First, we would have a breakfast of pancakes and lots of bananas. Next, we would go to a park, and spend hours on the monkey bars. Then, we would have pizza for lunch. After that, we would go to Sweet Cece's. Finally, we would watch a funny movie, and have some some banana pudding. That would be the perfect day with Sammy.
ReplyDeleteHow fun!
DeleteThat sounds awesome!
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ReplyDeleteIf I could have a pet monkey for a day, I would name her Emma. First, I would wake her up, and we would have banana cereal for breakfast. Then, I would set up some bars for her to play on. After that, we would eat some bananas for a snack. I would take her to the park and let her play until she was tired. Together, we would have a picnic lunch with banana pie for dessert. We would go to book store and I would pick out a book about a monkey for her. She would read the book, while I read 'How to Care for Your Monkey'. Then, I would take her home and we would eat bananas foster for dinner. After that, Emma and I would play a game, and after that she would go to sleep in my arms.
ReplyDeleteHow sweet!!!!!
DeleteIf I could have a pet monkey for one day, her name would be Hazel. We would have races on the monkey bars and show off flips too. Then, we would get a snack and watch movies. I would have popcorn, and she would have a banana. After the movie, we would then go back outside again. After that, we would order some pizza. Then, we would settle down, and Hazel would play with her banana toy, while I read her a funny story about monkeys. That would be my fun day with Hazel.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name him Billy Bob. I would wake him up early on a Sunday so we could go to the boxes early at the Titans Vs. Jaguars game. We would eat all the cookies and be on the Jumbotron. At the second half we would go to the reporter and announce what was going on. After we would find a 100,000 dollar gift card for on the ground and go their to buy an XBox 1 and Madden 16 and NHL 16. We would also get football cards and candy. We would still have a lot of money left so we made it into cash and bought some autographed helmets signed by Herschel Walker, Aaron Rodgers, Bo Jackson, Deion Sanders, and A.J. Green. Then we would go to Sweet CeCe's and buy 1,000 dollars worth of ice cream. I would give Kyle a game for his XBox. Bob and Scout would meet and have a tea party while me and Kyle watched football. That would be my day with Bob
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DeleteSuper fresh my man.
DeleteINVITE ME OVER AND WE CAN PLAY MADDEN!!!!!!!! :)
DeleteI'm watching you Billy literally.
DeleteIf I could have a monkey for a day, I would name it Foxer, because it would be swift and agile like a fox. We would go to breakfast at Starbucks and both get giant muffins. Then, we would go to Sky High, and jump everywhere. Foxer would clime the nets and pads, even though you are not sposed to. Then, to have even more fun, we would go to a park. The monkey bars would be to easy for Foxer, he would clime up the things that were not sposed to be cimed. I would try to keep up, but in the end, Foxer would be king of the hill. After that, we would go back home and watch movies. That would be my day with my monkey.
ReplyDeletethat seems so awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)=)
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name it Steve. We would watch the Minions movie because monkeys are friends with minions. They met at a banana festival. Then, we'd go to Netherlands because i'm Dutch. we'd play soccer with my favorite soccer player Robin VanPersie. After that, we'd all go to C.P.K, and we'd all get mac n chez. All n all a great day.
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DeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name her Bananas. We would go to Disney World and eat ice cream. The flavor I would get would be chocolate and Bananas would get banana flavor. Then, we would go and ride so awesome rides while eating bananas. Once it was time for lunch we would go to epcot and eat in Paris, France and order french bread also escargot (snails) with buttered garlic. After, we would go to Hollywood Studios and ride the Tower of Terror and we would also ride the Toy Story ride. After that, we would go to Magic Kingdom and ride all the rides there and then go to Belle's castle and eat dinner. Finally, we go home and drink hot cocoa and cuddle up together and that would be my day with Bananas.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name it Debbie. We would get ice cream, Debbie would get pistacio, and I would get strawberry. Next we would play catch in my front yard with a beachball. Later we would make cupcakes. Debbie would make banana with pistacio icing and almonds and I would make strawberry with raspberry icing and sprinkles. After we would go to the pet store and each get a hermit crab. Next we would have lunch. Finally we would play with my puppy. That would be my day with Debbie.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name him Mr. Awesome. Mr Awesome and I would go to Above All. For example, Mr. Awesome would do the double tilt ladder. I would do the warped wall. Next, we would go to the movies and watch all the movies we would want! After that, we would move to New York and first go to the candy store to get food. Then we would go to every other place in New York. After, we would move back to Tennessee and go to a Titans game. I hope they win 70-0! If they do win 70-0 then Mr. Awesome will have to pay me 100 dollars! If they lose 70-0 then I have to pay him 100 dollars. Apparently I won, but only 90 dollars because the Titans won 70-10. Lastly, we would go home and... PARTY!!!!! Then go to sleep if its not the next day.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, she would be named Sally. Every morning we would go to Krispy Kreme! I would get a chocolate donut, and Sally would get a strawberry donut YUM!! Then after our delicious breakfast we would go back home and watch a movie. After the movie, we would go to the mall! When we get to the mall, we would get yummy pretzels! When we were done with our pretzels, we would go back home and have a dip in the pool!! When we were done swimming, we would go back to the house and cuddle!! That would be my day with Sally!
ReplyDeleteIf I could have a pet monkey for a day, we would go to Mcdonalds and get a Mcflurry with M & M's and large fries. After that I will name her. Her name will be Lilly then we would go home and watch a movie the movie will be curious gorge then he will want popcorn, but then he will wall right asleep.After he wakes up we will go get donuts with sprinkles at the donut den .
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name him Mr.Monkey Man. Mr. Monkey Man would go to the JungleJem park. We would climb on the monkey bars. After that, we would go to the grocery store,and buy bananas! Then, we would go to Brilliant Sky and buy a beanie boo Monkey. We would name it Mr. Monkey Man Jr. Then we would go to the bakery and get banana putting. After that we would go home, sit on the couch, eat our banana putting,and our bananas. We would get Mr. Monkey Man Jr out of the bag and hug him. We would watch Zoo Keeper,and snuggle. This is what I would do if I had a pet monkey.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name it William. First we would both wake up at 7:30 and go on a jog. Than once we got home We would play hide and seek. In the afternoon we would go to the park and we would play on the monkey bars. Than for lunch we would go to Chick-fil-a and I would get an 6 count and William would get a 6 count to with a lemonade. Than at 1:00 we would go to the pool and swim. Than we would go to Chick-fil-a for dinner. Then we would go to the store and buy a lot of candy. Once we got home we would watch a movie and eat a lot of candy till we got really tired. Than once the movie was over we would read a book and bake 12 cookies. After we read the book we would play a board game while we are eating cookies. William always wins most of the games we play. Than we read another book and played a game at the same time. Than at 8:00 we would go to Donut Den and we would get a donut. After we would go home and go to bed. That is what I would do.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name her Olive. First, we would go to the park and play on the playground. Then, we would go to the championship game of Duke v. Carolina and Duke would win by 100 points! After, we would go home and play board games until night arrived. Finally, we would snuggle up on the couch, eat some popcorn and reeses peanut butter cups, and watch movies until we fell asleep. That would be my idea as spending a day with my pet monkey.
ReplyDeleteHow many board games would that be?!
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it Emma. I would first build a jungle gym for her. When I wake up in the morning at 6:00 in the morning, I would watch my favorite show until she woke up. When she wakes up, I would hang out with the monkey on the jungle gym. By the time we finished, it would be 7:30. Next we would go to the mall, and walk around until it was open. Next, the mall would open and I would make Emma sit still because she was going to get her ears peirced. I will write more later about my day with Emma!
ReplyDeleteI would do the same thing. We would get the same. Emma would be a very calm monkey. Next, it would be 8:30 in the morning. We would shop in Claire's and Nordstrom for hours. After, it would be 11:30 so then we would get our new exersise outfits on and play softball. 1 on1. Next we would get a manie-petie Then, it would be 12:15 and we would have lunch at Loveless Cafe. Oh, I forgot to tell you that we wold have breakfast at Brugers Bagles and I would get the cinnomin bagle with extra butter. Emma would get that too. At Loveless, I have no idea what I would get. There are so many choises to chose from. After, we went to Loveless, we would go get ice cream in Franklin. I would get Superman ice cream and Emma would get chocolate. We probly have to wash her face. After, it would be 3:00 and we would go to meet some friends for a sleepover, but first we would have to go home to pick up our bags that we already packed and call a limo to pick us up. When we get to or Skyler's house all the girls that she invited would be there and they all would thing Emma is so cute. Lastly it would be 6:00 and we would eat dinner which would be breakfast-for-dinner. Finally, it would be 9:00 because we had played a lot and we would watch Back to the Future Part III. We would go to bed next. It was not a health day,. but it was a fun day! That would be my day with a monkey!
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it Mike Da Monkey. First, I would wake up in the morning and give Mike his instagram acount called @MikeDaMonkey. After I set that up, we would have pizza for breakfast. When we would finish the pizza, we would go to Above All and mike would complete every obstacle. I would record him, and he would post the videos on his instagram. Then, we would go to the Sugar Dive and Mike would get banana flavoured jelly beans, and I would get the world's largest gummy worm. After that, we would go to the movies and see The Peanuts Movie. Then, we would go to Sam's Sports Bar and eat pizza, wings, and salmon until there were no football games on anymore. Finally, we would come home and go to bed. PET MONKEYS FOR LIFE!
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name him marshall. First, I would get on his back and he would take me in the trees. Then, I would show him how to drive a golf cart and we would ride around all over the place. After, we would have pizza and popcorn while watching a movie. I would let him chose. We would have so much fun!
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DeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it Bananas! First we would go to the park and play on the monkey bars. Then we would go to the beach and have a picnic lunch. After that we would go home and I would dress her up! Then we would bake cookies, and I would read to her. Then she would fall asleep in my lap, and that would be my day with Bananas.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey for a day,I would name him Bob Fred Joe. We would fun things together. First, we would play videogames for hours. After he got sick of losing, we would go to the sugar dive and buy hundred of candies. Then, we would go to gamestop a buy all the Skylanders SuperChargers toy we could find. We would go have lunch at chick fil a. Then, we would play Skylanders SuperChargers until we beat the game. After we defeated the Darkness, he would fall asleep. That is what we would do if I had to spend a day with a monkey. (specifically named Fred Bob Joe).
ReplyDeleteIf I could have a pet monkey for one day I would name it Vine. I would name it Vine because I would have a jungle In my backyard, and he would swing from the vines. Each day we would wake up me on my bunk bed which was the top bunk. My bed would have pretty flowers as the border, and stripes as the covers and my pillow.Vine would have vines as a border and leaves and the covers and pillow.Then, we would have cereal I would have Life and Vine would have Frosted Flakes.Next, we would run at Granny White Park.After that, we would draw flowers in the jungle. Vines picture would be 3D than mine , but mine would be more detailed.Finally, we would sit under the beautiful stars, and look at them.
ReplyDeleteThat sounds fun!!
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ReplyDeleteIf, I had a pet monkey for the day I think everything would go crazy. First I would name it Samsterbob and he would eat bananas . Then he would go to the airport and , ride a plane that said monkey on it . Then we would go to Sweet Ciecies and get banana ice cream. After that he would want to go home and take a nap. This is what would happen if I had a pet monkey for the day
ReplyDeleteif I had a pet monkey for a day I would first go to above all, so we could play a lot. then we would go to a playground and do monkey bars. After would go get banana pudding. my monkeys name would Bob. Bob would like playing dress up. me and Bob would do each others nails. And we would play twister. that is my day with Bob.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey for a day, I would name him Britton Jr. We would have a robot off, and are name would be The Robot Twins. We would win. Then, we would have a lunch break and eat bananas. Then, we would ride sheep in a race and win. Then, we would play together and have fun for the rest of the day. So that's what I would do if I had a monkey for the day.
ReplyDeleteGo robot twins!
DeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name him Bill the 2nd. We would go to above all, and go to the american ninja warrior coarse. Then we would get on a plane, and sky dive from the plane. Then we would go to subway, and eat fresh. Then we would go home and play skylanders superchargers for 1 hour. Then we would hop on the couch and watch Ant-Man. That is what I would do with a pet monkey.
ReplyDeleteIf i had a pet monkey I would name him Flame. First we woyld go to the monkey park then go to Monkey Joes and have loads of fun! Next we would monkey rock climbing and of coures Flame would win. And last we would go to Jump Street!
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name him Steve. Steve and I would go to above all and have the time of our lives! Then we would go to a place with really spicy wings. Then we would go to a private jet and play a bunch of sports and games. When we landed we would go to DISNEY WORLD, DISNEY LAND, AND THE HERMITAGE! Then we would go back to California on the privet jet, and do what we always do on the jet. So then Steve would go crazy because he was on a cotton-candy high. Then Steve would take a nap, but I would just wake him up right when he fell asleep then we would drink all the soft drinks you can imagine, (maybe even more!) And all the candy you can imagine,(Again maybe even more!) That would be my day with Steve. To be continued.
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DeleteIf I had a pet monkey for a day, I would name him Ozwald. We would go to Above All and play dodge ball, and do the obstacle course about 5 times. Then we would go swing off the bar for a while. But we had to yell at him so he would jump, because he wouldn't let go!! Then, we would go home and play Madden 16 and Minecraft on the Xbox one. We would play as the Panthers on Madden and cream! Then we would go watch Inside Out on the TV down stairs and fall asleep on the couch. That is what I would do if I had a pet monkey for a day.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name him Tree Nuts. First, we would wake up and eat pop tarts and eggs. Next, we would go on the streets and chant" MONKEY'S HAVE FEELINGS TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Then, we would make a video of Tree Nuts riding a dinosaur while juggling flame throwers with his tail in space and fighting aliens with pare heads ,and post on YouTube. The internet would brake because are vidoe got too many likes. Finally, we would travel around the world selling the bananas pocket. The pocket the alway has a banana in it. That would be the best day EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI love flame throwers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteIf I had a pet Monkey a day , we would wake up in a tree. We would come down the tree with sun glasses on and a stylish jacket. We would eat ice cream for breakfast. After that we would go to the ridded the mail with nerf guns.Then, we would get a hotel just because we could eat candy and watch TV. We would color pitcher and get tap and stick them on are face. Then, we would go on lots of roller coasters at all the the amusement packs in the world. And when it get dark we play tag with all of the warriors the baskball team.
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DeleteIf I had a pet monkey he would be called, Dr.Chez McKent the fifth. We would eat loads of chez, and drink tons of orange juice. Actual tons. Dr.Chez McKent the fifth would always wear a real leather jacket that said "i'm a biker monkey" on it. It would be awesome to have a monkey for a day!
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