Dear students,
You’re a scientist who has just discovered a new planet. In one year, people will be coming to live on it. What will your planet be like? What will you name your planet? Write a paragraph describing your new planet.
Your paragraph must…
- be at least 5 sentences long
- written in complete sentences
- use M.I.N.T.S.
- have a topic sentence and supporting details
Happy blogging,
Ms. Blackmon :)
If I had a planet it would be called Lemmos.The inhabits would be slitly difrant than us.The water would be pitch black but clean fresh drinkable water.The cloud would rain food we eat.That would be my planet.
ReplyDeleteI discovered the new planet called Doctro! Doctro is very bright in the day, but when it gets dark you you cant see anything. You cant really see the stars or moon. When you look at the floor it is gravel. You are 5,000,000,000 miles away from the planet Earth. You would take a rocket ship to this planet only. People are allowed to stay there for as long as they want. The houses would be made of rock and stone. I think this planet I discovered is awesome!
ReplyDeleteMy planet would be called Chlorophyll Opolis chlorophyll as in green and opolis as in city so Green City { chlorophyll makes leaves green }. It will be a wonderful planet with a suitable atmosphere that contains the same things as Earth's atmosphere methane, sulpher, co2, and oxygen. all the plants will be evergreen as in always green. People will live in peace and happiness with each other. All mountains are blessed with valuable and helpful resources like sulpher, gold, silver, platinum, and corundum. { Corundum/sapphire/ruby will help a teenager the most becaus it is used in high-end smartphone screens because of its 9 rank on the hardness scale }.
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DeleteIf I discovered a new planet I would call it Awesomya! It would be made of sand, water and gushers so you could swim and play all day and then go to the gushers island and eat. Also they would serve normal water and healthy food to so you could survive.There would be animals on the planet and they would be really fuzzy and cute. And there would be no mosquito's and chiggers. It would also have a material that is like steel or iron but harder and more common than diamond. There would be mines to collect this material. I would call it crimtite. Then people would come and live there and it would develop just like Earth did. That is what I would do if I discovered a new planet.
ReplyDeleteMy planet would be called Sports Mania. You could watch the best sports games live. Also, you could teleport from game to game! You wouldn't have to pay for tickets. You could also play. They have lots of sports. They are football, basketball, baseball, swimming, etc. You can choose your skill level. Then it will tell you who to play.
ReplyDeleteWhen I discovered the planet Fun World there was oxygen and there was life not human life it was an odd type of life the were the smartest thing you could imagine. there was color and they were so happy and there were roller coaster and parks but every thing was fun and nobody was sad. They were crazy and smart at the same time and there favorite thing to do was HAVE FUN!. The houses were floating in the air because there was no gravity and they were in clothes that had gravity. When I sent astronauts they never came back it was so fun so we sent 3 hundred people the had the best time ever so we made a floating subway so lots and lots of people could go up to Fun World.
ReplyDeleteMy planet would be called Utopia. Utopia is covered in Thick Jungle, mountains And oceans. Utopia is also inhabited by animals and bugs. Utopia has three rings. Utopia also has two big moons and 150 smaller moon. Utopia's orbit takes it over and under the sun not around it like the other planets. Utopia is a planet that humans could live on.
ReplyDeleteThere would be normal gravity so you don't float to space
ReplyDeleteIf I descoverd a planet it would be a planet with candy everything accept for the people, It would be called Sugarlandia. The houses would have chocolate walls that they could paint with colored sugar. The beds would be made out of marshmallows and twislers as the frame. The chairs and tables would be made with upside down chocolate chips. The trees would be made out of green gummies for the leaves and chocolate roman candy for the trunks. Bushes would also be made out of green gummies. Clouds would be cotten candy and windows would be clear gumdrops. Ponds would be blue sugar and the fish would be sweedish fish. Soccer balls, Basket balls, and kickballs would be gumballs in your choice of color. Everything would be awesome and candy is considerd healthy. That would be the best planet ever.
ReplyDeleteWhen I discover my planet, I will call it Image, because everything from your dreams would come to life, and all hopes would be planted, and grown to be something you imagined not possible. The impossible wouldn't exist. You would be the small observer, although never harmed. Get a crayon, draw your favorite pair of earrings, or draw air everywhere, so you could take off your suit. I would walk around, and everything I imagined as a child would come to life. Unicorns, Dragons, Witches, anything. And when someone first stepped onto the planet, grass blades would grow miles from view, butterflies would soar faster then hawks, and lions would make peace with the lamb. Everything would be, well, in it's place. But it would only be a vacation place to stay. Not one tree limb would be cut, no jaguar would be hunted. There would be a place where it was already there, a tall, lean building made of tree's wood and marble. It would be filled with fresh fruit and homeade meals. Everyone would be happy. At night, grass would shrink back into the ground, leaving a bald surface. The animals would circle around a big light, and disappear. Then all was quiet, real silent, all was left was the sound of your impatient breathing, waiting to see what would happen next. Suddenly, The last animal to evaporate would pull a blanket from his/her fur, and throw it across the sky. That animal would then evaporate, and all would be silent once more. There would be a night sky, filled with love and hope, (from that special blanket) until the next morning, when all the animals from your dreams would come back, and live.
ReplyDeleteIf I discovered a planet, I would call it "Optainiussgroomes" It would have living creatures. These creatures would be birds that people made up. They would talk too! But only the people who imagined them, or created them, could hear them. They could tell you about planets light-years away. They could also fly one light-year per hour. If the people who created them died, then there species would disappear. There would be a ton of plants on that planet, which would smell like candy, and none would be poisonous. There would also be oxygen. That would be "Optainiussgroomes".
ReplyDeleteSomething amazing has happened! Today Dr. Ridgway has discovered a new planet in our solar system. We got to have a one on one interview with Dr. Ridgway, she told us everything about Big Blue. "This planet is amazing!" said Dr. Ridgway at her current interview. "Big Blue, as I like to call it, is an amazing place were people and animals could live. There is water of all kinds, salt and fresh. The air there is so crisp and clean and the water is the freshest, it flows threw you. The grass is ever so green and the trees come in all sizes and colors. I defenitliy think this would be a wonderful planet to go to if something were to happen to Earth." Dr. Ridgway loves the Big Blue and plans on taking her husband and two children to the Big Blue. Two of her and her husbands best friends are so convinced they are planning on going to. Dr. Ridgway has told the media that Big Blue is three tomes as big as Earth and we could fit twice our population on Big Blue. He also said that Big Blue had the perfect amount of gravity. I think the question were all asking is is all this true or id Dr. Ridgway pulling the nations leg? We dug deeper into Big Blue and asked Dr. Ridgway's colleuge, Dr. Mongomery, about Big Blue. He said that it was all true and not over exagerated at all. I'm Mary Canvel and your watching Channel 4 News.
ReplyDeleteWhen I discover my planet, I will call it Image, because everything from your dreams would come to life, and all hopes would be planted, and grown to be something you imagined not possible. The impossible wouldn't exist. You would be the small observer, although never harmed. Get a crayon, draw your favorite pair of earrings, or draw air everywhere, so you could take off your suit. I would walk around, and everything I imagined as a child would come to life. Unicorns, Dragons, Witches, anything. And when someone first stepped onto the planet, grass blades would grow miles from view, butterflies would soar faster then hawks, and lions would make peace with the lamb. Everything would be, well, in it's place. But it would only be a vacation place to stay. Not one tree limb would be cut, no jaguar would be hunted. There would be a place where it was already there, a tall, lean building made of tree's wood and marble. It would be filled with fresh fruit and homeade meals. Everyone would be happy. At night, grass would shrink back into the ground, leaving a bald surface. The animals would circle around a big light, and disappear. Then all was quiet, real silent, all was left was the sound of your impatient breathing, waiting to see what would happen next. Suddenly, The last animal to evaporate would pull a blanket from his/her fur, and throw it across the sky. That animal would then evaporate, and all would be silent once more. There would be a night sky, filled with love and hope, (from that special blanket) until the next morning, when all the animals from your dreams would come back, and live.
ReplyDeleteIf I was a scientist and I discoverd a planet. It would have trees so we could breath but those trees would be candy canes! When it would snow it would snow hershy bars and milkshakes. When it would rain it would ran gum drops and jello. When it would hail it would hail popcicles and snow cones. The tornados and hricanes would be made out of ice cream. The rocks would be jawbreakers. The water would be dr. peper. The dirt would be mini m&ms. The sun would be a huge jolly rancher. the houses would be all difrent candys. There would be nice candy monsters with huge toes. There would also be wildlife to. Insted of a black lab it would be a marshmellow lab. My planet would also have a villan named lickare. He would want to take over sugar land. On the other hand there would also be good popole for example loly lilly, pince ice cream, pocicle princess, gummy bear, and sweet mama. Evreyone would love to live here because the land and pople are sweet.
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ReplyDeleteMy planet is called Groosont. All the buildings have domes for roofs. The creatures living here are clear and have stretchy bones. Their money is called grooses. Their food is a small range and is all made of water. The planet has a big dome on top so it is always sunny. The only thing that is not made of water is their fun dip. Everything that we have that is water they have as fun dip. Their news channel is called Channel 1.2.3 News[][][].
ReplyDeleteIf I were a scientist and I just discovered a major planet I would call it the Maxie Star in honor of my dog. I would hope that the planet would be equipped with life and a livable and sustainable enviorment. I hope that it would have a rain forest terrain with a temperature around 54 degrees- 79 degrees F. My planet would have fine oxygen and mist in the air. There would be edible plants like fruit and vegetables. There would also be plenty life and animals much like ones on Earth to use for meat and fur/clothing. The Maxie Star would be very close to Earth so we could travel back and forth with ease. My Planet would be livable and easy with no stress to travel to and stay there. It would be a great place to learn and explore, with everyone young and old.
ReplyDeleteI just discovered a new planet, and will call it Planet Vanstar. It has three eyed allies with four arms. There are amusement parks, and you would live in tree houses and the floors are trampolines. I would love to live on planet Vanstar
ReplyDeleteI just discovered a new planet it is called Cander. Cander looks like they are all kinds of colors mixed. Cander is made out of candy and all floors, walls, selings, and ground is a trampoline and hanging form the sky are hamocks. The house's, plants, bed's, kichen's, store's, bulings, parks, and more. People jump every where and eat a lot of candy. How are they not big from all that candy? The jumping is good exercise and when they are tried the sit in a hamock. All people would be happy. A lot of animal live in the planet and they talk to you they are your friends.
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