Dear students,
Imagine that for one day only you could have a pet monkey! What would you do with your pet? What would you name him/her? What adventures would you two have? Please describe your day with your new friend.
Remember, students, to watch out for run-ons, and to write in complete sentences. I look forward to reading your comments!
Your paragraph must…
Imagine that for one day only you could have a pet monkey! What would you do with your pet? What would you name him/her? What adventures would you two have? Please describe your day with your new friend.
Remember, students, to watch out for run-ons, and to write in complete sentences. I look forward to reading your comments!
Your paragraph must…
- be at least 5 sentences long
- written in complete sentences
- use M.I.N.T.S.
- have a topic sentence and supporting details
- have a closing sentence
Here is an example of an advanced/proficient comment:
If I had a pet monkey, I would name it Bailey. If I could do anything with Bailey, I would go to the park to let her play. Of course, I would have to play too. We would mostly play at the monkey bars. Our hearts would start to pump in excitement. After that, we would go to California Pizza Kitchen. Bailey would get a big pepperoni pizza, and I would get mac and cheese. We would mainly just stay there and talk with each other. After that, we would go to the candy store and get lots of candy. Bailey would get all banana flavored candy. Finally, we would go home and snuggle up on the couch. I would read Curious George to her, and she would fall asleep in my arms. That would be my day with Bailey.
Happy blogging,
Mrs. Braddy
If I had a pet monkey I would name it Pedro. First, I would wake up with Pedro right beside me. Next, I would go to the grocery store with Pedro and we would buy up all the bananas we could. Then, when we got home we would make all of the banana pudding we could eat. Finally I would watch Curious George with Pedro then we would go to sleep together.
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If I had a monkey id name it Bananer. Me and Bananer would go to get ice cream.Bananer would get banana ice cream and id get cookie dough. The ice cream would be from Baskin Robbins. After ice cream, me and bananer would watch Tarzan. Bananer is a good monkey.
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ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, would name it Chase. We would go to Daufisci. We would swing from trees, and make pannis with white cheese. We would Go mountain biking, and fish, and jump off high things. That would be my day with Chase.
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If I could have a day with a monkey I would name him Coco Kitty Meow Meow! He would like to swing especially on my bed and my beckett ball. He would like cats and icecream too! He plays soccer and putt putt! That's of course if I had a monkey. George
ReplyDeleteIf i had a pet monkey I would name him Byrne, and we would go to Daufuskie Island and ride bikes all around the island and after that we would go to the pool and have lunch and swim. At night we will go back to the dock and go to a place called Harbour Town and get ice cream and run around. Then we will go home and watch a movie, then go to sleep. Chase
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would feed him bananas all day long. We would play together every day. We would climb trees. We would swing on trees. If I had a pet monkey that would be the best!
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If I had a pet monkey I would name it Ballanlan.We would go to the beach and she would hang in the trees and I would swim.Then we would go roller skating.After that we would go get ice cream,and then get dinner.Then we would go home watch a movie,and then go to bed. Sarah
ReplyDeletewell I would name him batman, and I would go around nashville saying good night nashville and we would go to sports places in nashville , but the places I would go with him we would go to china,japan,canada,and don't forget USA.
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If I had a pet monkey for a day I would name him Abu. First we would go and get candy at a candy store. Then we would go to the park and run around. After the park we would go home and make a big cake for lunch. When the cake is finally frosted we would eat the cake while watching movies on the tv. After the movies we would go back to the candy store but in disguises. Then we would go California Pizza Kitchen for dinner. Avery
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name it Bob Marley. We would have ice cream from Baskin Robbin's. Also lunch from Blaze pizza.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it Gilbert.Gilbert and I would go to Hawaii.First we would swim in the ocean then,we would ride dolphins,and watch sea turtles hatch.We would then go eat lunch.At the end of the day would have dinner,eat candy ,then go to sleep.
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If I had a pet monkey, I would name it Billy.First,we would go to the zoo so he could meet other monkeys.Next,we would go get ice cream and eat it until we got a brain freeze.Then, we would go to the jungle so he could teach me how to swing on vines.Finally,we would go get Chick-fa-la until we were full.Carson
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it senorita miemore but they would hate banana's . 1st we would go to the pet store and buy 100000000000000 million hamsters.
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If I had a pet monkey I would name It Firefly. First, we would go to ride horses. I would ride a horse named Mocha and Firefly would ride a horse name Monty. Then, we would go to the pool and swim for 1 hour. After that we would go get ice cream from Kilwens and eat all the ice cream we could eat! Finally, we would watch Aldain! And that would be my bay with Firefly! - Tilly S.
ReplyDeleteIf I had pet monkey I would name it Land-Shark. We would go to an Ole Miss game. Then we would go to the zoo and let him say hi to his friends.Then we would pop bubble wrap. Last we would watch Cuerios Goerge.French
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey I would name it Tigger. The first thing I would do with Tigger is play soccer with him. Then I would go get ice cream. After that I would go get lunch And that would be a day with my monkey.Livi cox
ReplyDeleteIf I had a pet monkey, I would name him disappointment. We would go to Papa Johns Headquarters and eat all the pizza they have there. Next we would go to Disneyworld and ride Space Mountain til we puke. Next we would take all the bad guys to jail. That would be my day with disappointment.
ReplyDeleteIf I could have a monkey for a day it's name would be Kimmey Cow Gibbler the 3ed. First, we would wake up, have pumpkin spice pancakes. Next, we would go to holiday world and go on all the rides we could. Then, we would go to a forest and climb trees. Finally, we would watch a movie and have steak for dinner.
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If I could have a pet monkey for the day, I would name it Froyo. Froyo would be a he and we would go to Urban Air. We would have lot of fun. Next, he would teach me how to speak monkey. Then we would go to a park and skateboard. Finally we would go back home a sleep.
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If I could have a pet monkey he would be called Abu.First we would go to the grochry store and buy bananas.And than we would go to the park and swing on the swings and go on the monkey bars.And than we would go to Papa Jons and he would get a large peporony and I would get a large cheese pizza and than we get ice cream at Bobys Dairy Dip and both get choclte and vinala swril.And then I would read a book and he would read a book.That would be a day with Abu.
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If i had a pet monkey for a day I would name it me. me and I would go to Bruggers Bagels. and then we would go to the escape room, and because he is a monkey we would do the jungle one so he could swing on things. and we would not make it out in time so he would be devstated. so I would take him to chipole for lunch to cheer him up.
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ReplyDeleteIf I had a monkey his name would be... Juan. He would be the Ole Miss mascot. He would have many talents like... hockey, golf, swinging, and football. His favorite restaurant would be pizza perfect. Over all my monkey would be the funniest of all the monkeys.
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If I could wake up to a monkey in my room I would name him Micah the monkey.First, we would cause trouble in my house and make it messy then would be forced to pick it up.Then we would go get 1000 popsicles.(They have to be orange popsicles.)Then we would go to a movie and stuff popcorn in our faces.Then we would eat a big steak and not eat it all and take a 6 hour run to get back into shape then go home at 11:59 and go to sleep.
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If I could have a pet monkey, his name would be Bananas. First, we would go to a jungle gym. Obviously, we would have to do everything there before we left. Next, we would go to the movies, and get an icee, popcorn, and candy. After that, we would go get dinner at Nama, and go to Jenny's and get two scoops milk chocolate. Finally, we would walk home and go to bed. It would be fun to have a pet monkey!
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If I could have a monkey for a day I would honestly give it to a zoo. First of all, it would go crazy. It would always be asking for bananas. I can't just give him bananas all the time. It would just be too much for me.
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If I had a pet monkey I would name it bananas.We would go everywhere together!!She would help me with everything and do anything for me .She would sleep with me and love to be with me .I would love my monkey!!!!!!-wynn
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