As I read your posts from yesterday, I noticed a lack of editing. Be sure to do your best writing.
As a reminder, for your final blog posts, you will write a persuasive paragraph in a series called "Would You Rather." In each post, I will give you a scenario, and you will have to defend your answer using the following criteria:
- A topic sentence stating your opinion
- At least 3 supporting sentences defending your opinion
- A concluding sentence summarizing your writing
Here is your "Would You Rather" for today:
Imagine your favorite food in the entire world. Now, imagine how yummy it tastes! MMMMMMMMM. Got it? Good!
Would you rather eat your favorite food everyday for the rest of your life or never eat your favorite food again?
Please remember to check for mistakes by reading aloud your post to yourself before you publish it. I cannot wait to see what you write!
Your teacher,
Ms. B :)
I would never eat my favorite food again because if you eat it every single day for the rest of your lif it gets old. Also because there are other good foods besides my favorite food. Lastly so that you can grow out of that food because my favorite food is pizza and pizza ia unhealthy, so you would be healthier. I would rather not eat my favorite food for the rest of my life rather than eating it everyday for the rest of my life.
ReplyDeleteI would rather never have it a again because if it was bad for you, you would be fat. My second reason why is that you would get tired of it and sick of your favorite food for the rest of our life. My last reason why is because it would lose its good taste. And that's why I would rather not have my favorite food for the rest of my life but never have it again.
ReplyDeleteI would rather never eat my favorite food again.
ReplyDelete#1 : If I ate my favorite food for the rest of my life then it probably would not be my favorite food.
#2 : I would have a new favorite food once I don't eat that one again.
#3 : If my favorite food was something unhealthy I would get fat.
#4 : If your favorite food was something with out meat of veggies or water then your body would not get the nutrition it needs.
That is why I would rather not eat my favorite food ever again than eat my favorite food for the rest of my life. YUMMY!
I would rather eat my favorite food for the rest of my life than never eat my favorite food again. First I like a lot of food, so it wouldn't matter very much. Second if you like a lot of stuff and not eat it and you eat all the stuff you don't like than you would barely be eating anything. Third you wouldn't have to worry to try new things if you are sure you don't like them and you tried them already. That is why I chose to eat the rest of my favorite food for the rest of my life.
ReplyDeleteI would probably never eat my favorite food ever again because if I eat my favorite food every day, then I would get tired of it. Also, if I never eat my favorite food again, then I could probably find a new favorite food and eat it whenever I want, and not all the time. Also I would rather never eat my favorite food again because I would want to try new things and not the same thing every day. That is why I would rather never eat my favorite food again other than eating my favorite food every day.
ReplyDeleteI would rather eat my favorite food for the rest of my life than never eat it again because...
ReplyDeleteReason#1 If you never had your favorite food again you would understand the awesome and joyful taste again.
Reason#2 If you don't like other foods,and don't have a favorite, you'll go starving
Reason#3 If your going to a friends house, and they don't have your favorite food you might not live.
Those are three reasons why you should eat your favorite food.
I would rather eat my favorite food for the rest of my life than not eat it at all. My first reason is my favorite food is muffins and if I could never eat muffins again I would flip out!! My second reason is I like muffins so much, so if I could eat them every day I would definitely do it! My final reason is because for dinner I usually have to choose what I want for dinner, but if I only have to eat one certain food I won't have to worry about what I want for dinner. So that's why I would rather eat the same food for the rest of my life rather than not getting to eat it at all!
ReplyDeleteIf I had the choice to eat my favorite food (pancakes) for the rest of my life, or never eat my favorite food again I would choose never eat my favorite food again. I choose this because, there are a lot of good foods out there. Pancakes are just one of them. I love pineapple, cookie cake, noodles, mostly anything with sugar in it, so I would not mind eating that all the time instead of pancakes. Also, I would probably get tired of pancakes. Finally, Pancakes are not the healthiest thing in the world. If I eat that every day I would end up on Biggest Loser. I would rather never eat my favorite food again than eat it every day.
ReplyDeleteIf I had the choice to eat my favorite food every day for the rest of my life, or if I had the choice to never eat my favorite food ever again. I would never eat my favorite food again because your body needs more protein, and vitamins. Also, your body can't just live off of one food you need more food to eat, and if you didn't ever eat your favorite food again there is a very likely chance that your body could be a lot more healthy than it was before you stopped eating your favorite food. Another thing is that if you only live off of one food you will for sure not be very healthy. Also, I would never get to branch out with different foods, and you would never get to try new foods you would just be stuck with the same old food. I also think eating that same food would get old, and I wouldn't want to eat it any more. If I had the choice to eat my favorite food for the rest of my life, or if I had the choice to never eat my favorite food for the rest of my life. I would never eat my favorite food ever again because what would happen if you got sick, and you were just getting better you would want something bland instead of something that would be really harsh on your stomach.
ReplyDeleteI would rather never eat my favorite food for the rest of my life because if you only eat that one food you're going to get sick of it, that's why I don't like pizza.
ReplyDeleteReason 1. I would be able to try new foods.
Reason 2. If I ate one food for the rest of my life then I would be fat!
Reason 3. If I ate that one food for the rest of my life then i would never know about all the great foods there are in the world.
that is why I would rather never eat my favorite food for the rest of my life.
If I had to chose between never eating your favorite food again or always eating your favorite food I would rather never eat my favorite food again because there are many other good foods in the world that I would love to eat. Also I think I would get tried of eating my favorite food over and over again. Another reason why I would rather never eat my favorite food again is I would probably get sick or get fat. Also it isn't really much of a lost because what if i was in a situation and that restaurant didn't have my favorite food...what would I do? By the way my favorite food is hot dogs, and hot dogs sometimes give me headaches so I think i'm better off not eating hot dogs 3 times a day. It is not that I do not like hot dogs, it's just that I don't want them every day. So that is why I would rather never again eat my favorite food again instead of always eating hot dogs.
ReplyDeleteIf I were have to eat my favorite food for every day for the rest of my life or to never eat my favorite food again I would rather eat my favorite food every day for the rest of my life because first of all I love that food and if I never ate it again I would freak out. Second of all I will never get old of eating it. Third of all the I could really get the hang of cooking it. Fourth of all I would have so much of it I would never starve. That is why I would rather have my favorite food every day for the rest of my life.
ReplyDeleteIf I had to chose to either eat my favorite food every day for the rest of my life or never eat my favorite food again, I would choose to never eat my favorite food again. I chose to never eat my favorite food again because if I never ate my favorite food again then I would n't become tired of eating it like I would if I ate it every day for the rest of my life. Another reason I would rather never eat my favorite food again instead of eating my favorite food every day for the rest of my life is if I ate my favorite food every day for the rest of my life I would start to get a headache a stomach ache and I would start to feel sick, but if I never ate my favorite food again then I would never have to worry about getting a stomach ache a head ache or feeling sick. The last reason I would rather never eat my favorite food again instead of eating my favorite food every day for the rest of my life is because if I never stopped eating my favorite food then I would start to get sick and become unhealthy, but if I never ate my favorite food again then I wouldn't become unhealthy. That's why I would rather never eat my favorite food again instead of eating my favorite food every day for the rest of my life.
ReplyDeleteI am to choose between eating my favorite food (buttered pasta) everyday for the rest of my life or never eat it again. I choose to eat my favorite food everyday of my life. Why? Because, yes, I would get very tired or eating butter and pasta, but I wouldn't eat it for every meal. It just says for me to eat it everyday for the rest of my life, not at all meals. I think that if we couldn't eat our favorite food now we wouldn't be able to eat it when we are all grown up 20 years from today. We would probably want to eat these foods. I think that it is important for us to eat the foods we like. If we are forced to eat this favorite food of ours I promise you that everyone is going to want to eat buttered pasta (in my case). These are perfect thought out reasons why eating your favorite food everyday would be better than never eating it again.
ReplyDeleteP.S Even in Sydney's case she would never give up pancakes in her life!!
I would rather eat my favorite food every day for the rest of my life than not eat my favorite food ever again. My favorite food is pizza and my first reason is you could have it when ever you like! At school for lunch, in the morning for breakfast, or at night for dinner. My second reason is if you never had it again, you would always wonder what it tastes like and ask a bunch of annoying questions about what it tastes like. My last reason is when ever you are felling low, you can always eat your favorite food and it will make you feel a lot better. That is why I would rather eat my favorite food every day for the rest of my life than never eat my favorite food again.
ReplyDeleteI would never eat my favorite food again. The most obvious reason is that I would get as fat as a cow. Also it would get old. And my favorite food is Butterfingers candy, so i would be bouncing off the walls. I would rather never eat my favorite food again.
ReplyDeleteI would rather have any other food than my favorite food. I would rather have that because I might get sick of my favorite food. Also I would choose that because I have lots of other favorite foods that I can eat. Last I would choose that because my favorite food is unhealthy and I could get over weight if I ate it all the time. I would rather have a variety of food than just my favorite food.
ReplyDeleteI would rather eat my favorite food for the rest of my life than not eat it ever again. If I never ate my favorite food again I would start flipping out. Also the food is really good so why would you not want to eat it. Also you could eat it when ever you like at breakfast, lunch, and dinner. So basically you could eat it where ever or when ever you want it, and it is really good!
ReplyDeleteIf I had to choose between never eating your favorite food again or eat your favorite for the rest of your life, I would choose never eating my favorite food again because it is not healthy. Also you would not want to eat your favorite food again because you ate it everyday and never want to eat it. You would end up being fat and still you would have to eat your favorite food. Lastly, I like to eat a varity of foods.
ReplyDeleteI conclude to I would never eat my favorite food again.
DeleteIf I would rather eat my favorite food for the rest of my life or not eat it ever again. I would choose to never eat it ever again because my favorite food is cake and it is not good for me to eat it all the time or I would become FAT!!! You my also get sick because you have eaten to much of that one certain food. Lastly, you would be unhappy because if you are sick of that food every one else would be eating something different every meal.
ReplyDeleteIf I had to choose between eating my favorite food every day or not eating it again, I would have to choose to eat my favorite food every day.
ReplyDeleteMy reasons:
Since I like my mom's best home made pizza, it actually isn't that bad for me. And plus, you need the calories. If I never had pizza ever again, then I would probably be poisoned. We eat pizza a lot for dinner, and my mom's is the best. It's actually not that greasy. I also can make it extra healthy by putting spinach and broccoli on it, but the I wouldn't actually like it anymore I think. That is why I chose to eat my favorite food every day instead of never eating it again.
I would rather never eat my favorite food again than eat it for the rest of my life. I like a variety of things, and I would get sick and tired after a month of my favorite food. another reason is that I kind of think of my favorite food as a treat, so I would get greedy and selfish! Also I would get SO FAT!!! I don't want to be FAT. Those are the reasons I would want to never eat my favorite food again!
ReplyDeleteI would rather never have my favorite food again because if I could have it every day I would eat to much of it and it would make me fat and chunky.I would find other awesome foods instead of my favorite one. Anyways my favorite food is ice cream and it would really make me fat. I would get attention because I wouldn't eat it even though it is my favorite food. When you are feeling low you can think how it tastes. My parents could bribe me with it on my birthday.
ReplyDeleteIf I had to choose between eating my favorite food for the rest of the days of my life or never eat my favorite food again I would choose to eat my favorite food everyday for the rest of my life. My first reason is, (if your favorite food is junk food) you could burn off the calories that the junk food gives you. The second reason is, you could never taste the goodness of that food again. The last reason is, (my favorite food is ice cream) you could make a homemade ice cream that is healthy. That is why I chose to eat my favorite food daily for the rest of my life.
ReplyDeleteI would rather not eat my favorite food for the rest of my life than eating my favorite food every day for the rest of my life.
ReplyDeleteReason 1: I would get tired of my favorite food if I ate my favorite food for the rest of my life.
Reason 2: It would make me sick.
Reason 3: It would not taste good any more.
That is why I would rather not eat my favorite food for the rest of my life than eating my favorite food every day for the rest of my life.
I would rather never eat my favorite food again,here are my reasons why...Number one I might Burn out on my favorite food.Number Two since my favorite food is ice cream I would get sick.And last but not least I would throw up.I would not like eating ice cream for the rest of my life.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a choice between eating my favorite food everyday for the rest of my life or never eating it again I would never want to eat my favorite food ever again. First of all you might get sick of it and not want to eat it anymore. second if you gave up just one of your favorite foods your could still eat your other favorite foods. Third you will try something new and the thing you try might become your new favorite food. I would rather give up my favorite food than eat it for the rest of my life.
ReplyDeleteI would rather not eat my favorite food for the rest life then, eat my favorite food for the rest of my life. For example.1.) I would get tired of eating it all the time.2.) After eating it for a long time I would probably feel sick.3.) Would not be healthy for you.4.) I would feel like I want to not even eat any more.5.) I would probably feel really picky about what I am eating. And that is why I would rather not eat my favorite food for the rest of my life.
ReplyDeleteI would rather eat my favorite food for the rest of my life. I would rather eat my favorite food than never eat my favorite food again because it did not say you had to only eat that food. I love that food so much and I could eat it every. I always eat my favorite food and it gives me a lot of energy. so over all I love my favorite food so much and I can eat it for the rest of my life.
ReplyDeleteI would never eat it again because I would get tied of it and I would get really fat. Really if you ate anything too much you would get fat. Also it would waste a lot of just ONE food. That is why I would rather not eat only one food.
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